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中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• 词汇—>短语—>句式
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
中考英语作文优秀指导课件(共38张PPT)
Enjoy an article
Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? （每一段的主要内容是什么？） 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?（作者的观点是什么？理由？） 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? （作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗？） 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!（有好词好句吗？请划住。）
正方： Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:
【全文】中考英语书面表达指导教学课件-(共50张PPT)
连(conn源自ct)美(beautify)
We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Dear Dr. Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon.
We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Dear Dr. Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon.
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
理由：
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
2023年中考英语写作讲评课件(24张PPT)
• 严以律己，自尊自立 be strict with yourself, be a confident and independent person
• 勤于思考，勇于实践 use my head as often as possible≈think in a creative way, take action for my dream
you, mom, i love you.”
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河南开封2021一模书面表达
人设，矛盾，影响
my mother and i my mother was a doctor. she was always busy in my memory. when i was little, she sometimes brought me to her office. while she was wor , i played by myself. busy as she was, she always spared as much time as she could to be with me. i was happy then. however, the situation that she was busy seemed unchanged as i entered junior high school. i met some problems at school. but most of the time, she wasn’t there when i wanted to talk with her about my problems. one day, i yelled at her because i thought she didn’t care about me enough. she had a long talk with me. i understood her more and felt so sorry about yelling at her. i knew she loved me deeply. soon, i will graduate from junior high school. as i look back, i can pick up all pieces of memories of her love for me. i want to say, “thank
• 勤于思考，勇于实践 use my head as often as possible≈think in a creative way, take action for my dream
you, mom, i love you.”
02
河南开封2021一模书面表达
人设，矛盾，影响
my mother and i my mother was a doctor. she was always busy in my memory. when i was little, she sometimes brought me to her office. while she was wor , i played by myself. busy as she was, she always spared as much time as she could to be with me. i was happy then. however, the situation that she was busy seemed unchanged as i entered junior high school. i met some problems at school. but most of the time, she wasn’t there when i wanted to talk with her about my problems. one day, i yelled at her because i thought she didn’t care about me enough. she had a long talk with me. i understood her more and felt so sorry about yelling at her. i knew she loved me deeply. soon, i will graduate from junior high school. as i look back, i can pick up all pieces of memories of her love for me. i want to say, “thank
中考英语写作指导优秀课件(共22张PPT)
2017年河西一模作文
Stage 1: 审 体裁________________ 时态________________ 人称________________
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。 （1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
• Homework : • 1. Correct the composition on the handout. • 2. Finish the composition according to the mind map.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏，征集发生 在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示，为该专栏 投稿。 （1）在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女 孩买了面包和牛奶。 （2）女孩要离开时，发现树下有一个老年乞丐，他 看上去又冷又饿。 （3）女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给了他。 （4）乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开。 （5）你很感动…… 参考词汇：乞丐 beggar 感动 be moved 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 On a cold morning, while I was…
中考英语作文课件(19张PPT)
看法
我认为……
建议（至少3条） 1. 合理安排时间 2. 参加兴趣小组
3. ……
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups
social activities, do sports, net bar
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our
第五步：集句成段，组段成篇
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play computer g2a.m迷es恋网吧，上网打游戏 watch too much.T..V... refuse to do homework
2. List some keywords about opinions.
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2025年中考英语写作复习课课件(共25张PPT)
Write your story about growth according to your story line.
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correctly. • I write my story in 3 parts.
Homework
1. Finish writing the composition. 2. Polish your writing according to the checklist.
中考英语写作范文模板课件(共11张PPT)
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12、越是无能的人，越喜欢挑剔别人 的错儿 。2021/ 8/6202 1/8/620 21/8/6 Friday, August 06, 2021
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bookcase. The tape player is in the bookcase,too. The computer game is on the floor.
Love,
Emma
写物三
• 写一篇文章介绍你的朋友JIM所拥有的体育 器材和他喜欢的体育运动。
• Jim has many sports things. He has 10 basketballs, 4 footballs,2 ping-pong balls, 15volleyballs and 9 baseballs. He doesn’t have a ping-pong bat, but he has 8 tennis rackets. Of all the sports, He likes tennis best. He likes sports very much, because he thinks sports are good for health. He often plays tennis and basketball with his friends after school.
• 2.介绍他人的房间。假设这是TOM的房间，请你 用50词左右介绍他的房间。
• Look! This is Tom’s room. It's tidy and nice.His photos are on the wall. His jacket is on the bed. His baseball bat is under the bed. The keys are on the table. The computer is on the desk. Where is Tom’s basketball? Oh, It’s under the bed，too. What is in the bookcase? They are Tom’s books, tape player and computer games. Do you like Tom’s room?
