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运用主题句支撑句写一篇英语作文

运用主题句支撑句写一篇英语作文全文共6篇示例,供读者参考篇1My Summer VacationThis summer was the best summer ever! I had so much fun and did lots of exciting things. First, my family went on an amazing trip.We drove for two days to get to Florida. My little brother and I fought a lot in the car because he kept bugging me. But when we finally got there, it was totally worth it! We stayed in a big hotel right on the beach. Every morning, we would wake up and run straight into the ocean. The water was so warm and the waves were perfect for boogie boarding. My dad is a great boogie boarder and he taught me how to ride the waves too. In the afternoon, we'd lay on the sand and read books or build sandcastles. For dinner, we'd walk篇2My Summer VacationThis summer was the best summer ever! I had so much fun and did so many exciting things. Let me tell you all about it.First, my family went on an amazing trip to the beach. We stayed in a little beach house right by the ocean for a whole week. Every morning, I would wake up and run outside to feel the warm sand between my toes and watch the waves crashing on the shore. During the days, we spent hours playing in the ocean and building huge sandcastles. My little brother and I had contests to see who could dig the deepest hole. One day, the hole was so deep he actually fell in and got stuck! My dad had to pull him out. We all laughed so hard. In the evenings, we roasted marshmallows and told spooky stories around the campfire on the beach. It was paradise.Another highlight of my summer was going to summer camp for two weeks. I was a little nervous at first because I didn't know anyone there. But I quickly made a bunch of new friends who love the same things I do like hiking, swimming, and roasting s'mores. We had such a blast together! During the day at camp, we went on nature hikes, swam in the lake, played basketball and other sports, and did arts and crafts. One of my favorite activities was the talent show, where I did a magic show and made a bird appear out of thin air! Well, it was just a stuffedanimal bird, but all the other kids thought it was so cool. At night, we told ghost stories in our bunks, pulled pranks on the counselors, and had dance parties. I didn't want to leave at the end of the two weeks.What else did I do this summer? Oh yeah, I took some really fun classes too! I did a coding camp where I learned how to build my own computer games and apps. I made a silly app about walking dogs that made fart noises - which all my friends thought was hilarious of course. I also took a cooking class and learned how to make things like pancakes, omelets, and homemade pizza from scratch. My favorite thing I made was chocolate lava cakes for dessert one night. They were so rich and delicious! Now I want to be a chef or a computer programmer when I grow up. Or maybe both?My summer wasn't just all fun though. I also had to help out around the house with chores. Every week I had to mow the lawn, which I didn't love because it was so hot outside. I also helped my mom weed the garden, which was kind of boring but it felt good to get my hands dirty. And my dad made me wash his car every few weeks to teach me responsibility. It wasn't that fun, but at least I got an allowance!When I wasn't being productive, I just hung out and relaxed too. I loved laying outside and staring at the clouds, trying to find shapes like animals or superheroes. My friends and I had lots of lemonade stands and sold snacks to people walking around the neighborhood. We didn't make much money, but we thought we were real business people. At night, I read a ton of books in my treehouse or watched movies with my family. We made a big pile of blankets and pillows in the living room and had movie marathons sometimes. Those were the best nights.I also got to celebrate my birthday over the summer, which was so much fun! We had a big sleepover party with a bonfire, s'mores, scary movies, and a talent show in our backyard. All my friends came over and we stayed up all night giggling and having pillow fights. For my birthday present, I got a new bike with rainbow tassels on the handlebars. I rode that bike every single day after that until my legs were sore. What a amazing way to turn ten!Looking back, this summer was everything I could have dreamed of and more. Between going to the beach, summer camp, taking classes, doing chores, having a birthday party, and hanging out with friends, it was one adventure after another. I made so many wonderful memories that I'll never forget.Summer, I'm gonna miss you! But I can't wait for next year to make more epic memories.篇3My Amazing Beach VacationThis summer, I went on the best vacation ever! My family and I went to the beach for an entire week. It was so much fun playing in the ocean and building sandcastles. I'll never forget this incredible trip.The drive to the beach took forever. We had to be in the car for five whole hours! At first, I thought I would be really bored. However, my parents let me bring some of my favorite toys and books to keep me entertained. I played endless games of "I Spy" with my little brother. By the time we finally arrived, I was bursting with excitement.As soon as we checked into our beach house, I raced outside. The bright sun was shining, and the sand was perfectly warm between my toes. The ocean looked like a sparkling,never-ending pool. I couldn't wait to jump in! My dad quickly inflated the inner tubes and beach balls he had packed. Then, my whole family ran towards the waves together. The salty water was cool and refreshing. We spent hours splashing around andriding the bigger waves. I even saw a school of little fish swimming nearby!In the evenings after swimming, my favorite activity was building sandcastles. I would use my beach toys to sculpt tall towers, decorate with seashells, and dig moats all around. One night, I made an entire fortress! My sandcastles always turned out better than my brother's. He would get frustrated and smash them. By the end of the week, we had created a whole sandy city full of buildings and structures.Another fun part of the beach was hunting for seashells and unique rocks. My mom bought me a special shell collecting bag, and I would scour the shoreline looking for treasures. I found so many beautiful shells in all shapes, sizes, and colors. Some were pink, some were white and pearly, and I even found a few tan ones with awesome stripes! Alongside the shells, I collected a bunch of cool rocks too. Some were very smooth from being tumbled around by the ocean. Others had interesting shapes or even had holes through the middle. I kept all my treasures in a big bucket back at our beach house.Whenever I got hungry from playing outside, we would head back inside for snacks and lunch. My mom had packed a huge cooler full of sandwiches, fruits, veggies, and cookies. My favoritewas the smashed peanut butter and banana sandwiches. They were so messy but absolutely delicious! We would eat our picnic lunches out on the deck with an amazing view of the crashing waves. For dinner, my dad would fire up the grill and cook juicy hamburgers and hot dogs. We always had a side of my mom's famous macaroni salad to go along with them. I loved eating dinner outside while watching the colorful sunset over the water.On the last night of our vacation, we had a big bonfire right on the beach! My dad and brother gathered tons of wood and built the fire up really high. We roasted gooey marshmallows over the flames and made delicious s'mores. I probably ate about ten of them – I couldn't get enough! As it got darker, we could see millions of bright stars twinkling in the night sky. My parents pointed out some famous constellations to us. We stayed up way past my bedtime, singing songs, telling stories, and just enjoying the warmth of the fire. When it was finally time for bed, I fell asleep quicker than ever before.The morning we had to leave was so sad. I didn't want to go home! I slowly packed up my bucket of shells and rocks, taking one last look at each one. I also gathered all the sandcastle tools and toys I had scattered across the beach throughout the week. I spent one last hour playing in the waves and making a finalsandcastle. Eventually, it was time to go. I gave the beach one big hug and wave goodbye as we pulled away. My summer beach vacation was utterly perfect in every way. I made so many wonderful memories that I'll never forget. I can't wait to go back again next year!