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• Topic sentence is .... • Unlike mass media, you tend to share _______( ) you don't want to
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• Bad news sells. If it bleeds, it leads. No news is good news, and good news is no news. Those are the classic rules for the evening broadcasts and the morning papers. But now that information is being spread and monitored (监控) in different ways, researchers are discovering new rules. By tracking people's e-mails and online posts, scientists have found that good news can spread faster and farther than disasters and sob stories.
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• Bad news sells. If it bleeds, it leads. No news is good news, and good news is no news. Those are the classic rules for the evening broadcasts and the morning papers. But now that information is being spread and monitored (监控) in different ways, researchers are discovering new rules. By tracking people's e-mails and online posts, scientists have found that good news can spread faster and farther than disasters and sob stories.

浙江新高考--概要写作-同义替换

Summary Writing常见的同义替换：1. 动词(词组)：absorb->assimilate 吸收agree partly->agree with reserve 有保留地赞同arouse->ignite/stimulate/spur/motivate 引起；鼓励change->alter 改变consider->take into account 考虑devote to->dedicate to 把……奉献于；专注于emphasize->accentuate 强调expect->anticipate 期望；预期explain->interpret/illustrate 解释；说明get into chaos->with chaos ensuing 陷入混乱join->participate 参加；参与lead to->contribute to/ conduce to/result in 导致；产生……结果limit->stress/hinder/hamper 限制阻止；阻碍operate->manipulate 操作；操纵provide->lend->offer 提供；给予publicize->propagandize 宣传；公布sway->vacillate 影响；摇摆，使摇摆think->contemplate/muse/meditate/retrospect 思考；考虑；想起thrive->palmy(a.)/flourishing(v./a.)/prosperity(n.)undermine->debilitate 破坏；使衰弱，衰竭use->employ/utilize 使用；利用want->intend to/tend to/be inclined to 希望；倾向于want to->desire 想要2. 形容词/副词：first->primarily 首先(ad.)hardly->merely->barely 几乎不(ad.)hurt->vulnerable 受伤；易受攻击inevitable-indispensable 必然；不可缺少in fact->actually/virtually 事实上；实际上(ad.)key->crucial/vital/consequential 关键；重要large->miraculous/marvelous 大；不可思议 (表程度)maybe->probably 也许；大概(ad.)more and more->increasing/growing 越来越多obvious->conspicuous 明显；显著old->ancient 老；古老proper->apposite 适当；合适persuasive->thorough/sound/specific/convincing 有说服力true->accurate 正确；准确vague->unwarranted/oversimplified 模糊well-known->outstanding 著名more often than not = oftenHe more often than not comes here.3. 名词(词组)：bias->prejudice/discriminate 偏见；歧视big city->metropolis 大都市chance->alternative 机会；选择character->trait/individuality/personality 品质；特性；个性child->juvenile 孩子；青少年clash->conflict/collision冲突custom->convention/tradition 传统；习俗delegate->representative 代表detail->specific 细节lawmaking->legislation 立法offspring->descendant 后代；子孙value->merit 价值附：1. purchasing power of incomesMaximize their incomes = increase the purchasing power of incomes2.property = real estate3.precision = accuracy4. Thinking ability = critical thinking =creative= innovation5. reasoning = logical thought =thought6. popular culture= common culture7. cultural power= assimilating power10. judge = Justice （必考含义）“法官”11. apprehension （必考含义） = worryapprehensiveability 理解能力12. mind = people= individual13. faith=confidence 信心14. drug= medicine15. dismiss 斥责= rebuke=criticize16. tap 开发 tap the market = explore the market = expand the market18. entail =make= cause19. nature；nurture/ born； made /inherited；acquired/（先天和后天）innate cognitive/intuitive made/born20. attribute= character=trait=merit=feature=virtue 特点；特质21. complementary=auxiliary22. suits = enable = entail（This job entails a lot of hard work.）24. mechanical = unchangedmechanical learningDynamic=changeable=variable；varyModify=change25.distinction= fame26. implication； connotation； suggestion； reference；carry important implications for（短语动词）27. accumulation = expansion = augmentation28.literally = actually=absolutely29. initiatives=measuresInitiatives =intentionInitiative =activeInitiative=primitive=beginning30.endeavors=efforts31.Doubt= deny= don‘t believe33. 