2024年中考英语作文精讲【成长变化类】 课件(共38张PPT).ppt
我很感激我的变化与成长. I'm grateful for my changes and growth.
书现在是我的朋友，它们使我受益很多. Books are my friends now, and they benefit me a lot.
句式：I sincerely hope everyone can join us, and try to be a virtue teenager.
进阶写作－成长变化类
Байду номын сангаас
我们在变化中成长
成长让我们的人生充满了意义
回首三年初中时光
我在学习、思想、性格、生活等方 面发生了很多变化
We grow up in changes.
句式: In our spare time, we can do regular exercise to keep healthy.
在家里：
经常与家人交流，分担家务，知错就改
句式：At home, it's our duty to help parents do some housework.
句式：In society, we must obey the rules in public
句式：Also, keep in mind that safety is the first.
句式：In my opinion, we are supposed to do all of the above.
句式：Parents will be happier if we can communicate more with them.
句式：Sometimes, if we make mistakes, we'd better face and correct them timely.
2023年中考英语话题作文+朗读课件(共19张PPT).ppt
festival • 16.How to keep safe • 17.How to protect the
environment
五育并举--体育
My favorite sport
There are many kinds of sports that we can choose in our spare time. Among
important . If we keep on doing these, we will be good students in
the future．
返回
五育并举--劳育
Learn to do housework
Doing housework is good for us. So we should learn to do
all of the sports, I like running best. Running is an easy and interesting sport,
which can be done at any time and place as you like. What’s more, we don’t need
As for me, I run for at least 30 minutes on the school playground every day,
because my home is next to the school. Sometimes I run slowly, but sometimes I
run fast. Running brings me a lot of fun. I hope I can keep the habit of running
environment
五育并举--体育
My favorite sport
There are many kinds of sports that we can choose in our spare time. Among
important . If we keep on doing these, we will be good students in
the future．
返回
五育并举--劳育
Learn to do housework
Doing housework is good for us. So we should learn to do
all of the sports, I like running best. Running is an easy and interesting sport,
which can be done at any time and place as you like. What’s more, we don’t need
As for me, I run for at least 30 minutes on the school playground every day,
because my home is next to the school. Sometimes I run slowly, but sometimes I
run fast. Running brings me a lot of fun. I hope I can keep the habit of running
中考英语写作指导优质课件(共38张PPT)
要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 80词左右。
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,
中考英语作文专题讲解.ppt
思路点拨： 本篇书面表达比较简单，同学主要应注意以下几 点： 1．因为是叙述一件已经发生过的事情，所以全 文一定要注意时态统一，用过去时态。有的同学 在句中有表示过去时间的词语时，能注意运用正 确时态，而其他情况下容易混淆。 2．一件事情总有其发展的先后顺序，所以在叙 述时一定要注意事情发展的条理，注意前后语句 的连贯性。 3．要注意词的运用，如walk，home，Jinshi bikes，made，in Changzhou．
② 主谓语要一致。主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 ③
注意人称代词的宾格形式。
④ 注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.
中的 an 不能写成 a。
标点符号特别注意汉英的不同。例如：
汉语 英语
A. 句号 。
.
B. 省略号 ……
…
C. 顿号 、
无
４、描写人物时，要生动具体 ① 外表特征： （tall, short, fat, thin,
怎么样，会了吗？做 几个中考题练练吧！
1．（2003年福州市）根据中文提示和英文提示 词语，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给 英文提示词语必须都用上。词数60－70左右。 （1）昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。（2）在路上 我们遇见了一个外国人。（3）他向我询问如何 去温泉饭店。（4）我告诉他沿路往前走，在第 三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。（5）他非常 感谢我，我也为能帮他而高兴。 提示词语：go out for a walk，on the road，the way to，walk along，on the left，thank for，be happy that．
laugh, cry, smile, shout 等） ⑤ 动作描写： （come, go, get, have,
中考英语作文讲解(共18张PPT)
However, I think it’s necessary for me to learn physics well. I will spend more time on it and study harder. “ Nothing is difficult to a willing heart.” I believe I can improve it sooner or later.
But as the saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.” I will read more English magazines to enrich my knowledge because I firmly believe that “ A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life.”
1.In my opinion, 2.From my point of view, 3.In my eyes, 4.As far as I am concerned, 5.Believe it or not,
1.In addition, 2.Furthermore, 3.Moreover, 4.More importantly,
It’s common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses. We will meet with various kinds of difficulties in our daily life. So it is very important for us to learn to overcome them.
But as the saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.” I will read more English magazines to enrich my knowledge because I firmly believe that “ A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life.”