篇4My Awesome Summer VacationThis summer was the best ever! I had so much fun and did lots of cool things. (Theme sentence)First, my family went on a huge road trip. We drove all the way from New York to Florida to visit my cousins. In the car, my little brother and I played games like I Spy and the License Plate Game to pass the time. We also stopped at some really neat places along the way, like the world's biggest toy museum! There were millions of toys from over the years. My favorite was the giant Etch-a-Sketch that was taller than me! (Supporting sentences)When we finally made it to Florida, we spent a whole week at my cousin's house. They live right near the beach, so we went swimming and built sandcastles every single day. One time, we even saw a school of dolphins jumping through the waves! Theirbackyard has a pool too, and we had super soaking water gun fights. I got my cousin's dog all wet and she did not like that very much. Whoops! (Supporting sentences)Another awesome part of summer was going to Camp Lakewood for two weeks. I was a little nervous at first because I had never gone away to camp before without my family. But I made a ton of new friends and we did really cool activities together. We went canoeing and learned how to paddleboat. We made tie-dye shirts and lanyards at arts and crafts. I even got to sleep in a cabin in the woods! At night we roasted s'mores and told spooky ghost stories. (Supporting sentences)My favorite part was the giant waterslide and pool at camp. The waterslide was a humongous swirly one that looped all the way around itself. I went down it about a million times! I also played a lot of pool games with my friends like chicken fights and marco polo. One time we had a huge water balloon fight that was an epic battle. The counselors even joined in and we all got completely soaked. It was a major mess but so much fun! (Supporting sentences)The best day of the whole summer though was definitely my birthday. I turned 9 years old, which is practically a grown up! For my party, I invited all my friends over for a backyard campingadventure. We pitched tents all over the backyard and had a giant bonfire. We roasted hot dogs and made s'mores. We even had a spooky nighttime scavenger hunt where we had to find all the pieces to a puzzle using only our flashlights. (Supporting sentences)My friends thought it would be super funny to jump out and try to scare me during the scavenger hunt. They popped out from behind trees and bushes saying "Booooooo!" in their scariest voices. I just laughed at them though because I'm way too brave to get scared that easily. Once we found all the pieces, we built the puzzle which ended up being a giant picture of Bigfoot! How crazy is that? After the bonfire we all slept out in the tent village. I'll never forget that night of fun with my best friends. (Supporting sentences)So as you can see, this was probably the most exciting and jam-packed summer ever. I got to travel to new places, go to camp, and have the best birthday celebration. I can't wait to make more awesome memories next summer too! (Concluding sentence)篇5My Favorite Hobby - Playing SportsTopic Sentence: I really love playing sports because it's so much fun and keeps me active and healthy.Supporting Sentences:There are lots of different sports that I enjoy. Soccer is probably my favorite because I love running around and kicking the ball. Basketball is also really fun, especially when I make a basket. I'm not as good at baseball, but I still like trying to hit the ball.The best part about playing sports is getting exercise without even realizing it. When I'm running up and down the field or court, I'm working my muscles and getting my heart pumping. Exercise is important for staying fit and avoiding things like obesity.Topic Sentence: Playing on a team helps me learn valuable life lessons too.Supporting Sentences:Being part of a team teaches me about cooperating with others and working together towards a common goal. We have to strategize and communicate effectively if we want to win games. It also shows me the importance of practice andperseverance. The more I practice my dribbling, passing, and shooting, the better I get over time.Sometimes we win games and sometimes we lose. Losing isn't fun, but it teaches me how to be a good sport and not get too upset or angry. I'm learning that you can't win everything in life. The important thing is trying your best and having fun playing the game.Topic Sentence: My parents and coaches encourage me to play sports for many good reasons.Supporting Sentences:My mom and dad say sports will help keep me out of trouble by giving me productive ways to spend my free time. Instead of sitting around playing video games, I'm staying active. They also think being on a team will teach me discipline and how to follow rules and instructions from the coaches.The coaches emphasize how important it is to eat a nutritious diet with lots of fruits, vegetables, and lean proteins. That's because junk food won't give me the energy I need during practices and games. Learning about nutrition now will help me develop healthy eating habits.Topic Sentence: Overall, I'm so grateful my parents signed me up for sports when I was little.Supporting Sentences:Being involved in athletics from a young age has provided me with so many great opportunities for physical activity, teamwork, and fun. I've made lots of new friends on my different sports teams over the years. We always have such a blast practicing together, going to games and tournaments, and having team parties and celebrations.Even when I'm an adult, I hope to continue playing recreational sports for enjoyment and exercise. The lessons I've learned about persistence, cooperation, and healthy living will benefit me for the rest of my life. Playing sports is more than just a hobby - it's a wonderful way to grow and challenge myself. I feel very lucky.篇6My Summer VacationThis summer was the best vacation ever! I had so much fun and did so many cool things. Let me tell you all about it.First, I went camping with my family. That was probably my favorite part of the whole summer. We went to a campground up in the mountains near a big lake. The first night we got there, we set up our tent and built a campfire to make s'mores. My dad taught me how to roast the perfect marshmallow – not too crispy on the outside but nice and melty inside. Yum!We did lots of fun outdoor activities like hiking, swimming, and fishing. On our hike, we saw a family of deer right on the trail! We stayed very quiet so we wouldn't scare them away. I loved swimming and playing in the lake when it got hot out. And even though I didn't catch any fish, I had a great time sitting on the shore trying.The best part though was sleeping in the tent and staring up at all the stars at night. I'd never seen so many! My dad pointed out the different constellations to me. We even saw a few shooting stars. It was magical. Camping was an amazing adventure.Next, we visited my grandparents for a few weeks. They live on a farm out in the country, which is really fun and different from my life in the city. In the mornings, my grandpa would let me help feed the chickens and collect their eggs for breakfast. I loved holding the tiny chicks. They were so soft and cute!My grandma taught me how to make her special strawberry jam from the berries she grows in her garden. We spent hours in the kitchen cooking and baking together. I got to lick the spoon when we made chocolate chip cookies - my favorite! I miss my grandma's amazing cooking so much.After that, we made a trip to the beach for a family reunion. It was really exciting getting to see all my aunts, uncles, and cousins that I hadn't seen in a long time. We had a huge barbecue and played fun games like frisbee and volleyball on the sand. The water was freezing cold at first, but after a while I got used to it. My cousin and I had an awesome sandcastle competition - mine was definitely the best!At night, we had a big bonfire on the beach and roasted marshmallows, just like camping. We told silly ghost stories and looked at the stars together. My little cousin got scared by one of the stories and started crying, so I had to protect her from the made-up monsters. I felt like such a brave big kid!Overall, it was such an unforgettable summer. I made so many wonderful memories with my family. We got to experience the outdoors through camping, country life at my grandparents' farm, and the beach for our reunion. Those times laughing together, trying new things, and exploring the world around usare moments I'll cherish forever. I'm so lucky to have a family that makes vacations this fun and special.I'm really sad summer is over, but I can't wait for my next adventure! Maybe next year we'll go somewhere brand new and I'll have even more cool stories to tell. I already can't wait for summer vacation again.。