经济下滑，衰退slowing economy/softening economy/stagnant economy/economic recession/economic decline/economic stagnation （stagnant）/depression/slowdown34.symptoms =negative example35.frames = body36.grasp = understanding37.reshape= remold38.entitle :we are entitled to some privileges./Some privileges are given to us ./Some privileges are conferred on us.4. 其他：although->albeit/notwithstanding 尽管(conj.)because->in that->since->seeing 因为(conj.)but->nonetheless/nevertheless 然而；但是(conj.)through->in term of/via 通过(prep.)to sum->to summarize/in conclusion 总之；最后表示“地位”：status, rank表示“偏见”：bias, prejudice, discrimination, inequality表示“组成”同义表达：constitute, be made from/of, include, consist of表示“导致”：result in, cause, lead to表示“发行”：issue, release, distribute, launch表示“授予”：grant, award表示“结果”：result, consequent, outcome, turn out to表示“交易”：deal, trade, exchange, transaction表示“能力”：ability, capability, potential, power表示“结束”：fulfill, finish, accomplish, carryout, achieve, complete表示“语言”：verbally, language, words, lingual表示“精确”：accuracy, precision表示“以前”：previous, former, latter, prior to表示“加强，促进”：promote, facilitate, enhance, reinforce表示“前景，未来”：prospect, future, expectation, outlook表示“顾客”：customer, client, consumer, guest表示“暂停、延期”：suspend, phase back, put off, stop, postpone, delayed表示“信息”：information, message, data, figure, statistics表示“公司”：enterprise, firm, company, corporation表示“故意”：deliberately, intentionally, purposely, on/in purpose表示“冷漠”：indifferent, neutral, carefree, detached(超然 )表示“抱怨”：complain, moan, groan表示“吸引”：appeal, attract, fascinate, tempt, absorb表示“赶上”：catch up with, keep up with表示“对手”：rival, equal, comparative, competitor, opponent, adversary, enemy 表示“谨慎”：prudent, cautious表示“有利”：be beneficial to, be useful toSkills:同义替换法/词性转换法/语态改变法/句式转换法/压缩长句法分析：Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin, northeast China's Heilongjiang Province. As a result, the owner of the restaurant faced a fine of 500,000 yuan.Chen Yan, a tourist from Changzhou, east China's Jiangsu Province, complained online on February 12 that he was being overcharged 10,000 yuan for three big fish at a local wild fish restaurant in Songbei District of Harbin. Worse still, he claimed that his family members were beaten and threatened by the restaurant staff when he questioned the bill at the checkout.Chen's complaint immediately spread on China's social media. The investigation results by some local government departments showed that the restaurant had no fault, since they had already tagged the price, which raised doubt among netizens again.Further investigation showed that one type of the fish served, Huso, was not the real wild species, but a kind of farmed fish at a much lower price. Since the prices of the fish did have violated the rights of consumers, the restaurant got its due punishment. Meanwhile, relevant government departments that have stood by the side of the restaurant in the first place would also be investigated and punished.Similar cases of fraudulent pricing at scenic spots have also been reported elsewhere in China. In October 2015, for instance, a tourist was overcharged for a course of shrimp in the coastal city of Qingdao, east China's Shandong Province, when the restaurant claimed the quoted price of 38 yuan was not for the dish, but for each shrimp! Authorities say that these illegal actions will be severely punished.Your Answer:_______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin and faced aheavy fine.____________________________________________________________________________.2.Chen Yan complained he was being overcharged and were beaten and threatened bythe restaurant staff. Chen's complaint immediately spread on China's social media. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.3.The restaurant got its due punishment and relevant government departments wouldalso be investigated and punished._______________________________________________________________________________4.Similar cases have also been reported elsewhere and authorities say that theseillegal actions will be severely punished._____________________________________________________________________________Summary Writing常见的同义替换：1. 