英语正反观点类书面表达

4. be harmful to
do harm to
5. affect/ influence/ have an effect (influence) on
6.lead sb to do sth compare with
Dear Sir,
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion on the topic “Whether Middle School Students Can Carry Mobile phones (Cellphones)" at the class meeting. Forty percent students agreed, for they thought it was convenient for them to communicate with their relatives and friends. They also thought they could surf the Internet to search for some information and store some useful information in them.
进一步介绍反方观点
• • • • • What’s worse… What’s more… In addition, … Besides, … First,… Second, …Third, …
阐述观点：（‘我’的观点）
In my opinion, …
As far as I’m concerned, …
• Some believe that…
进一步介绍正方观点
• What’s more, we can …as well as … • Besides, it’s …, which …
介绍反方观点
• However， …of the students are against… • But … of the students think… • On the other hand, …of the students think…
their ideas, and even get help with their foreign language studies . 6 They say making friends on line is a waste of time ,which will have a bad influence on study 3 The internet helps make many friends . 2 Some people are for it 5 Others are against it . 7 Some students get cheated on line. 8 Students should place their study , health and safety before other things . As for friendship ,we can find it easily in our classmates and other people around us
I agree with … I hold the view that …
Pattern
There is a discussion about _____________.
Opinions are divided on the question. _________ agreed, for they believe that ___________________. For one thing, ________ .For another thing, __________. What’s more____________. However, _______ disagreed with ______. They hold the view that ______. First of all,__________.
6. Opinions are mainly _________ divided into two groups.(分，划分) suitable for middle school 7. It is not _________ students to have cellphones. （适合）
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convenient for us to communicate 8. It is ____________ with our relatives and friends.（方便）
• Different people, however, think quite differently on this matter.
详细对比--介绍正方观点：
• 60% of the students are for/in favor of the idea. • Sixty percent of the students think it necessary to…
favor John’s plan. (支持). 3. We are in ______of opinion 观点) , they could play games 4.In their ________( for rest. hold 5. I ______the view that the plan cannot work . （持有）
1.便于同亲友联系； 2.可以上网查资料； 3.储存有用信息。
1.手机辐射对人健康有害； 2.响铃影响自己和他人学习； 3.容易引起相互攀比。
注意：1.要包含所有的要点，但不要逐条翻译； 2.字数约100字。 3.信的开头和结尾已写好 参考词汇：辐射radiation
Listing useful phrases: 1.keep in touch with communicate with It is convenient for sb to do sth 2. surf the Internet 3. store search for
9. It’s well-known that playing games too harmful to our studies.（有害） much is ________
concerned We can get in 10. As far as I am __________, touch with others by other means.(据我所知 )
Should students make friends on line ? Some people are for it .The internet helps make many friends .Chatting on line ,students can more freely express their ideas, and even get help with their foreign language studies . _________,others are against it .They say However making friends on line is a waste of time ,which will have a bad influence on Besides ,some students get study .__________ cheated on line. In my opinion , students should place _____________ their study , health and safety before other things . As for friendship ,we can find it easily in our classmates and other people around us
正反观点类
1. Yesterday we had a heated discussion _________（讨论） about " the mobile phone at campus."
2.The reason why I amagainst ______ the idea is that it is not necessary for middle school students to have cellphones. （反对）
Moreover, _______. Most important of all, ____.
In my opinion, ________.
Application
下面是你班班会上以“中学生是否能佩带手机”为题进行讨 论的情况。请你写一封信给21st Century报的编辑说明该情 况，并表明你自己的观点。 比例 理由 40%学生赞同 60%学生不赞同
• Conjunctions and transitional words
转折
though/although/but/yet/ however/despite/in spite of…
对比类 on the contrary/on the other
hand/while 递进强调besides/what’s more/also/ in addition/to make matters worse/what’s worse…
写作教学定位背景--2006年高考江苏卷：青年志愿者在奥 运期间该做的和不该做的 2006年高考福建卷：良好饮食习惯和 不好饮食习惯之间对比 2006年高考陕西卷 外出旅游和待在家中进行对比 2005年全国卷II 北京动物园是否应该搬出市外 2005年高考江西卷 学生是否应该网上交友
1 Should students make friends on line ? 4 Chatting on line ,students can more freely express
点明主题
• 我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是学生是否可以……
We had a discussion about whether students should …
• 我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是学生是否可以……
We’ve had a survey on whether students should …
在这个问题上大家意见有分歧。
• Opinions are mainly divided into two groups.
主要有两种不同意见。
• Different people, however, have different opinions on this matter.
然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。
个人观点类 in my opinion/view ; as far as I know ;as far as I’m concerned 结论类 in short / in brief/ in a word/ in conclusion
Summary (正反观点对比范文结构 ) What should be included in an argumentative writing? Part1. State an opinion 点题：争论的观点是什么…. Part2. Give some supporting reasons 正反两方的观点分别是什么 Part3. Draw a conclusion 你的观点是什么
• 我写信是要告诉你我们的一场讨论，讨论内容是否可 以……
I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about whether students should …
过渡句
• Opinions are divided on this issue.
However, sixty percent of us were against it. They said the radiation of cellphones was harmful to health, and the ringing sound did somewhat affect the cellphone holders and others. Besides, it was easy to lead them to compare with each other. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter. It is not suitable for middle school students to have cellphones. We can get in touch with others by other means. Best wishes.