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班号:030 序号:02 姓名:刘伟桐Topic: reasons why I dislike shopping in the mall near my school Thesis: The expensive goods, bad environment and people who makes my shopping experience uncomfortable prevent me from shopping in the mall near my school.
Topic sentence 1: It costs me more to buy something there.
Detail 1: A large amount of goods are common but they are in a special price.
Detail 2: Some shoppers will cheat customers.
Topic sentence 2: The shopping environment is terrible.
Detail 1:I have to protect my money and cellphone from being stolen.
Detail 2:The ground is dirty so the virus will multiply rapidly.
Topic sentence 3: Most importantly, many people may make my shopping experience uncomfortable.
Detail 1: They will argue with each other for a little thing.
Detail 2: There are many boys with girlfriend nearby.
Detail 3: Some rude people often rush in and out of the crowding shop so they frequently touch me but never realize it, which I hate extremely。