动词(词组)：absorb->assimilate 吸收agree partly->agree with reserve 有保留地赞同arouse->ignite/stimulate/spur/motivate 引起；鼓励change->alter 改变consider->take into account 考虑devote to->dedicate to 把……奉献于；专注于emphasize->accentuate 强调expect->anticipate 期望；预期explain->interpret/illustrate 解释；说明get into chaos->with chaos ensuing 陷入混乱join->participate 参加；参与lead to->contribute to/ conduce to/result in 导致；产生……结果limit->stress/hinder/hamper 限制阻止；阻碍operate->manipulate 操作；操纵provide->lend->offer 提供；给予publicize->propagandize 宣传；公布sway->vacillate 影响；摇摆，使摇摆think->contemplate/muse/meditate/retrospect 思考；考虑；想起thrive->palmy(a.)/flourishing(v./a.)/prosperity(n.)undermine->sap/enervate/debilitate 破坏；使衰弱，衰竭use->employ/utilize 使用；利用want->intend to/tend to/be inclined to 希望；倾向于want to->desire 想要2. 形容词/副词：first->primarily 首先(ad.)hardly->merely->barely 几乎不(ad.)hurt->vulnerable 受伤；易受攻击inevitable-indispensable 必然；不可缺少in fact->actually/virtually 事实上；实际上(ad.)key->crucial/vital/consequential 关键；重要large->miraculous/marvelous 大；不可思议 (表程度)maybe->probably 也许；大概(ad.)more and more->increasing/growing 越来越多obvious->conspicuous 明显；显著old->ancient 老；古老proper->apposite 适当；合适persuasive->thorough/sound/specific/convincing 有说服力true->accurate 正确；准确vague->unwarranted/oversimplified 模糊well-known->outstanding 著名more often than not = oftenHe more often than not comes here.3. 名词(词组)：bias->prejudice/discriminate 偏见；歧视big city->metropolis 大都市chance->alternative 机会；选择character->trait/individuality/personality 品质；特性；个性child->juvenile 孩子；青少年clash->conflict/collision冲突custom->convention/tradition 传统；习俗delegate->representative 代表detail->specific 细节lawmaking->legislation 立法offspring->descendant 后代；子孙value->merit 价值附：1. purchasing power of incomesMaximize their incomes = increase the purchasing power of incomes4.property = real estate5.precision = accuracy4. Thinking ability = critical thinking =creative= innovation5. reasoning = logical thought =thought6. popular culture= common culture7. cultural power= assimilating power10. judge = Justice （必考含义）“法官”11. apprehension （必考含义） = worryapprehensiveability 理解能力12. mind = people= individual13. faith=confidence 信心14. drug= medicine15. dismiss 斥责= rebuke=criticize16. tap 开发 tap the market = explore the market = expand the market18. entail =make= cause19. nature；nurture/ born； made /inherited；acquired/（先天和后天）innate cognitive/intuitive made/born20. attribute= character=trait=merit=feature=virtue 特点；特质21. complementary=auxiliary22. suits = enable = entail（This job entails a lot of hard work.）24. mechanical = unchangedmechanical learningDynamic=changeable=variable；varyModify=change26.distinction= fame26. implication； connotation； suggestion； reference；carry important implications for（短语动词）27. accumulation = expansion = augmentation28.literally = actually=absolutely29. initiatives=measuresInitiatives =intentionInitiative =activeInitiative=primitive=beginning30.endeavors=efforts31.Doubt= deny= don‘t believe33. 经济下滑，衰退slowing economy/softening economy/stagnant economy/economic recession/economic decline/economic stagnation （stagnant）/depression/slowdown34.symptoms =negative example35.frames = body36.grasp = understanding37.reshape= remold38.entitle :we are entitled to some privileges./Some privileges are given to us ./Some privileges are conferred on us.4. 