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Topic 1: Should Stealing Be Acceptable in the Virtual World?

1. 网络“偷菜”成为当下年轻人热衷的游戏

2. 人们对其意见不一

3. 我认为……

写作点拨:本文要求对网络流行“偷菜”这一现象进行分析,并对此提出自己的看法和建议。在布

局上,根据题目中给出的提纲来展开即可。

第一段:陈述事实,即“偷菜”游戏在年轻人中广为流行(young people are keen on an online

game)。

第二段:分析人们对这一现象的不同看法,正方观点认为,这些游戏环节可以增加游戏

的趣味性(make it more attractive and interesting),帮助人们释放压力(can enjoy more fun and

therefore relax themselves),且虚拟游戏可以不受现实世界法律和道德的约束(is free from the

laws and moral codes of the real world)。而反方观点是网络也应有行为规范,这样才能有健康

的网络环境(the rules and regulations are in need to set a healthy Internet environment)。

第三段:针对这两种观点提出自己的看法。

Should Stealing Be Acceptable in the Virtual World?

Lately many Chinese young people are keen on an online game, in which they can plant flowers, vegetables on their virtual farms. But instead of harvesting the fruits of their own labor, they are more interested in stealing from others’farms.

①When stealing even becomes the main task to many game players, people begin to show their concerns about this special phenomenon.②For some people, stealing is completely harmless in the virtual world, because virtual world is free from the laws and moral codes of the real world. ③Moreover, stealing as a unique aspect of the game can make it more attractive and interesting, so game players can enjoy more fun and therefore relax themselves. ④However, others take opposite view and say that stealing should also be banned in the virtual world. These people believe the big influence of the cyber world, especially the online games. Every year lots of young people are addicted to these games, for it is not easy for them to tell the difference between the virtual world and the real one, so the rules and regulations are in need to set a healthy Internet environment.

⑤As for me, I agree the latter opinion. ⑥Not until online games are regulated and behaviors like stealing are restrained can we obtain a clean and healthy cyber world.

精彩点评:①先解释“偷菜”是何物,再指出网络游戏中存在的问题开始引起了人们的关注。

②开始分别列举不同的意见。

③用moreover 来进一步阐释原因,使文章条理清楚,层次分明。

④用however 自然地过渡到相反的观点。

⑤引出自己的观点。

⑥用not until 倒装结构加强语气。

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virtual world 虚拟世界

free from... 不受……限制

cyber world 网络世界

be addicted to... 沉湎于……

Topic 2: Is Campus Love Good to Interpersonal Skills?

1. 有人认为大学生恋爱有助于提升人际交往能力

2. 也有人表示反对

3. 我认为……

写作点拨:本文要求考生对大学生恋爱和人际交往能力的关系展开讨论,并对此提出自己的看法和

建议。需要特别注意的是,本文不是讨论大学生恋爱的好坏,重点应放在恋爱对人际关系有

无影响上,否则即是偏题。在布局上,根据题目中给出的提纲来展开即可。

第一段:简单陈述正方的观点(be beneficial to improve interpersonal skills),并解释恋爱

如何提升人际交往能力,如:增加年轻人的自信(give young people more confidence),学会关

爱和分享的重要性(the importance of caring and sharing)。

第二段:提出反方观点,大学生往往在情感上不够成熟(emotionally immature to

experience love),所以恋爱受挫会导致一些不理智行为的发生(to go beyond the reason when

they are frustrated in love)。

第三段:提出自己的看法,人际交往能力的培养来自于实践(gain interpersonal skills from

real life experience)。

Is Campus Love Good to Interpersonal Skills?

Most people nowadays have a rather open mind about the campus love. ①There are also some educators encouraging students to experience love on campus, because love is thought to be beneficial to improve interpersonal skills of these college students. ②In the first place, as the communication between men and women is one of the basic parts of the human communication,campus love can give young people more confidence in their interpersonal relationship.

②What’s more, love will teach young people the importance of caring and sharing, the lack of which is a big obstacle in the development of good interpersonal skills, because many young people today are only child and most of them are spoiled to be self-centered. ③But other people’s opinion is contrary to what we mentioned above. From their point of view, college students are emotionally immature to experience love. It is very easy for young people to go beyond the reason when they are frustrated in love, ④so campus love might even be harmful to their interpersonal relationship.

⑤Personally I’m in favor of the former idea. We can only gain interpersonal skills from real life experience and we can achieve a lot from the beautiful campus love.

精彩点评:①直接提出论点并说明理由。

②用in the first place, what’s more 来逐条阐释原因,使文章条理清楚,层次分明。

③用but 自然地转折到另一段,引出相反的观点。

④先说明理由,再用so引出结论。

⑤最后阐明自己的观点,对第一种观点表示赞同。

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self-centered 以自我为中心的,自私的

go beyond the reason 丧失理智

Topic 3: Is Expo Testing Our Public Morality?

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