爱国主题作文开头结尾神仙句

爱国主题作文开头结尾神仙句

爱国主题作文开头结尾神仙句《我爱我的祖国》
开头:
小朋友们,你们知道吗?我们的祖国就像一个大大的温暖的家,我们在这个家里快乐地长大。

我爱我的祖国,就像爱我的妈妈一样!
中间:
我为什么这么爱祖国呢?因为祖国给了我们好多好多。

比如,我们能在宽敞明亮的教室里读书,能在大大的操场上玩耍。

还有呀,祖国有美丽的风景。

像长城,它长长的,弯弯曲曲的,像一条巨龙趴在山上。

还有黄河,河水滚滚向前,那声音可响亮啦!
而且,每当遇到困难的时候,祖国都会来帮助我们。

像今年疫情的时候,很多医生叔叔阿姨不顾危险去帮助生病的人,大家一起努力,打败了病毒。

结尾:
小朋友们,让我们一起好好学习,长大了为祖国做更多的事情,让祖国变得更美好!
《祖国在我心中》
开头:
亲爱的小伙伴们,你们心里有没有一个特别重要的地方呀?对我来说,那就是我们的祖国!祖国一直在我心里,像一颗闪闪发亮的星星。

中间:
祖国有好多了不起的地方。

比如说,我们有超级快的高铁,坐上去“嗖”的一下就到了别的地方。

还有神舟飞船,能飞到太空去,这多厉害呀!
我还听过很多爱国的故事呢。

像抗日英雄王二小,他可勇敢啦,为了保护大家,把敌人带进了埋伏圈。

还有钱学森爷爷,他在美国学习了很多厉害的知识,然后回到祖国,帮助我们国家变得更强大。

结尾:
小伙伴们,我们要爱我们的祖国,从身边的小事做起,爱护环境、尊敬长辈,一起让祖国越来越棒!。

写一篇关于大学主题句的作文

写一篇关于大学主题句的作文

写一篇关于大学主题句的作文篇一《大学里那些奇葩室友》上大学的时候,那可真是一段特别的经历,尤其是和室友们的相处,那故事可多了去了。

我的舍友们那真是各具特色,活像是从漫画里走出来的人物。

就比如说我的一个室友,暂且叫他大胖吧。

这大胖人如其名,身材那是相当圆润。

他有一个爱好,就是特别喜欢屯食物。

他的床底下就像是一个小型超市,各种零食应有尽有。

有一回,我们宿舍突然遭遇了“食物危机”,大家都找不到吃的,各个饿得前胸贴后背。

这时候大胖的床底下就像是宝藏被发现了一样,他非常慷慨地把他的食物都拿出来分给我们。

不过他也有一点小私心,他拿出食物的时候,眼睛一直盯着那包他最爱的牛肉干,嘴上不停地说“这个可好吃了,你们少吃点啊”,但手上还是把食物分给大家了。

大胖还有一个独特的入睡习惯。

他每次睡觉都会打呼噜,那呼噜声就像打雷一样。

刚开始我们都受不了,想尽各种办法想要叫醒他让他别打了。

试过用枕头捂他,轻拍他,可都不管用。

后来啊,我们也就习惯了,甚至觉得没有他的呼噜声还睡不着觉了。

还有我们宿舍的学霸老张,他真的是无时无刻不在学习。

有次放假大家都在商量着去哪里玩,他却计划着要在宿舍把图书馆没看完的专业书再细细研读。

他看书的时候超级专注,周围发生什么他好像都不知道。

我有次想逗他,就悄悄拿了一本漫画书盖在他头上,他居然都没发现,还在那眉头紧蹙地思考书中的知识点呢。

在大学这个小世界里,和这些室友在一起的日子充满了欢乐和意想不到的惊喜。

他们虽然各有各的怪癖,但也正是这些独特之处,让大学生活变得更加丰富多彩,这些回忆也将永远伴随着我。

篇二《大学里的社团奇遇记》大学社团可是大学生活不可或缺的一部分啊。

我刚进大学的时候,就像只没头的苍蝇一样,对各种社团充满了好奇,于是就参加了一个看起来特别高大上的社团——摄影社。

摄影社的第一次活动是去学校的后山拍摄日出。

我那天还特意起了个大早,背着我那刚买的有点小贵的相机就去了。

到了后山才发现,我自认为对摄影有点天赋这种想法真是太天真了。

爱国主题作文开头结尾神仙句

爱国主题作文开头结尾神仙句

爱国主题作文开头结尾神仙句1. “祖国啊,你就像母亲一样温暖着我们每一个人!开头我这样写,结尾我会说,祖国,我们永远爱你!就像孩子永远热爱母亲!”例子:开篇直接写“祖国啊,你就像母亲一样温暖着我们每一个人,给我们依靠,给我们力量。

”结尾“祖国,我们永远爱你!就像孩子永远热爱母亲!”2. “爱国的心,那是燃烧的火焰!开头这么一亮,结尾来一句,这火焰永远不会熄灭!”例子:开头“爱国的心,那是燃烧的火焰,照亮我们前行的路。

”结尾“这火焰永远不会熄灭,一直照亮我们的未来!”3. “国家,那是我们的根啊!开头点明,结尾就写,我们怎能不深深扎根于此呢!”例子:开头“国家,那是我们的根啊,让我们得以茁壮成长。

”结尾“我们怎能不深深扎根于此呢,永远守护我们的根!”4. “爱国之情,如滔滔江水连绵不绝!开头这么起,结尾说,这江水永不停息地奔腾吧!”例子:开头“爱国之情,如滔滔江水连绵不绝,在我们心中涌动。

”结尾“这江水永不停息地奔腾吧,带着我们的热爱!”5. “祖国,你就是那明亮的灯塔!开头就这么定,结尾跟上,永远指引我们前行的方向!”例子:开头“祖国,你就是那明亮的灯塔,在黑暗中为我们照亮。

”结尾“永远指引我们前行的方向,永不迷失!”6. “爱国,是刻在我们骨子里的情怀呀!开头一写,结尾来一句,这情怀怎能不深厚呢!”例子:开头“爱国,是刻在我们骨子里的情怀呀,与生俱来。

”结尾“这情怀怎能不深厚呢,伴随我们一生!”7. “我们的国家,那是梦想的摇篮啊!开头这样,结尾说,让我们在这摇篮里实现梦想吧!”例子:开头“我们的国家,那是梦想的摇篮啊,孕育着无数希望。

”结尾“让我们在这摇篮里实现梦想吧,为国家添彩!”8. “爱国,不就是那最动人的乐章吗!开头奏响,结尾高呼,让这乐章永远奏响吧!”例子:开头“爱国,不就是那最动人的乐章吗,激昂澎湃。

”结尾“让这乐章永远奏响吧,震撼人心!”9. “祖国是我们永远的依靠,开头这么说,结尾来一句,我们也永远是祖国的骄傲啊!”例子:开头“祖国是我们永远的依靠,给予我们勇气。

关于我的梦想主题作文的好句段落

关于我的梦想主题作文的好句段落

关于我的梦想主题作文的好句段落英文回答:Dreams are ethereal tapestries woven with the intricate threads of our innermost desires, aspirations, and boundless imagination. They are portals to uncharted realms, where our thoughts take flight and our spirits soar. Dreams ignite the spark of creativity, fuel our ambitions, and inspire us to reach beyond the ordinary. Like celestial beacons, they guide us towards our true potential, illuminating the path to fulfillment and purpose.Through dreams, we glimpse the hidden depths of our souls, unlocking the mysteries that lie within. They unveil our vulnerabilities, our strengths, and our hidden talents. Dreams empower us to explore our fears, confront our limitations, and cultivate resilience. They become the crucible in which our character is forged, shaping us into individuals of unwavering determination and unwavering belief.As we embrace our dreams, we embark on a transformative journey of self-discovery and personal growth. They challenge us to step outside our comfort zones, embrace the unknown, and push the boundaries of our capabilities. Dreams ignite a fire within us, propelling us forward with unwavering passion and relentless determination.The pursuit of our dreams is not without its obstacles. Doubt, fear, and adversity will inevitably cross our paths. Yet, it is in these moments of adversity that our dreams truly take shape. They become the catalyst for perseverance, resilience, and the unwavering belief in ourselves.Every dream, regardless of its size or perceived impossibility, has the potential to transform our lives. They inspire us to strive for excellence, to reach beyond our perceived limitations, and to leave an enduring mark on the world. Dreams are the aspirational fuel that propels us forward, empowering us to create a reality that is worthyof our boundless imagination.中文回答:梦想是一幅幅妙不可言的画卷,用我们内心最深处的渴望、抱负和无穷无尽的想象力编织而成。