其他：although->albeit/notwithstanding 尽管(conj.)because->in that->since->seeing 因为(conj.)but->nonetheless/nevertheless 然而；但是(conj.)through->in term of/via 通过(prep.)to sum->to summarize/in conclusion 总之；最后表示“地位”：status, rank表示“偏见”：bias, prejudice, discrimination, inequality表示“组成”同义表达：constitute, be made from/of, include, consist of表示“导致”：result in, cause, lead to表示“发行”：issue, release, distribute, launch表示“授予”：grant, award表示“结果”：result, consequent, outcome, turn out to表示“交易”：deal, trade, exchange, transaction表示“能力”：ability, capability, potential, power表示“结束”：fulfill, finish, accomplish, carryout, achieve, complete表示“语言”：verbally, language, words, lingual表示“精确”：accuracy, precision表示“以前”：previous, former, latter, prior to表示“加强，促进”：promote, facilitate, enhance, reinforce表示“前景，未来”：prospect, future, expectation, outlook表示“顾客”：customer, client, consumer, guest表示“暂停、延期”：suspend, phase back, put off, stop, postpone, delayed表示“信息”：information, message, data, figure, statistics表示“公司”：enterprise, firm, company, corporation表示“故意”：deliberately, intentionally, purposely, on/in purpose表示“冷漠”：indifferent, neutral, carefree, detached(超然 )表示“抱怨”：complain, moan, groan表示“吸引”：appeal, attract, fascinate, tempt, absorb表示“赶上”：catch up with, keep up with表示“对手”：rival, equal, comparative, competitor, opponent, adversary, enemy 表示“谨慎”：prudent, cautious表示“有利”：be beneficial to, be useful toSkills:同义替换法/词性转换法/语态改变法/句式转换法/压缩长句法分析：Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin, northeast China's Heilongjiang Province. As a result, the owner of the restaurant faced a fine of 500,000 yuan.Chen Yan, a tourist from Changzhou, east China's Jiangsu Province, complained online on February 12 that he was being overcharged 10,000 yuan for three big fish at a local wild fish restaurant in Songbei District of Harbin. Worse still, he claimed that his family members were beaten and threatened by the restaurant staff when he questioned the bill at the checkout.Chen's complaint immediately spread on China's social media. The investigation results by some local government departments showed that the restaurant had no fault, since they had already tagged the price, which raised doubt among netizens again.Further investigation showed that one type of the fish served, Huso, was not the real wild species, but a kind of farmed fish at a much lower price. Since the prices of the fish did have violated the rights of consumers, the restaurant got its due punishment. Meanwhile, relevant government departments that have stood by the side of the restaurant in the first place would also be investigated and punished.Similar cases of fraudulent pricing at scenic spots have also been reported elsewhere in China. In October 2015, for instance, a tourist was overcharged for a course of shrimp in the coastal city of Qingdao, east China's Shandong Province, when the restaurant claimed the quoted price of 38 yuan was not for the dish, but for each shrimp! Authorities say that these illegal actions will be severely punished.练习：1.Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin and faced a heavy fine.lately/not long ago, require/command close down3.Chen Yan complained he was being overcharged and were beaten and threatened bythe restaurant staff. Chen's complaint immediately spread on China's social media. violent treatment expose… to the public; Chen's complaint that …spread…Possible answer: A customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and theviolent treatment of the restaurant to the public.3.The restaurant got its due punishment and relevant government departments wouldalso be investigated and punished.receive as well as/ together with/along withThe restaurant as well as some relevant government departments received their due punishment.4.Similar cases have also been reported elsewhere and authorities say that theseillegal actions will be severely punished.happened/ took place governmentwill be seriously punished/will receive serious/ severe punishmentSimilar cases also happened elsewhere and the government are determined to fightthem.one possible version:Lately, a wild fish restaurant in Harbin faced being shut down and a heavy fine,after a customer named Chen Yan exposed his being overcharged and the violenttreatment of the restaurant to the public. Ultimately, after investigation, the restaurant as well as some relevant government departments received their due punishment. In fact, similar cases also happened elsewhere and the government are determined to fight them.精品文档。

