中考作文之中考英语作文跑题

中考英语作文跑题

【篇一：中考英语作文要用好提示词】

中考英语作文要用好提示词

2009年英语“中考说明”作文部分新增了样题,考生写英语作文要用

好提示词。

2008年中考英语作文有2道作文题:一是在汶川地震中,9岁学生林浩救了2名同学,然后步行7个小时到达安全地点。请考生就林浩的事迹,以“learn from the hero”为题,给学校英语专刊投稿。二是要求考生写一封回信。2篇作文都给出了提示词。

中考一直以来都是考记叙文,但2008年这篇属于“夹叙夹议”。这提醒了今年的中考生,要注意练习写议论文,而不能只拘泥于记叙文。在英语作文中,最容易出的错就是跑题,抓不住重点。如有些考生知道林浩的事迹,因此将作文未给的提示,如具体地震日期“5月12日”、林浩是班长、林浩被评为见义勇为少年等信息全部写上。这些虽不是不

能写,但置提示词于不顾,非要挑战高难度,显然是本末倒置。

中考作文不是考生新句型的“练兵场”,考生要确保写作的每一句话都是正确的,没必要非尝试长难句不可。提示词实际上已涵盖了文章的重点内容,考生只要按部就班按中文句子和提示词将句子翻译出来即可。可惜有的考生并不领情,舍提示词不用。此外,考生卷面尽量不要涂改,字迹要工整。一篇看起来杂乱不堪的文章,会让评卷老师没有耐心读下去,从而影响得分。

【篇二：中考英语作文话题之周围环境】

十、周围环境

（一）交通安全

（红灯）it’s very important for students to know about the traffic rules. when the red light is on, you must stop and you are not allowed to go on walking. even though you have something urgent to do or maybe you think the drivers dare not run over you. but do you know that rushing is at the cost of your life? so it’s not worth taking the risk.（绿灯）it’s safe to cross the road when the light is green. （黄灯）when the orange light is on, you must wait and be careful, because the red light will be on very soon.

here are some suggestions to protect ourselves. first, we should follow the traffic lights and can’t break the traffic rules. second, we’d better look left and right to make sure we are safe before stepping forward to cross the street. last but not least, don’t forget that it’s very dangerous to play on the street. from now on, not only i myself will strictly obey the traffic rules but i’ll also call on my classmates and my family to do so.（二）网络安全

利--- the internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. we can not only read news from home and abroad, but also get information, send emails, make phone calls, attend on-line schools, read various books and study english by ourselves. what’s more, people can enjoy music, watch sport matches, play all kinds of games and go shopping on-line.

弊--- however, every coin has two sides. it’s risky to make friends and shop on-line. what’s worse, some students who are addicted to the internet don’t study hard or even quit school.

个人观点--- for my part, i completely agree with the latter view that the internet has more disadvantages than advantages. it results in various computer crimes.

what is more, it is harmful to the growth of the young. something should be done as soon as possible to protect people from the negative effects of the internet.

（三）介绍沈城

最好的旅游季节 ---

the best time to visit shenyang is in spring which is neither too hot nor too cold, so spring is regarded as the perfect time of the year to be outside now that everything seems fresh and new.

介绍名胜古迹 ---

i suggest visiting places of interest like shenyang imperial palace .it is worth visiting where there are royal buildings, fantastic artwork for people to enjoy. 说明注意事项 ---

before you come to shenyang, you need to know that it is of great necessity for you to travel with a map since looking for ways in this large city could be confusing. besides, you must be patient about waiting in line or large crowds because