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l Frequency of phrases per 50,000 words
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三、英语：形聚神聚；汉语：形散神 聚
l 睡时，灯是不敢点的，她怕楼上的灯光招惹是 非，也希冀眼前干净些，完全一片黑。（叶圣 陶《夜》）
l When she went to bed she dared not light the lamp for fear the light upstairs would attract attention and cause trouble, besides, she preferred to see nothing, to be in sheer darkness. （周志培，2003，p. 174）
denying the fact that…
考研英语写作高分策略
王立非，张岩，2007，p. 110
中国学生 Think Make Get Mail Learn
英语本族语者 Make See Use Take Feel
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Hyland, 2006, p. 61 Phrases in a HK Learner Corpus
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考研英语写作高分策略
引言
l Tom, ten years old, was failing maths. His parents tried everything to get him to do well in school, but in vain. Finally they enrolled him in a Catholic school. From the first day, Tom spent every night poring over his books. When his first report card arrived home, he had received an A in mathematics.
考研英语写作高分策略
注意一：选词要精
l I think? l I believe/argue/hold/insist/maintain… l As far as I am concerned/When it comes to
me/In my opinion/In my view… l It goes without saying that/There is no
考研英语写作高分策略
l Nowadays the young generation in China, like the flower in the greenhouse, live under the full protection from their parents. Parents want to show all their love to their children. They give their children all the best things they can afford and do not let their children do anything at home. Self-centeredness and arbitrariness have become a trait of the young generation. Once leaving their parents, many young people cannot make a living of their own. They get lost when stepping into the complex reality and cannot face any hardships and difficulties.
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形态词
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internationalization
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internationalize
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l internationalist, internationalism←international→internationality, internationally
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internationale←nation→nation-hood, nation-state, nation-wide
考研英语写作高分策略
2003年作文
考研英语写作高分策略
l Directions: Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should
l describe the set of drawings, interpret its meaning, and
考研英语写作高分策略
二、英语：繁复；汉语：简单
l Social science is that branch of intellectual enquiry which seeks to study humans and their endeavors in the same reasoned， orderly，systematic，and dispassioned manner that natural scientists use for the study of natural phenomena.
l point out its implications in our life. l You should write about 200 words neatly on
ANSWER SHEET 2. （20 points）
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20分例文
l It goes without saying that the drawings aim at revealing a common and serious problem in China: how to educate and cultivate the young. Let’s take a closer look at the drawings. In an ideal condition, the flower blooms. But when moved out of the green house, it perishes under the rain and storm. It is obvious that the flower in greenhouse can’t withstand wind and rains.
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l “Son,” the father asked, “what made the difference? The nuns? The textbooks?”
l “I’d never taken maths seriously before,” Tom admitted, “but when I walked in and saw that guy nailed to the plus sign, I knew this place meant business.” ——From Reader’s Digest
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nationally, nationality←national→nationalize, nationalization, nationalism
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形式词
l 情有可原 罪不可赦 l 罪不可赦 情有可原
考研英语写作高分策略
王红（2002）
l 在抽样的30篇作文里，所发现的学生的错误有 284个和母语干扰有关，占全部398个错误的 2/3以上。
考研英语写作高分策略
一、英语：形合；汉语：意合
l 英语：形合（“借助形态和形式词来表示词间、 小句间和句子间的关系”，周志培，2003，p. 34)
l 汉语：意合（“不借助形态和形式词，靠词语 与句子本身意义上的连贯与逻辑顺序而实现的 连接”，周志培，2003，p. 34 ）
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三大纪律，八项注意
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纪律一：“死去活来”
考研英语写作高分策略
一、爱考研英语作文
l Pygmalion Effect l Rosenthal, R. & Jacobson, L. (1968, 1992) l I love English. l I love NETEM (National Entrance Test of
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l Children education has become one of the most popular topics discussed not only by education experts, but also by people in all walks of life. The failure of children education does more harm to the development of our society and our civilization than to children themselves. Thus, it’s high time that parents, educators and the government made concerted efforts to put an end to this situation.
rich. l It goes without saying that we can do many
things with money.
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纪律三：英语vs.汉语
l 共性 ——程工，1999,《语言共性论》，上海外语 教育出版社。
l 特性 ——正迁移：I love you. ——负迁移：There are 50 students play computer games.
English for MA/MS Candidat百度文库s).
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二、写作提高三“步”曲
l 死背→
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活用
l Practice makes perfect.
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纪律二：表达> 内容
l 有钱能做很多事情。 l Have money can do many things. l Having money can do many things. l We can do many things with money/if we are
l As is vividly depicted in the cartoon, both the cat and the snake are on the table, with tears in their eyes, waiting to be eaten by humans.
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l 社会科学是知识探索的一个分支，它力图像自 然科学家研究自然现象那样，用理性的、有序 的、系统的和冷静的方式研究人类及其行为。
考研英语写作高分策略
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比较：
l The picture has a snake. The picture has a cat. The cat and snake are crying. They are going to be eaten by people.
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This is not to say that
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考研英语写作高分策略
First of all
L2 student texts L1 student texts
170
1
Published articles
5
On the other
239