浙江新高考英语题型解读—概要写作

浙江新高考英语题型解读—概要写作一、浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was though to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out.Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.One possible version：People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. (要点 1 ) For a long time in history, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected people from getting ill. (要点 2 ) However, people began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago. People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy. (要点 3) However, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system. (要点 4)1. 文章第一段就是本篇文章的主题句，亮明了总的观点：However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. 换句话说：Different people have different attitudes towards dirt. 再结合下文谈到的主题可知Different people have different attitudes towards dirt on the skin. 范文中的要点1“People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin.”概括非常精炼。

浙江省高考新题型概要写作训练指导

纲要写作[考纲解读 ]供给一篇 350 词之内的短文，要求考生鉴于该短文写出一篇 60 词左右的内容纲要。

[原题剖析 ]1．原文资料 350 词之内，纲要写作 40～80 词。

2．原文以说明文、谈论文为主。

3．纲要，基本就是段落粗心。

每段用一句话归纳，或许两段一个粗心，最多用两句话归纳。

4．要侧重训练自己文章要旨粗心和各段段落粗心的归纳归纳能力。

[写作注意事项 ]1．找重点词和主题句，正确理解、剖析原文重点，归纳段落粗心。

2．各重点的表达要相对独立。

3．各重点之间要有适合的连接。

4．句型力争简单，每句话要表意理解，无空泛、抽象、含混之词。

5．尽量使用短句，慎用长难句。

比如，尽量少用关系代词 which，who 等指引的定语从句，而采纳-ing 形式和-ed形式作定语。

6．多使用归纳性词语，少用详细描绘性词语。

[纲要模板及句型 ]1．表示文章的内容以及研究目的①This paper is aimed at/covers/mainly deals with...②The article focuses on the topic of...2．表示研究的结论①The result showed that...②The author found that...③It was concluded that...3．表示介绍、看法或建议The author suggests/considers that...Suggestions are made for...实战操练 1阅读下边短文，依据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容纲要。

As most children return to school, many affluent families are choosing to pull their children out of themainstream education system altogether in favor of having a tutor at home "Around 50 percent of theinquiries we're getting at the moment are for long-term, daily home tutoring," Steve Spriggs, managingdirector of London-based private tutoring service And, he adds, the trend has grown from families asking forpersonal tutors to replicate the classroom environment in their own homes. Many families that were makingthe inquiries for full-time home tutors, Spriggs said, were either travelling so frequently that sending theirchildren to one school was impractical and others did not want their children to go into boarding school.Home tutoring is nothing new, and many tuition firms also offer extra tutoring services to familieswanting their children to have a little extra help learning aheadof entrance exams at competitive privateschools in the U.K., such as Harrow, St. Pauls or Eton."We always make it clear to parents that we will only offer full-time home schooling for a yearthough," Spriggs explained. "Any more than a year and children start to lose out on what a schoolenvironment can give them, such as social skills and that vital interaction they need –although we try tomitigate that anyway in our home tutoring with sports clubs of museum trips as part of the teachingprogram."Spriggs said that the costs of hiring a full-time tutor would exceed the fees of a top boarding school,which usually charge around 35,00￡0 ($54,400) a year. Some families employ two full-time tutors, one tocover humanities and the other to cover science and maths. Devising an educational plan for youngsters inthese situations is not a quick process, however, taking up to six weeks to plan, Spriggs said,with a tutorbeing matched to the child to ensure they are compatible.参照范文： Home tutoring isn ’trare in society. Some rich families choose full-time tutors because of frequenttravelling or because they don ’t want their children to go into boarding sch要oo点l.( 1) Meanwhile, to perform betterin entrance exams, some children need extra tutoring services.( 重点 2) Some tuition firms add some activities to improve the social skills of the children .( 重点 3) Although the costs of home tutoring are high, some families still employ two full-time tutors to ensure their children can gain balanced development.( 重点 4)实战操练 2阅读下边短文，依据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容纲要。

浙江新高考作文公开课概要写作新闻文体

转合
句子间逻辑
first besides, meanwhile whereas, while in summary
关联词精华
因果 therefore, thereby doing
对比 in contrast
句子间逻辑让步 while, despite
目的 so as to
举例段落间逻辑
for instance
Sentence
to tell a story?
What should we write in the
Sentence
story What does a
consist of ?
讲故事
从前有座山 ……
讲故事
从前有座山。山上有座庙。庙里有个和尚，他每天都下山挑水喝。

讲故事
从前有座山。山上有座庙。庙里有个和尚，他每天都下山挑水喝。
Para. 1 Recently, a wild fish restaurant in Harbin faced being shut down and a large fine.
Para. 2 Para. 3 Para. 4
Pick proper elements to write a sentence for each paragraph.
What do these words tell you in the story?
What do these words tell you in the story?
从前山上庙里和尚挑水喝
when where where who what
Elements of
story
Which two are the most important?