满分作文中心主旨句

满分作文中心主旨句

满分作文中心主旨句
今天语文课,老师说要写作文,主题是“我的梦想”。

我有些愁眉不展,因为我有太多梦想,不知道要写哪个。

我看着窗外远处飞翔的小鸟,梦想自己也能像它们一样自由地翱翔天际,去看一看蓝天白云,去看看远方的山川河流。

我还爱画画,梦想自己成为一名画家,画出世界上最美的画。

我盯着远处书桌上的机器人模型,梦想自己也能发明创造,可以制造出厉害的机器人。

我突然想起老师说过,写作文要有一个中心主旨句,那像是一颗闪亮的星星,照亮整个作文。

我的“闪亮星星”再次出现了!我的梦想是,长大后成为蓝月帝国一名科学家,探索宇宙的奥秘,为人类做出巨大的贡献。

我会努力学习,认真思考,不断探索,我坚信我的梦想会实现!
我握着笔,得意地在纸上写下我的梦想,它像一颗颗闪亮的星星,妆点着我的未来。

满分作文中心主旨句

满分作文中心主旨句

满分作文中心主旨句说到满分作文,那可真是让无数学生又爱又恨。

爱它,是因为如果能写出一篇满分作文,那得多有成就感啊;恨它,是因为要达到这个高度,实在是太难啦!就拿我自己的经历来说吧,曾经为了能在作文上取得高分,我可是下了不少功夫。

记得有一次语文考试,作文题目是“我的梦想”。

看到这个题目,我心里一阵窃喜,心想:这还不简单,谁还没个梦想啊!于是,我大笔一挥,就开始写起来。

我写自己想成为一名科学家,为人类的进步做出巨大的贡献。

我在作文里描述了自己如何在实验室里埋头苦干,如何攻克一个又一个科学难题。

我觉得自己写得那叫一个精彩,心里还暗暗得意,这次说不定能拿个高分。

可等试卷发下来,我傻眼了。

作文分数惨不忍睹,别说高分了,及格都勉强。

我拿着试卷,满心疑惑地去找老师。

老师看了看我的作文,皱着眉头说:“你这作文啊,内容是挺丰富,但就是没有一个明确的中心主旨句,让人看了不知道你到底重点想说啥。

”我当时就懵了,中心主旨句?这是啥玩意儿?老师耐心地给我解释:“中心主旨句就是你这篇作文的核心观点,是你最想表达的东西。

就像一个人的灵魂,没有灵魂,这人就没了精气神。

作文也一样,没有中心主旨句,就会显得杂乱无章。

”我似懂非懂地点点头,回到座位上,开始仔细琢磨老师的话。

我重新翻开自己的作文,这才发现,确实如老师所说,我写了一大堆东西,但是没有一句能清晰地表达出我的核心观点。

为了弄明白这个中心主旨句到底该怎么写,我开始大量阅读优秀的作文。

我发现,那些满分作文都有一个共同的特点,就是在开头或者结尾,总会有那么一句简洁明了、直击人心的话,让读者一下子就能明白作者的意图。

比如说,有一篇写母爱的作文,开头就是“母爱,是世界上最无私的情感,它如春日暖阳,温暖着我的心田。

”就这一句话,直接点明了主题,让读者知道作者接下来要写的就是关于母爱的故事。

还有一篇写友谊的作文,结尾是“真正的友谊,经得起时间的考验,它是我人生中最宝贵的财富。

”这句话不仅总结了全文,还升华了主题,让人对友谊有了更深的思考。

适合主题的作文好句摘抄

适合主题的作文好句摘抄

适合主题的作文好句摘抄
晨光真的美,天边那一抹金色,像是大师笔下的画,看得人心
里都亮了。

那时候,整个世界都静悄悄的,只有风在树梢上轻轻吹过,凉快得很。

雨滴打在窗户上,滴滴答答的,就像是大自然在唱歌。

雨水冲
走了城市的吵闹,心里一下子就平静了。

晚上抬头看星星,银河就像一条白带子,星星多得数不清,好
像在跟你眨眼睛。

看着这么大的宇宙,感觉自己就像个蚂蚁那么小,但也让人想了很多很多。

那棵老树啊,不知道站了多少年了,看着它就觉得时间过得很快。

它的叶子那么多,好像都在说以前的故事,有开心的也有难过的。

到了黄昏,夕阳红得跟血一样,把半边天都染红了。

看着那一
抹夕阳,心里有点难过,但也觉得充满了希望。

这一刻真的很美,
让人觉得生命好珍贵,得好好珍惜才行。

英语主题句作文模板

英语主题句作文模板

英语主题句作文模板英文回答:Topic Sentence Essay Template。

1. Introduction。

Hook: Begin with a captivating statement or question to grab the reader's attention.Background Information: Provide context and establish the topic.Thesis Statement: State your argument or main point.2. Body Paragraph 1。

Topic Sentence: Introduce the first supporting evidence for your thesis.Supporting Evidence: Provide specific examples, research, or facts to support your claim.Analysis: Explain how the evidence supports your argument.3. Body Paragraph 2。

Topic Sentence: Introduce the second supporting evidence for your thesis.Supporting Evidence: Provide more specific examples, research, or facts to further support your argument.Analysis: Explain how the evidence strengthens your argument.4. Body Paragraph 3 (Optional)。

Topic Sentence: Introduce a contrasting viewpointor additional evidence.Counterargument: Present an opposing view andrefute it with evidence.Further Evidence (Optional): Provide additional support to reinforce your main argument.5. Conclusion。

