浙江新高考英语写作---概要写作
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第一段就是本篇文章的主题句，亮明了总的观点 2．第二段主要谈到了在16世纪，人们认为dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease。
3. 第三段用Though引出人们对dirt观点的转变
4. 文章最后一段第一句指出，现在人们对于dirt的态度还是有所不同。
(二) 要点连接
在写完了要点之后，下一步的工作就是要把这些要点用适当的连接词进行连接，使上下句之间具有连贯性。 本篇文章整篇结构是总分的结构，要点2和要点3在观点上截然相反，因此，之间需要表示转折的连接词。要点3和要点4 在观点上又存在不同，因此，还是用表转折的连接词。
One possible version： People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. (要点 1 ) For a long time in history, people of so me European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected people from getting ill. (要点 2 ) Ho wever, people began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago. People have been told that wa shing dirt off our body can keep us healthy. (要点 3) However, some scientists believe that exposure to so me dirt may help our immune system. (要点 4)
浙江新高考英语写作
——————概要写作
写作基本步骤：
一、2016年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题 第二节：概要写作（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was though to lie in public baths. By 153 8, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when th e rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a n obleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out. Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far? Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, whic h might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encour ages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.
3. 第三段用Though引出人们对dirt观点的转变
4. 文章最后一段第一句指出，现在人们对于dirt的态度还是有所不同。
(二) 要点连接
在写完了要点之后，下一步的工作就是要把这些要点用适当的连接词进行连接，使上下句之间具有连贯性。 本篇文章整篇结构是总分的结构，要点2和要点3在观点上截然相反，因此，之间需要表示转折的连接词。要点3和要点4 在观点上又存在不同，因此，还是用表转折的连接词。
One possible version： People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. (要点 1 ) For a long time in history, people of so me European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected people from getting ill. (要点 2 ) Ho wever, people began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago. People have been told that wa shing dirt off our body can keep us healthy. (要点 3) However, some scientists believe that exposure to so me dirt may help our immune system. (要点 4)
浙江新高考英语写作
——————概要写作
写作基本步骤：
一、2016年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题 第二节：概要写作（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was though to lie in public baths. By 153 8, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when th e rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a n obleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out. Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far? Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, whic h might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encour ages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.