浙江高考英语写作概要写作

最新浙江高考英语写作概要写作1.题型介绍◆选材特点（1）所需阅读的短文词数在350以内；（2）所选材料体裁没有限制，以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。

◆评分参考（1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；（2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；【（3）上下文的连贯性；（4）对各要点表达的独立性情况。

注意：理解准确，涵盖全部要求，完全使用自己的语言，准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇，得分相应比较高。

相反，如果概要写作部分出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象，得分档次将会大大降低；所写内容与所提供内容无关不得分。

2.考查能力概要写作是阅读理解和书面表达二者的有机结合体。

简言之就是简要概括所给文章中心大意。

要求读者把文章的具体信息用具有概括功能的词和句表述出来，而非抄袭文章原句，更不是把细节性信息作为中心，而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换，对文章的具体信息进行概括，再用合适的语言表述出来。

这一题型主要考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力，同时考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。

3.写作步骤（1）通读全文。

明确文章类型，主题，结构。

记叙文：5W+1H&议论文：观点、论点、论据说明文：说明对象，说明方式（2）要点获取(4-5点)。

寻找主题句；关键词；提问题。

（3）要点转述。

同义替换；语态转换；词性改变；句子重构（4）要点衔接。

过渡型词句，逻辑连接词。

Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Yesterday Matt was sick.I picked up Archie from the sitter and Eloise from school and decided to run to Target for a few things.I had hoped to be in and out quickly.~I found a line with just one person ahead of me and began organizing my items on the conveyor.After placing my items，I looked up to see that the person ahead of me was an elderly woman. She was paying for her items with change and wanted to purchase each separately.I was frustrated with this woman and the inconvenience she had placed on me.But then I watched the young employee with this woman.I watched him help her count her change，ever so softly taking it from her shaking hands. When she asked if she had enough to buy a reusable bag，he told her she did and went two lines over to get one for her and then repackaged her items.Never once was this employee angry.He was nothing but patient and kind.As I was watching him，I saw that Eloise was too.She was standing next to the woman，watching the employee count the change.I realized I hadn’t been inconvenienced at all.That my daughter was instead witnessing kindness and patience and being taught this valuable lesson by a complete stranger.When the woman was finished，the employee began ringing up my items and thanked me for my patience.I then thanked him for teaching us patience andkindness by his treatment of that elderly woman.When he was finished I pushed my cart through the store trying to find the manager.I wanted her to know of the employee’s kindness and patience and how much it meant to me.After tracking her down and sharing the story with her，we left Target with a cart full of consumable items，but what is more，a heart full of gratitude for such an invaluable lesson.If you are ever in the Glendale Target，give Ishmael a smile and a nod.The world could use more people like him.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________…【写作指导】要写好记叙文的概要，先要找到以下两个问题的答案：(1)谁做了什么？(2)结果如何？如果是夹叙夹议文，还要加上这个故事给人们的启示或教育意义。

浙江高考英语新题型“概要写作”

(Para 4) Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter position is gaining some ground.
Step 2: Make an outline
Topic: There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt
In the suppor 16th century -ting (Para 2 ) Ideas
People thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease
that dirt on the skin was a means to block
since18th
century (Para 3)
…has no longer been regarded as… cleaning away dirt is good to health
nowadays …encourages children to play in the dirt (Para 4) to build up a strong immune system

浙江新高考作文概要写作

Summary writing
What is a summary?
A summary is a short statement that gives only the main points of sth, not the details.
It is a brief, complete and objective restatement of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.
Similar cases of fraudulent (欺骗的) pricing at scenic spots have also been reported elsewhere in China. In October 2015, for instance, a tourist was overcharged for a course of shrimp (虾) in the coastal city of Qingdao, east China's Shandong Province, when the restaurant claimed the quoted price of 38 yuan was not for the dish, but for each shrimp! Authorities say that these illegal
Argumentation Exposition Narration
Recently, a wild fish restaurant was ordered to shut down in Harbin, northeast China's Heilongjiang Province. As a result, the owner of the restaurant faced a fine of 500,000 yuan.