阅读词语记主题句的作文

阅读词语记主题句的作文

阅读词语记主题句的作文在学习的道路上,有一项看似简单却又充满挑战的任务——通过阅读词语记住主题句。

这事儿啊,可给我带来了不少有趣的经历和深刻的体会。

记得有一次,老师布置了一篇阅读理解,文章内容冗长复杂,而我们的任务是从一堆密密麻麻的文字中提炼出关键的主题句。

这对于当时的我来说,简直就是一场“头脑风暴”。

我拿到文章,就像掉进了一个文字的迷宫。

那些词语一个接一个地蹦进我的眼里,可我却感觉它们在跟我捉迷藏,怎么也抓不住重点。

我瞪大眼睛,逐字逐句地读着,心里不停地念叨:“主题句啊主题句,你到底藏在哪儿呢?”读着读着,我发现自己的注意力开始分散,思绪飘到了九霄云外。

我想到了放学后和小伙伴们一起玩耍的快乐时光,想到了妈妈做的美味饭菜,就是没法集中精力在这篇文章上。

我使劲摇了摇头,试图把这些杂念甩出去,重新把注意力拉回到眼前的文字上。

好不容易静下心来,我开始尝试用老师教的方法,先快速浏览一遍文章,找出一些可能是关键的词语。

这一看,还真发现了几个有点“特别”的词,比如“核心”“关键”“重点”。

我心里一阵窃喜,觉得自己好像找到了通往主题句的钥匙。

于是,我围绕着这些词语,再仔细地去读相关的句子。

可没想到,这些句子也是弯弯绕绕,让我摸不着头脑。

我不禁有些着急了,额头上冒出了细细的汗珠,手里的笔也被我捏得紧紧的。

就在我几乎要放弃的时候,我突然看到了一个句子,它的表述简洁明了,而且和之前找到的那些关键词语都有着紧密的联系。

“哎呀,会不会就是它呢?”我心里嘀咕着。

我又反复读了几遍这个句子,越读越觉得它有那个“味儿”。

确定了主题句之后,我感觉整个人都轻松了不少,就像在黑暗中摸索了好久,终于看到了一丝光亮。

不过,这还没完,为了确保自己没有找错,我又重新回顾了一下整篇文章,看看这个主题句是否能够很好地概括文章的主要内容。

经过一番仔细的检查,我终于确定自己找对了。

那一刻,我心里别提有多高兴了,就像是打了一场胜仗,满满的成就感。

从那以后,我对于阅读词语记主题句这件事有了新的认识。

作文素材Ⅰ18个热门主题的神仙般开头与结尾万能句式,这些作文素材简直美爆了!!收藏+摘抄+细读……

作文素材Ⅰ18个热门主题的神仙般开头与结尾万能句式,这些作文素材简直美爆了!!收藏+摘抄+细读……

一、适用主题:【感恩】开头:落叶在空中盘旋,谱写着一曲感恩的乐章,那是大树对滋养它的大地的感恩;白云在蔚蓝的天空中飘荡,绘画着那一幅幅感人的画面,那是白云对哺育它的蓝天的感恩。

因为感恩,才会有这个多彩的社会;因为感恩,才会有真挚的友情。

因为感恩,才让我们懂得了生命的真谛。

结尾:着一颗感恩的心,去看待社会,看待父母,看待亲朋,你将会发现自己是多么快乐,放开你的胸怀,让霏霏细雨洗刷你心灵的污染。

学会感恩,因为这会使世界更美好,使生活更充实。

二、适用主题:【成功】开头:大厦巍然屹立,是因为有坚强的支柱,理想和信仰就是人生大厦的支柱;航船破浪前行,是因为有指示方向的罗盘,理想和信仰就是人生航船的罗盘;列车奔驰千里,是因为有引导它的铁轨,理想和信仰就是人生列车的铁轨。

结尾:风雨过后,眼前会是鸥翔鱼游的水天一色。

走出荆棘,前面就是铺满鲜花的康庄大道。

登上山顶,脚下便是积翠如云的空蒙山色。

在这个世界上,一星陨落,黯淡不了星空灿烂;一花凋零,荒芜不了。

三、适用主题:【惜时】开头:时间伴随它留下的痕迹而飞逝。

它从你的指缝中流过;从你的话语中掠过;从你的眼前溜过;从你的脚边划过。

就这样它在你无意中飞走了。

在这无意中,你又何曾知道你做了些什么?结尾:时间如此短暂而又如此公平,不同的人对待它截然不同,有人视时间为生命,分秒必争,为人类做出了许多贡献;而有人却不然,他们碌碌无为,虚度光阴,时间的价值在他们的身上完全消失了,这样的人生又有何意义而言呢?时间就是如此,如果你是一位智者,请珍惜每分每秒吧!四、适用主题:【乐观】开头:当每一天的太阳射进窗户时,我快乐;当经过一番冥思苦想后攻克难题时,我快乐;当看到别人因为我的帮助而露出笑脸时,我快乐。

我是一个爱创造快乐的人,快乐,会因为我或者你而流动、而传播。

结尾:快乐如清风,吹走笼罩在人们心头上的乌云;快乐如美酒,酝酿得越久味道越醇香;快乐如小溪,只有流入大海才更能感受到自己的存在;快乐如饮料,一经打开便冒出诱人的沁凉。

主题句加支撑句的英语作文

主题句加支撑句的英语作文

The Power of Perseverance inOvercoming ChallengesIn the journey of life, perseverance stands as a beacon of hope, guiding us through the treacherous terrains of challenges and obstacles. It is the unwavering commitment to a goal, despite the presence of difficulties and setbacks. This essential quality is not only the key to overcoming challenges but also a testament to one's resilience and determination.Firstly, perseverance helps us to stay focused on our goals. When faced with challenges, it is easy to lose sight of the end goal and become overwhelmed by the difficulties at hand. However, perseverance allows us to maintain aclear perspective, reminding us that every step forward, even if small, brings us closer to our desired outcome. By staying focused, we are able to make calculated decisions and take meaningful actions that lead us towards our goals. Secondly, perseverance builds resilience. Challenges and failures are inevitable in life, but it is our response to them that defines our character. Perseverance teaches us to view these setbacks as learning experiences rather thandefeats. It instills in us a sense of tenacity, enabling us to bounce back stronger after each fall. Over time, this resilience transforms us into more resilient individuals, capable of weathering even the most stormy of challenges. Furthermore, perseverance fosters a positive mindset. When we persevere, we are constantly reminding ourselves that we have the power to overcome any obstacle. This positive self-belief helps us to maintain a optimistic attitude, even in the face of seemingly insurmountable challenges. A positive mindset not only improves our mental well-being but also enhances our problem-solving abilities, making it easier for us to find solutions to the challenges we encounter.Moreover, perseverance leads to personal growth. As we persevere through challenges, we are constantly pushing our boundaries and expanding our capabilities. We learn new skills, gain valuable insights, and develop a deeper understanding of ourselves and the world. This personal growth not only enhances our self-esteem but also prepares us for future challenges that may arise.In conclusion, perseverance is a crucial quality that enables us to overcome challenges and achieve our goals. It helps us to stay focused, builds resilience, fosters a positive mindset, and leads to personal growth. Therefore, it is essential that we cultivate this quality in ourselves and remain perseverant in pursuit of our dreams and aspirations. By doing so, we can navigate the challenges of life with confidence and emerge stronger and more resilient on the other side.**坚持的力量:克服挑战的关键**在人生的旅途中,坚持如同一座指引希望的灯塔,引领我们穿越充满挑战和障碍的艰险地形。

高考模拟主题作文写作:世界上只有一种英雄主义,那就是在认清了生命的真相后依然热爱它。

高考模拟主题作文写作:世界上只有一种英雄主义,那就是在认清了生命的真相后依然热爱它。

高考模拟主题作文写作:世界上只有一种英雄主义,那就是在认清了生命的真相后依然热爱它。

作文材料rm = OS 罗曼•罗二--世界上只有一种英雄主义,那就是在认清了生命的真相后依然热爰它。

这句名言表达形象,意义深刻,它会引发我们不同的联想或感悟,请结合这句名言写篇不少于800字的文章。

范文展示何以解忧?唯有乐观!张馨罗曼・罗兰有言:世界上只有一种英雄主义,那就是在认清了生命的真相后依然热爰它。

"是的,我们的生命,有一种真相,那便是:漫漫人生,多有忧苦。

所以,何以解忧?唯有乐观。

无论我们处于多么严酷的境遇之中, 心头都不应为悲观的思想所萦绕,如此,我们才能获得一个有意义的丰盈的人生。

何以解忧?唯有乐观。

人生路上充满疾病、痛苦、挫折、磨难,即便是这样的人生,我们也要百倍珍惜。

史铁生,21岁的年华瘫痪了双腿,颓丧绝望的他整日静坐轮椅,流连地坛,责问苍天,可是这又有什么用呢?当他在地坛终于参透"死是一个必然降临的节日",当他想明白为什么要活,当他明白了"生命的真相其实就是与困境周旋”的时候,他用写作敲开了生活的大门。

