应用文框架及词句练习

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写作进阶提升主讲老师：潘赟

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潘赟

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新东方在线四六级、考研、翻硕写作老师毕业于南京大学和美国威斯康辛大学法学院连续六年成功命中四六级、考研写作原题畅销书：《九步搞定考研英语高分作文》

第一课：写作导学及应用文词汇表达

一、大纲分析及复习思路

写作备考的几种情形：

•1. 做过很多真题，但是没写过；•2. 背过很多文章，但是记不住；•3. 学过很多句子，但是用不对；•4. 读过很多美文，但是用不上；•5. 背过很多单词，但是写不对•… …

重点：框架、功能句、主题词

考研写作框架之九宫格

•示例1：应用文

•我写这封信件是为了…

•I am writing this letter to do sth. .

•give you some suggestions

•apologize for sth.

•示例2：图画图表作文开头段

•话题引起句：人们逐渐意识到…

•There is a growing national awareness of …

•the importance of 正面主题词

•the harm of 负面主题词

•the pros and cons of 中立主题词

•正：There is a growing national awareness of the importance of …

•负：There is a growing national awareness of the harm of … •中：There is a growing national awareness of the pros and cons of …

•2019.坚持不懈和毅力persistence and strong will

•怎么得高分？→用不同的表达！

•换词→【升级】

•growing →increasing , expanding, mounting •national →local, international, global, worldwide •awareness →consciousness, concern over

•【DIY】

二、应用文框架及词句练习

•1.称谓

•A.不特定：

•T o whom it may concern, •Dear Sir orMadam,

•B. 特定：

•Dear+⼈名，

•Dear+性别+姓，

•Dear +职位，

•Dear+职位+姓，

•1.称谓

•A.不特定：

•T o whom it may concern, •Dear Sir orMadam,

•B. 特定：

•Dear+⼈名，

•Dear+性别+姓，

•Dear +职位，

•Dear+职位+姓，[ 例⼦]

2009. Dear Editor(s),

2005. Dear Mr. Wang,

2013 Dear Professor,

2015. Dear book club members,

信件正⽂(开头)

1.⾃我介绍

A.公司职员:staff,

I am a staff member of/in your company.

I am a staff member of/in other company.

B.学⽣团体：

I am a freshman/ sophomore/ junior / senior/ undergraduate/ graduate student in XXX school of XXX University.

I am the president of student union in XXX school of XXX University.

信件正⽂(开头)

1.⾃我介绍

C.社会团体：（我是谁+和对⽅关系）I am sb.who do sth. 2009.我是个读者，刚好happen to read读到你关于⽩⾊污染的报道your report about“White Pollution”。

信件正⽂(开头)

1.⾃我介绍

C.社会团体：（我是谁+和对⽅关系）I am sb.who do sth. 2009.我是个读者，刚好happen to read读到你关于⽩⾊污染的报道your report about“White Pollution”。

I am a reader who happen to read your report about “White Pollution”.

信件正⽂(开头)

1.⾃我介绍

[演练1]

我是⼀个消费者customer，昨天在你们店⾥store买了⼀个坏的broken 电⼦词典electronic dictionary。

[演练2]Chinese aunts dancing in the square

我是⼀个居民resident，住在附近的社区

I am a resident who live in the nearest community/ neighborhood.

信件正⽂(开头）

2.写信目的

•道歉信：I am writing this letter to express my sincere apology to you.

•感谢信：I am writing this letter to express/extend my sincere gratitude / appreciation to you.

•投诉信：I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about sth..

I am writing this letter to file a complaint about sth..