1.In my opinion, 2.From my point of view, 3.In my eyes, 4.As far as I am concerned, 5.Believe it or not,
1.In addition, 2.Furthermore, 3.Moreover, 4.More importantly,
It’s common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses. We will meet with various kinds of difficulties in our daily life. So it is very important for us to learn to overcome them.
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什么叫英语思维能力？ 别被这些词汇吓坏了，没那么恐怖。
同学们只要记住： 领会汉语想表达的意思，用你自己会 用的单词和主系表或主谓宾将其表达 出来就可以。
不要求绝对对等，不怕重复主语，不 怕意思有出入，关键是句子要正确。
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例：请尝试翻译下列句子
我们学校星期天不准补课。 今天晚上我们学校放电影。 昆明有悠久的历史。 每年河边都栽许多树。 我脱下衣服让他披上。
I got up early in the morning. I had breakfast. I got on my bike. I went to school. I got to the school gate. I saw Mr. Li. I was afraid of him. I fell off my bike. I got up early in the morning, had breakfast, got on my bike and went to school, got to the school gate, saw Mr. Li, was afraid of him, fell off my bike. 英语老师会怎么评价两个短文？为什么？
请比较下面阶起床，吃过早点，骑上 自行车，向学校飞奔而去，来到校门 口，看到校长，我吓得从车上摔了下 来。
清晨，我早早起床，我吃过早点，我 骑上自行车，我向学校飞奔而去，我 来到校门口，我看到校长，我很害怕 他，我从车上摔了下来。 语文老师会怎么看这两段短文？为什么？
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1、What do you think of the Chinese dream? 2、What’s your dream? 3、How can you make your dream come true?
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二、请用英语描述这幅画：
三、讨论：如果作文不好，问题在哪里？ 困难是什么？
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四、常用句型
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所谓好作文： I got up early in the morning. Then I had breakfast. After that I got on my Bike. I went to school. When I got to the school gate, I saw Mr. Li. As I was afraid of him，I fell off my bike.
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2013昆三中模拟
每个人都有梦想，现在大家也在讨论中国梦 （the Chinese dream）。梦想发展的更为强大， 人们过上更加舒适的生活。你对此有什么看法？ 你自己有什么梦想？你计划如何实现它？
请以“The Chinese dream and my dream”为题 写一篇短文。 提示：
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第二种： Li Hua is in the USA. He is studying in a university. He is studying medicine. He is working for a doctor’s degree. He will come to our school tomorrow. He will give us a talk It is about how to study English.
体会下列句子： 我在昆明。 我作文没有写好，老师很生气。 你为什么不学英语？ 他们在哪里打篮球？ 李华不在家。 李华不在家里读英语。 我每天在学校里都很高兴。 我每天高高兴兴去上学。
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以以上句型为写作基本句型， 形成英语思维能力。
英语中无论是简单句还是复 合句，归根结底都离不开：主谓 宾或主系表，所谓从句，无非就 是用一个句子来做从句。初中写 作，能够用好when, if, as（因为）， because已经非常不错了。
A. Enjoy ____ . B. Don’t forget….
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了解云南省中考英语作文命题思路
2013年官渡区中考模拟 在阳光雨露里我已经长大长高，但这不是
全部，长大还应该包括什么？是关心帮助同学？ 是体谅理解父母？是感恩回报师长？还是…. 成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。 请以I am not a child any more!为题，论述你在 学校生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你以 不再是一个孩子。
1、主语 谓语 宾语 状语
2、主语 系动词 表语
没有行为（实意动词）使用系动词
有行为动词就不在使用系动词
3、want / decide hope / plan / try to do sth
4、want / ask / tell /take sb (not) to do sth
5、make sb + 形容词
6、let / make / have sb do sth
7、It is a good idea for sb to do sth
It is necessary for sb to do sth
8、There be…地点/时间
9、if / when / because / as 引导的状语从句
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关于： 没有行为动词（实意），使用系动 词，有行为动词就不在使用系动词
正在美国一所大学攻读医学博士学位 的李华明天要来我校给我们作关于如 何学习英语的报告
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第一种： Li Hua, who is working for a doctor’s
degree in medicine in a university in the USA, will come to our school to give us a talk about how to study English
把握命题思路和特点，提高答题和应试技巧
2016年中考英语写作应试技巧
赵 磊 特级教师 首席高级教师
昆明市外国语学校
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一、了解昆明市中考的英语作文命题 2009年昆明市中考作文
A. ______ is my favourite person B. I visited… 2010年昆明市中考作文
A. Time to ____. B. ____ is beautiful. 2011年昆明市中考作文