《我与地坛》向我们展示了一个生命破茧成蝶、浴火重生的心路历程。

《我的遥远的清平湾》《扶轮问路》等一系列作品昭示了他人生的价值,他在苦涩的人生中品出了甜蜜。

从而,史铁生成为了我们心目中的英雄。

何以解忧?唯有乐观。

因为当一切"生命的真相"成为事实的时候,你再沮丧再悲伤也于事无补,倒不如平静接受,让它成为人生的砺石,打磨出坚强傲岸的自我。

所以,当柳宗元面对残酷的政治迫害和艰苦的生活环李世靖罗曼・罗兰曾发出这样的感叹:世界上只有一种真正的英雄主义,那就是认清生命的真相后依然热爰它。

诚如斯语,生命本残酷,直面成英雄一一当我们认识到生命的残酷真相后,如果能不因此颓废,而是积极寻找生活中的亮点,或制造亮点,使生活变得可爰,这才是真正的英雄。

是的,没有人一生会被养在恒温玻璃罐里。

高中语文作文优秀作文语段及常见主题好句好段

高中语文作文优秀作文语段及常见主题好句好段

高中语文作文优秀作文语段及常见主题好句好段满分作文佳句及适用主题1、巴尔扎克说过“不幸,是天才的进升阶梯,信徒的洗礼之水,弱者的无底深渊”。

风雨过后,眼前会是鸥翔鱼游的天水一色;走出荆棘,前面就是铺满鲜花的康庄大道;登上山顶,脚下便是积翠如云的空蒙山色。

在这个世界上,一星陨落,黯淡不了星空灿烂,一花凋零,荒芜不了整个春天。

人生要尽全力度过每一关,不管遇到什么困难不可轻言放弃。

适用主题:坚持、追逐梦想、克服困难、信念等。

只有启程,才会到达理想的目的地,只有拼搏,才会获得辉煌的成功,只有播种,才会有收获。

只有追求,才会品味堂堂正正的人生。

适用主题:追逐梦想、成功等。

3、冰心说道:“爱在左,同情在右,走在生命的两旁,随时撒种,随时开花,将这一径长途,点缀得香花弥漫,使穿枝拂叶的行人,踏着荆棘,不觉得痛苦,有泪可落,却不是悲凉。

”适用主题:亲情、爱、人生追求、信念等。

4、坚持的昨天叫立足,坚持的今天叫进取,坚持的明天叫成功。

适用主题:坚持。

5、喜马拉雅直冲霄汉,可上面有攀爬者的旗帜;撒哈拉沙漠一望无垠,可里面有跋涉者的脚印;阿尔卑斯山壁立千仞,可其中有探险者的身影;雅鲁藏布江湍急浩荡,可其中有勇敢者的故事。

适用主题:克服困难、坚持、追逐梦想、人生选择等。

6、月有阴晴圆缺,人有悲欢离合,命有否泰变化,年有四季更替,熬过长夜,你便能见到黎明,饱受痛苦,你便能拥有快乐,耐过寒冬,你便无须蛰伏,落尽寒梅,你便能企盼新春。

适用主题:希望、慢生活、追逐梦想等。

7、或许是命运的不幸注定要将自己缤纷多彩的梦撞碎;或许是天地的无情终归要将自己继日的辛勤当做泡影放飞,或许是许许多多难以理解却又实实在在的障碍与挫折,早已将意气风发的拼搏与百折不挠的进击化为道道忧愁、阵阵孤寂,那么就请在凄惨中反省自己吧!适用主题:梦想、反省、坚持等。

8、每一滴水都折射出一个多彩的世界,每一双眼睛都嵌进一个多彩的世界,每一条泛着清丽的旋律的小溪都闪烁着美的光辉。

主题句作文英语范文

主题句作文英语范文

Title: The Power of Perseverance: Overcoming Challenges on the Path toSuccessIn the journey of life, perseverance stands as a beacon of hope, guiding us through the challenges and obstacles that threaten to derail our path to success. It is the unwavering commitment to a goal, despite the difficulties encountered, that propels us forward and enables us to achieve remarkable feats.The significance of perseverance cannot be overstated. It is the driving force behind many of the world's greatest achievements, from scientific breakthroughs to personal transformations. Perseverance is what enables us to rise above failures, learn from mistakes, and continue striving towards our goals. It is the key to unlocking our potential and realizing our dreams.One of the most powerful examples of perseverance is the story of Thomas Edison. Edison, the inventor of the light bulb, faced numerous failures in his attempts to create a long-lasting and efficient source of light. Yet, he never gave up. Instead, he persevered, learning fromeach failure and using it as a stepping stone to success. His determination and resilience paid off, and his invention revolutionized the world, bringing light to millions of people.In our personal lives, perseverance is equally crucial. Whether we are pursuing academic excellence, climbing the career ladder, or overcoming personal challenges, perseverance is the key to overcoming obstacles and achieving our goals. It requires a strong will and unwavering dedication, but the rewards are immense. The sense of accomplishment and pride that comes from persevering through difficult times and achieving our dreams is truly gratifying.Moreover, perseverance teaches us valuable lessons about resilience and adaptability. As we encounter challenges and setbacks, we learn to pivot, adjust our strategies, and find new ways to move forward. This process not only helps us achieve our goals but also shapes us into stronger, more resilient individuals.However, perseverance does not mean stubbornly sticking to a single approach or ignoring feedback. It involves abalance between persistence and flexibility, allowing us to adapt to changing circumstances while remaining focused on our ultimate goal.In conclusion, perseverance is a powerful tool that can help us overcome challenges and achieve our dreams. It requires dedication, resilience, and a willingness to learn from failures. By persevering, we can unlock our potential, shape our destiny, and leave a lasting impact on the world. Let us embrace perseverance as a guiding principle in our lives and embark on the journey of success, one step at a time.**坚持的力量:成功路上的挑战克服**在人生的旅程中,坚持如同一座指引希望的灯塔,引领我们穿越挑战与障碍,确保我们走向成功的道路不被偏离。

作文主题名句

作文主题名句

作文主题名句《嘿,作文主题名句这档子事儿》咱今儿来聊聊这作文主题名句。

这玩意儿啊,可真是既让人爱又让人恨呐!你说它好吧,那可真是好呀!一句恰到好处的名句放进作文里,那感觉就像灰姑娘穿上了水晶鞋,瞬间档次就上去了。

老师一看,哟,这孩子有文化啊,有深度呀,分数自然也就往上窜。

有时候自己憋半天都想不出来的话,人家一句名句就给概括得明明白白,不服都不行。

记得有一次写关于坚持的作文,我正苦苦思索怎么表达那种不放弃的精神呢,突然脑海中就蹦出了那句“锲而不舍,金石可镂”,嘿,这不正好嘛!赶紧写上,感觉整篇作文都升华了,那叫一个得意。

