人教新目标九年级英语中考作文复习课教学课件【精美版】
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• 表列举说明：for example , Βιβλιοθήκη Baidu____________________ … • 发表观点：in my opinion, _____________________… • 表总结陈词：in general, _____________________ …
英语写作时常用的过渡语:
• 表并列：and, besides, in addition, what’s more, … • 表转折：but, yet, however,… • 表因果关系：because, so, therefore, as a result…
70% of the students think it’s a good way. First they think it’s a good chance to get close to nature and enjoy the beautiful nature. Next going outing can not only open our eyes but also fill them with more knowledge. Besides going outing is good for their health. On the other hand, 30% of them don’t like the idea. In their opinion, going outing is a waste of time, and it has a bad effect on their study. After all, going outing will also make us feel tired. What’s worse, if they go out to a strange place, no one can be sure of the safety of every student
2. Open our eyes and increase our knowledge
3. be good for our health
1. waste time ; affect our study 2. feel tired
3. Worry about our safety ?
Most of the students think it’s a good way.
1.Heading 点题，概括性
文 章 2.Body 结 中心记述部分；层次分明 构
3.Ending 小结，呼应主题
1.Heading 点题，概括性
Recently class 4 had a discussion on if going outing is a good way for Grade 9 students to get relaxed.
Some of them don’t like the idea.
70% of the students think it’s a good way.
30% of them don’t like the idea.
英语写作时常用的过渡语:
• 表并列：and, _____________________ … • 表转折：but, _____________________… • 表因果关系：because, _____________________ … • 表先后顺序：First, _____________________ … • 表时间关系：when, _____________________ …
• 表先后顺序：First, Second, Third, Next, Then, Finally… • 表时间关系：when, while, after, before, then, …
• 表列举说明：for example , for instance, such as… • 发表观点：in my opinion, to my understanding, from my point
Better Your Writing
天门市拖市一中 谢文莉
The High School Entrance Exam(中考) is coming! tired busy
good ways to get relaxed
Is going outing(春游) a good way to relax for Grade 9 students ? Why?
Most of the students think it’s a good way. _F_i_rs__t they think it’s a good chance to get close to nature and enjoy the beautiful nature. __N_e_x_t_, going outing can not only open our eyes but also fill them with more knowledge. ___B_e_s__id_e, sgoing outing is good for their health. ______O__n_the other_h_a, nd some of them don’t like the idea. In their opinion, going outing is a waste of time, and it has a bad effect on their study. After all, going outing will also make us feel tired. What’s worse, if they go out to a strange place, no one can be sure of the safety of every student
I think it’s (not) good for us. Because …
Most students agree
some students disagree
Your opinion
Reasons
1. get close to nature; enjoy the beautiful nature
of view,… • 表总结陈词：in general, in all, in a word, generally
speaking…
Writing skill:
b使e用si恰de当s连, 接fir词st，,能n使ex文t 章, o上n下th衔e接o自th然er、h紧a凑nd，,使文章更
为地道，更具“英语味”。
英语写作时常用的过渡语:
• 表并列：and, besides, in addition, what’s more, … • 表转折：but, yet, however,… • 表因果关系：because, so, therefore, as a result…
70% of the students think it’s a good way. First they think it’s a good chance to get close to nature and enjoy the beautiful nature. Next going outing can not only open our eyes but also fill them with more knowledge. Besides going outing is good for their health. On the other hand, 30% of them don’t like the idea. In their opinion, going outing is a waste of time, and it has a bad effect on their study. After all, going outing will also make us feel tired. What’s worse, if they go out to a strange place, no one can be sure of the safety of every student
2. Open our eyes and increase our knowledge
3. be good for our health
1. waste time ; affect our study 2. feel tired
3. Worry about our safety ?
Most of the students think it’s a good way.
1.Heading 点题，概括性
文 章 2.Body 结 中心记述部分；层次分明 构
3.Ending 小结，呼应主题
1.Heading 点题，概括性
Recently class 4 had a discussion on if going outing is a good way for Grade 9 students to get relaxed.
Some of them don’t like the idea.
70% of the students think it’s a good way.
30% of them don’t like the idea.
英语写作时常用的过渡语:
• 表并列：and, _____________________ … • 表转折：but, _____________________… • 表因果关系：because, _____________________ … • 表先后顺序：First, _____________________ … • 表时间关系：when, _____________________ …
• 表先后顺序：First, Second, Third, Next, Then, Finally… • 表时间关系：when, while, after, before, then, …
• 表列举说明：for example , for instance, such as… • 发表观点：in my opinion, to my understanding, from my point
Better Your Writing
天门市拖市一中 谢文莉
The High School Entrance Exam(中考) is coming! tired busy
good ways to get relaxed
Is going outing(春游) a good way to relax for Grade 9 students ? Why?
Most of the students think it’s a good way. _F_i_rs__t they think it’s a good chance to get close to nature and enjoy the beautiful nature. __N_e_x_t_, going outing can not only open our eyes but also fill them with more knowledge. ___B_e_s__id_e, sgoing outing is good for their health. ______O__n_the other_h_a, nd some of them don’t like the idea. In their opinion, going outing is a waste of time, and it has a bad effect on their study. After all, going outing will also make us feel tired. What’s worse, if they go out to a strange place, no one can be sure of the safety of every student
I think it’s (not) good for us. Because …
Most students agree
some students disagree
Your opinion
Reasons
1. get close to nature; enjoy the beautiful nature
of view,… • 表总结陈词：in general, in all, in a word, generally
speaking…
Writing skill:
b使e用si恰de当s连, 接fir词st，,能n使ex文t 章, o上n下th衔e接o自th然er、h紧a凑nd，,使文章更
为地道，更具“英语味”。