写作语法十宗罪

写作语法十宗罪
十宗罪
i.e. 2) Rotten in the cellar, the potatoes had to throw away.
垂悬式修饰语（dangling modifier）--- 十宗罪
Rotten in the cellar, the potatoes had to be thrown away. As the potatoes had rotted, he had to throw them away.
标点错误 --- 九宗罪
Some people think the Internet only has positive impact. Other people believe it also has negative influence on our lives. Some people think the Internet only has positive impact; other people believe it also has negative influence on our lives. Some people think the Internet only has positive impact, while/whereas other people believe it also has negative influence on our lives.
1）Employee can get more benefits from telecommuting（远程上班） than employer. 2) Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency. 3) Children who are raise in impoverished（贫穷的）families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 4) There are many parents think that the main purpose of education should be to provide children with knowledge. 5) Many students are like studying home economics（家政课）. 6) Culture around the world were becoming increasingly similar today. 7) The problems that are created by environmental contamination（污染） is hard to resolve. 8) Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers. 9) Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalization may create. 10) The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms. 11) Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself. 12) Some people think the Internet only has positive impact, other people believe it also has negative influence on our lives. 13) Singing, the doorbell rang.
写作语法十宗罪
二宗罪 --- 动词
i.e. 1) Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.
Run-on sentence:英语里动词原形不能作主语，如果非 要用动词作主语需要调整成动名词（verb + ing）或动 词不定式（to + verb）的形式 --- 二宗罪
写作语法十宗罪
四宗罪
i.e. The problems that are created by environmental contamination （污染）is hard to resolve.
主谓不一致 --- 四宗罪
The problems that are created by environmental contamination （污染）are hard to resolve.
写作语法十宗罪
十宗罪
i.e. 3) To join the club, a form should be filled in first.
垂悬式修饰语（dangling modifier）--- 十宗罪
If you want to join the club, a form should be filled in first. To join the club, you should fill in a form first.
写作语法十宗罪
一宗罪 --- 名词
i.e. Employee can get more benefits from telecommuting（远程上 班） than employer.
可数名词永远不能单独使用 --- 一宗罪 英语里面任何一个可数名词，必须在前面加上限定词， 比如：the/an/a/this/that/my/your
Working at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.
写作语法十宗罪
二宗罪--- 动词
i.e. 2) Children who are raise in impoverished（贫穷的）families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.
写作语法十宗罪
二宗罪--- 动词
i.e. 4) Many students are like studying home economics（家政课）.
Run-on sentence之词性混记 --- 二宗罪
Many students are like studying home economics（家政课）. like v. 喜欢；prep.像
写作语法十宗罪
五宗罪--- 修饰词
i.e. Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers.
形容词修饰名词，副词修饰形容词或动词。--- 五宗罪
Intelligent students should not be treated differently by their teachers.
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写作语法十宗罪
七宗罪
i.e. The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.
词性用错 --- 七宗罪
The Internet has replaced/supplanted teachers in many classrooms.
There are many parents thinking that the main purpose of education should be to provide children with knowledge. Many parents think that the main purpose of education should be to provide children with knowledge.
写作语法十宗罪
六宗罪--- 固定搭配
i.e. Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalization may create.
固定搭配错误 --- 六宗罪
Countries should pay attention to the disadvantages globalization may create.
Run-on sentence之被动的动词别忘了加ed/d --- 二宗罪
Children who are raised in impoverished（贫穷的）families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.
写作语法十宗罪
八宗罪
i.e. Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.
指代错误 --- 八宗罪
Some parents do not obey traffic rules themselves.
写作语法十宗罪
九宗罪
i.e. Some people think the Internet only has positive impact, other people believe it also has negative influence on our lives.
写作语法十宗罪
三宗罪
i.e. Culture around the world were becoming increasingly similar today.
时态不一致 --- 三宗罪
Culture around the world is becoming increasingly similar today.
写作语法十宗罪
十宗罪
i.e. 1) Singing, the doorbell rang.
垂悬式修饰语（dangling modifier）--- 十宗罪
While singing, I heard the doorbell rang. While singing, I heard the doorbell ringing.
写作语法十宗罪
二宗罪--- 动词
i.e. 3) There are many parents think that the main purpose of education should be to provide children with knowledge.
Run-on sentence之tere be 句型 --- 二宗罪