可有时候吧,它也让人挺犯愁的。

就比如说考试的时候,脑袋突然就短路了,平时记得滚瓜烂熟的名句这时候就跟躲猫猫似的,死活就是想不起来。

那个着急啊,就跟热锅上的蚂蚁似的,恨不得把脑袋敲开看看名句藏哪儿了。

还有的时候,明明知道一句名句合适,可就是记不全,只能写出一半儿来,卡在那儿不上不下的,别提多难受了。

就像有一回写关于友谊的作文,我知道有句名句特别合适,可就只记得前面几个字,后面怎么都想不起来了,真是急得我抓耳挠腮啊。

最后没办法,只能用自己的大白话胡乱凑了几句,那效果跟名句比起来,简直就是天壤之别。

而且啊,名句这东西还得用对地方,不能瞎用。

不然就会闹笑话,就像给张飞穿上花裙子,不伦不类的。

有次看到有个同学在一篇作文里写道“少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲”,本来挺好的,可他后面接的是“所以我们要珍惜每一粒米饭”,这都哪跟哪呀!逗得全班同学哈哈大笑。

不过话说回来,名句还是好处多多的。

平时咱就得多多积累,没事儿就拿出来念叨念叨,这样到用的时候才能信手拈来。

咱也得学会灵活运用,别生搬硬套,不然就变成书呆子啦。

总之呢,这作文主题名句就是咱写作路上的好帮手,但咱也得跟它好好相处,可不能被它给难住咯。

咱得和它一起,让咱的作文变得更精彩,更有趣!哈哈!。

不同主题的作文好句摘抄

不同主题的作文好句摘抄

不同主题的作文好句摘抄英文回答:Theme: Friendship.Friendship is like a treasure chest full of precious memories and shared experiences. It is a bond that can withstand the test of time and distance. I remember when my best friend and I went on a road trip together, laughing until our stomachs hurt and singing along to our favorite songs. It was moments like these that truly solidified our friendship.One of the things I value most about my friends istheir unwavering support. When I was going through a rough patch in my life, they were there for me, offering a listening ear and words of encouragement. They helped me see the light at the end of the tunnel and reminded me that I was not alone.Friendship is also about being there for each other through thick and thin. Whether it's celebrating each other's successes or lending a shoulder to cry on during tough times, true friends stick by each other no matter what. I am grateful for the friends who have stood by me through the ups and downs of life.In conclusion, friendship is a priceless gift that should be cherished and nurtured. It is a source of joy, comfort, and companionship that enriches our lives in countless ways.中文回答:主题,友谊。

作文主题句

作文主题句

——《野百合的春天》
那天她们坐在长凳上,聊了很多。女孩问 她的眼睛会不会好起来?阿姨说,可能会 ,也可能不会。不过,只要心是明亮的, 你就能拥有世界上最绚烂的花儿。
——周海亮《那些灿烂的花儿》
我们中的大多数人和他们一样平凡而卑微 ,相貌平平,运气一般,奋斗半生基本一 事无成,终日为柴米油盐奔波。可是,这 些平凡卑微的人们,依然活得生机勃勃、 自足快乐。就像尘土里开出的花,虽然平 凡卑微,却一样开得坚韧而明艳;即使有 风霜雨雪,荆棘暗礁,也一样始终努力地 盛开。 ——卫宣利《开在尘土里的花》
《珍贵的池塘》
虽然现在那个池塘我已经不再光临了, 景色中也少了一群孩子的身影,可它 的地位依旧是不变的。它是我最珍贵 的精神财富。
《珍贵的那些年》结尾:
友谊,有时候像甜水一样;友谊, 有时候像酸梅汤一样。但这一生有 你,让我更加珍惜友谊。
《雨花·泪花》陈萱
坚强,不是面对悲伤不掉一滴眼 泪,而是擦干眼泪后微笑着面对 以后的生活。
作文训练之
学会写主题句
名篇主题句
一个人虽然在同不可战胜的厄运的搏斗中 毁灭了自己,但他的心灵因此变得无比高 尚。所有这些在一切时代都是最伟大的悲 剧。
——茨威格《伟大的悲剧》
不管别人样欣赏,满山遍野的百合花都仍 然铭记着第一朵百合花的教导:“我们应 该全心全意地开花,绝不要和别人争论, 要用鲜花来证明自己的存在。”
——安徽省考生《渴望赞美》。
世上有一种不会凋谢的花朵,那是微笑。 它不分四季,不论南北,只要有人群的地 方都会开放。越是高洁的心灵,微笑之花 越美。
——荆州市考生《把微笑带给生活》。
赞美是用自己的心灵之火去点燃别人 的心灵之火,是以自己的心去发现别 人的心,是春风细雨润物无声。

不同主题的作文好句摘抄

不同主题的作文好句摘抄

不同主题的作文好句摘抄【中英文版】English:The English essayist, Samuel Johnson, once eloquently stated, "The greatest glory in living lies not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall." This quote deeply resonates with me, as it encapsulates the essence of resilience and perseverance.中文:英国散文家塞缪尔·约翰逊曾说过:“人生的最大荣耀不在于从未失败,而在于每次跌倒后都能重新站起来。

”这句话深深触动了我,因为它诠释了韧性和毅力的重要性。

English:ature has an incredible ability to restore our souls.A walk through the forest, listening to the rustle of leaves and the chirping of birds, can bring tranquility to our busy lives.中文:大自然有一种令人恢复精神的能力。

在森林中漫步,听着树叶的沙沙声和鸟儿的啾啾声,可以让我们的忙碌生活恢复宁静。

English:We must not let our failures define us; instead, we should let them fuel our determination to succeed.Every setback is an opportunity to learn, grow, and become better versions of ourselves.中文:我们不能让失败定义我们,而应该让它们激发我们成功的决心。

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主题句作文1.写作攻略主题句作文也可以叫做段首句作文,要求考生将每段所给出主题句分别加以扩展,完成段落,然后由段落组成文章。

主题句作文是目前较常用的一种出题方式,它不像一般正规文章那样要求具有开头段和结尾段,一般只给出三句主题句,所以属于一种简单的三段式作文。

在写作这种题目的作文时,考生只要正确领悟每个主题句的意思,然后对每段的主题句进行阐述,内容应当展开,可以是对主题句的解释,可以是例证,也可以提供理由或细节。

主题句作文是四级写作中常见的一种作文形式。

这是一种控制性作文,旨在控制考生的写作范围,要求考生根据试题中所给的主题句续写一篇完整的短文。

在具体写作时要以主题句为线索,因为它是全段的中心,所以具有很强的概括性。

要合理安排有关材料或细节,将段落充分展开,并保证各段落在意义上连成一体,形式上互为统一,语气上一气呵成,否则就会偏离主题。

提纲作文在大学英语四级考试中,近年来出现的较多的是带提示的命题作文。

考试卷上给出作文题目,并附有写作提纲(或提示),要求考生根据提纲(或提示)对命题展开讨论,在规定的时间内写出一篇作文。

常见的提纲作文有两种:一种是中文提纲(例1);一种是英文提纲(例2)。

如:Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition about TV andEducation in three paragraphs. You are given the topic sentence of each paragraph and are required to develop its ideas by completing the paragraph. You should write at least 120 words and remember to write clearly on the Answer Sheet.TV and Education1. TV is playing a more and more important part in education today.2. But the problems with TV today are also growing more and more serious.3. Some suggestions have been put forward in attempt to solve this problem. My Most Favorite Program例2:Directions: You are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition in no less than 100 words on the topic “My Most Favorite Program”. You should base your composition on the following outline given in Chinese.1.我最喜爱的电视(或广播)节目是…2.这类节目的内容和特点3.我喜欢它的原因例3:Where to live--in the City or in the Country?Directions: You are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition in no less than 100 words on the topic “Where to Live--in the City or in the Country?” You should base your composition on the following outline given in English.OUTLINE:1.Conveniences of the city and attractions of the country;2.Disadvantages of both;3.My Preference.这类作文应试程序和技巧与设段首句式作文的应试程序和技巧有相同之处:试题本身提示出了每一段的主题。

