2015黄浦区一模作文

【黄浦区】

Directions: Write an English composition in over 120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

你叫Jenny，你的网友Peter（高一学生）即将面临期末考试，近日，他就是否要请家教来帮他复习迎考发邮件像你求教。请给Peter回复一封电子邮件，邮件必须包括以下内容：

1.结合你自身的学习经历就是否要请家教表达你的观点及理由；

2.就复习迎考给出2条主要建议。

Hearing that you're wondering whether you should invite a tutor to help you prepare for the coming final examination, I'm shocked and I'll give you

an exact 'No'.

A tutor costs high, usually 150 yuan or more per hour, which you may not be able to afford. Besides, having studied that detailed information of tutor classes from my classmates, I find that most of the information is similar to that of school’s, which is even with little or no extended

materials, so it's absolutely no use if (as long as)you listen to the teachers with full attention in the class and review what is on your notebook carefully after class. What's more, a tutor may make you depend fully on him (with a tutor you will probably more depend on him or her) and lose your self-motivation on (self-confidence in) study, which is exactly the truth of study(which is in fact more important). Without it, you may never learn better. And that's why I say there's no need for you inviting a home tutor.

When it comes to preparing for the exam,I'd like to give you two(some) suggestions. First, review the points which you're poor at.(First, find out your weak points/what you are poor at and strive to overcome them.) You will achieve twice the result with half the effort if reviewing the notes accompanied with

several particular exercises. Second, check all the notes and make sure that you've captured all the details.

Try hard and I believe you can achieve a good score in the exam.

(Finally I believe ……)

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