(完整)浙江新高考英语作文概要和续写(20200518215850)

2016年浙江新高考英语题型解读—概要写作

一、2016年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题

第二节：概要写作（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is no

thing fixed about attitudes to dirt.

In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block o

ut disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up t

he skin and let ills in. A particular danger was though to lie in public baths. By 1538, the

French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 15

46. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a frie

ndly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman h

ad taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman sho

uld not go out.

Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been re garded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning awa

y dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of pre

venting disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science

since World War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to be whiter th

an white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too f

ar?

Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to

warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of diseas

e. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages ch ildren to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) positi on is gaining some ground.

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One possible version：

People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. (要点 1 ) For a long time in histo ry, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected peop

le from getting ill. (要点 2 ) However, people began to change their attitudes to dirt abou

t 200 years ago. People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us health

y. (要点 3) However, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our im

mune system. (要点 4)

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(一)要点分析

1. 文章第一段就是本篇文章的主题句，亮明了总的观点：However, there is nothing fix ed about attitudes to dirt. 换句话说：Different people have different attitudes towards di

rt. 再结合下文谈到的主题可知Different people have different attitudes towards dirt on th