但也有不同之处:提示不等于设段首句,考生必须根据提示的主题草拟出每段的首句,然后加以扩展。

下面谈谈写这类作文必须注意的几点:1.认真研究提示。

仔细而认真地研究提示是写好提纲作文的关键。

只有理解了提示的含义,才有可能抓住要点,明确主题,有效地组织与主题有关的素材。

2.写好每段的首句。

首句可以说是这类作文段落的主题句。

在理解提示含义后,就要抓住主题,草拟各段的主题句(设首句)。

首句写的好坏,直接影响全文。

如果某一段的句首偏离提示要求,段落的扩展就会偏题,整篇文章的扣题和连贯都会受到影响。

另外,写首句时要注意句意的完整,不可将提示中的词组或短语直接作为首句。

如:Conveniences of the city 不是一个完整的句子,是不能作为首句用的。

对考生来说,中文提示容易抓关键,但难以拟写英文首句。

例如作文题为:Make Our Cities Greener 的中文提示为:1. 城市绿化的现状。

有的考生就被“绿化”或“现状”这两个词难住,于是就出现了这样的首句The present state of greenization 。

显然,这并不是一个句子,其主谓成分不全,只是只言片语,不能作首句。

另外,greenization 是考生自编词,属于用词不当。

所以,根据提示可以拟定这样的首句:Much has been achieved in the afforestationof our cities。

(或The afforestation of our cities is far from satisfaction. )这样不仅满足了提示的要求,也有利于后面内容的扩展。

3.注意段落间的连贯。

每一段的提示各有一定的独立意义,但是,段落之间有着不可分割的联系。

作文要考虑文章的整体性,各段之间要注意衔接。

如:作文题目为Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports。

其提示为:1.运动的积极因素;2.运动的消极因素;3.你的体会。

当这篇作文的第一段写完后,就要注意如何使第二段的首句与第一段的内容有机地相接,可以拟出这样的首句:On the other hand,there are some negative aspects in sports. 还要注意第三段的首句与第二段的内容有机地相接,写出这样的首句:In my opinion,therefore,we should…….也就是说,在写作文时要充分注意首句承上启下的作用。

4.要避免中文式英语。

中文提示并不意味着要用中文打草稿,然后汉译英。

中文提示能使人较容易抓住关键。

一旦理解了主题,便应该做到用英语思维,这样才能用英语正确地进行书面表达。

要避免用汉语打草稿,然后再逐字翻译成英语的不妥做法。

其实,英语写作和汉语写作一样,都是由确定主题,选择材料,安排结构以及语言表达四个环节所组成。

主题和材料属于内容,结构是对内容的组织。

一个大学生写出120词左右的短文,不至于在这三个环节上遇到多大的困难。

目前普遍存在的问题就是用汉语思维,然后将思维的结果用英语转述出来,而很多的错误就出现在这两种语言转换的过程中。

所以一定要用英语思维。

在对主题句进行展开时,考生要学会如何取舍,有的观点见解独到或是非常精彩,但是在表达时会有问题,考生本身的英语水平可能无法把这个观点表达清楚,这时应该果断地放弃这一观点。

因为考试要考生展现的是语言水平而不是思维的深度,考生在写作时应该尽量少暴露自己在语言上的不足。

我们在写主题句作文时应按下列步骤进行写作:1. 仔细阅读指令,明确写作题目及其它要求。

2. 仔细推敲主题句。

主题句是段落的主导思想,是作者要加以说明,论证或描写的中心。

因此在做主题句作文时,一定要仔细推敲找出所要阐述、说明或论证的重点,然后围绕主题句展开想象,进行论证、说明或描述。

有些考生见到文章的主题句后,不善于分析,而是马上动笔写,结果写出的文章语无伦次,不深不透。

还有的考生则是看过第一段的主题句后便顺势写下去,结果把三段的内容写在一段里,这都是不可取的。

3. 找出支配全段的主导思想。

分析主题句要找出支配全段的主导思想。

支配思想对全段起统帅作用,并决定全段的发展方向。

如以上三段各主题句中的支配思想分别为“more and more important part”,“more and more serious”,和“solve thisproblem”。

4. 选材和拟定提纲。

准确、全面地理解了文章的主题后就可以根据主题句确定要写的基本内容以及表现这一内容的材料,并拟定写作提纲。

选材时,要准备分别用二、三个事实对主题加以论述,说明或描述。

5. 段落写作。

考研英语作文一般由几个自然段组成。

文章中的句子和段落均为文章的中心思想服务,形成一个有机的整体。

好的段落必须是意思完整,语义连贯,完全体现文章主旨中心,同时又是层次分明,结构严谨,逻辑关系应用合理的。

段落1、的组成:一个段落由三部分组成:(1)主题句:点出段落的主题(文章谈论的是什么)。

(2)扩展句:说明和支持主题。

(3)结尾句:得出结论。

2、段落的主题一篇文章有中心意思,也就是题目。

而每个段落有段落主题,段落主题是为文章中心思想服务的。

每个段落只能有一个主题(central idea),它用一个句子加以表达,所以称为主题句。

主题提出后需要很多结构严谨的句子来支持和说明,称为扩展句。

最后得出一个结论,并用一个结尾句表达。

主题句写好主题句定义:主题句为一个完整的句子,用以概括、叙述和说明该段的主题。

位置:主题句一般位于段首,也可置于段尾或段中,考生最好放在段首,这样较易掌握和构思。

例如:位于段首:在英文中,大部分段落的第一句便是主题句。

开门见山地提出问题,后面的扩展句围绕主题句加以说明、支持、补充和解释;位于段尾:主题句位于段尾便于总结全段的内容,给读者以深刻的印象,是写作中的一种演绎方法;位于段中:位于段中的主题句起承上启下的作用,这类主题句多起转折作用,一般由“but,however, yet, anyhow, nevertheless”等词连接,用于引起下文;无主题句:有的段落中无主题句,段落的主题思想通过文章内容来提示,这种方法能促使读者对文章内容进行思考和分析,但考生一般不宜在考试中采用这种方法。

主题句和中心思想:1.主题句(topic sentence)是表达段落主题的句子。

尽量使用简单句或简洁明了的句子;主题句应该做到句子完整和表达的主题思想完整;关键词是直接表达主题的词汇,它决定段落的内容和展开的方法,引导整个段落的发展。

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