八年级英语写作公开课

• Boys and girls， • Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you. • Yi Ke's hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer. She thinks writing makes her relaxed and it also brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide .In this way he can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan 's hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.I want to be an English teacher. Because I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased. • I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.
他们在海滩上听音乐。
A They listened to the music on the beach.
B
They enjoyed the music on the beach.
她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。
A B
She is very young.
She can’t carry the heavy box.
A Lesson of Writing
假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小 组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇报。 请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况， 写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。
Survey Names Yi Ke Hobbies writing Dream Jobs writer Reasons Bring her pleasure and success
Experience 1ife and 1earn about different cu1tures
he1p anima1s 1ive in peace
提示 要点
补充 信息
I(Xiao Peng)
一般现在时
时态
写作第二步
列
• 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要 点。
Yi Ke's hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer. She thinks writing makes her relaxed and it brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . He can experience different life and learn about different cultures.
a nice body
I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.
a nice tail
写作第四步： 连 • 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰， 各个部分衔接自然。
英语写作时常用的过渡语:
• 表并列或递进：and, besides, both…and，not only…but also，what’s more, … • 表转折：but, yet, however, though，although… • 表因果关系：because, so, therefore, as a result… • 表先后顺序：First, Second, Third, Next, Then, Finally… • 表时间关系：when, while, after, before, then, … • 表列举说明：for example , for instance, such as… • 发表观点：in my opinion, to my understanding, from my point of view,… • 表总结陈词：in general, all in all, in a word, generally speaking…
Its never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老
… …
Skill One Make your sentences correct
• Good good study, day day up. a week • We should do sports a once week once. • Watch Watching TV too much is bad for your eyes. • There is going to have be a meeting today. achieve • I hope I can come true my dream.
审
• 认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、 字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信 息。
人称 主题
假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展
开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组
组长在班 内汇报。 请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员
字数
及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。
Li Rui
Wu Fan I(Xiao Peng)
trave11ing
1ooking after anima1s
guide
Experience 1ife and 1earn about different cu1tures
WWF worker he1p anima1s 1ive in peace
写作第一步
Wu Fan 's hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace. My dream is to work at school . I want to be an English teacher.Because I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.
写作第五步：
美
• 选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情 况下展示自己的语言功底。
• Boys and girls， • Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you. • Yi Ke's hobby is writing.She wants to be a successful writer . writer in the future, just like Mo Yan. So she thinks writing makes her relaxed and it also brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best.He He wantsforward to be a . abroad so he wants to be a guide in foreign countries. is looking to guide travelling In this way he can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan 's hobby is looking after animals. He wants be a WWF worker animals live into peace. When sheto grows up, she wants to help be a WWF worker save the animals in danger and help animals live in peace. I want to be an English teacher. Because I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased. • I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.
Skill Two Express in different ways
We should learn English grammar. It’s important to learn English grammar.
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Survey Names Yi Ke Hobbies writing Dream Jobs writer Reasons Bring her pleasure and success
体裁
Li Rui
Wu Fan
trave11ing
1ooking after anima1s
guide
WWF worker
She is too young to carry the heavy box.
C
D
She is so young that she can’t carry the …
She is not old enough to carry the…
书面表达写作技巧
审
列
加
连
美
中考作文评分标准
第五档（很好）（25-21分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务，涵盖了所有内容要点，或在发挥时内容有新意或 亮点；语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。 第四档（好）（20-16分） 完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本内容要点；语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯， 表达基本清楚。 第三档（一般）（15-11分） 基本完成试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容；语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。 第二档（较差）（10-6分） 未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出个别要点；语言错误较多，未能清楚传 达信息。 第一档（差）（5-0分） 未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些单词；语言错误较多， 未能清楚传达信息。
适当运用名言或俗语
Time is money. 一寸光阴一寸金
Time waits for no man.岁月不待人
Knowledge is power.知识就是力量
Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者，事竟成
Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧
写作第三步：
加
• 加首尾，使结构完整。
• 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构， 开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂 亮。
Boys and girls， Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.
a nice head
Yi Ke's hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer.Writing brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . He can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan 's hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.I want to be an English teacher.I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.