雅思作文保证6分基础议论文

To a certain question there might be many different answers and never a “correct one”, just a well expressed one. Always read the question carefully and be sure you understand what it is asking. Remember, misunderstanding the question will cause you to lose marks. Other problems with your answer that can cause you to get a lower score are if you add information that has nothing to do with the question or if you only answer part of the question. Spend some time reading the question and mark any important words.
Boarding school:
For：
1.Cultivate the spirit of independence, look after themselves.
2.Learn to cooperate and tolerate, develop a sense of team work and collectivism.
3.Convenience
4.Less likely to be spoiled
Against:
ck of adequate communication and emotional exchange with parents, thus widening the
generation gap.
6.Bad for physical development
7.Psychological health: homesick, lonely, autistic
8.Prone to negative influence
9.Expenditure/cost
NB:
◆SGS原则
◆思维方法：
•延长因果+对比+举例+联系社会问题
Write the introduction
•Introducing the topic
•Thesis statement (show your viewpoint)
Introducing the topic:
1）直接引入法
2）转折对比引入法
3）通过较大范围引入法
1）直接引入法
Example:
The issue of death penalty is an emotional one, with many people taking the attitude that it needs to be used both often and swiftly to deter crime. However, others believe that in a so-called “civilized”society, the death penalty is little more than barbarism.
◆Useful expressions:
•The problem of … is not a new one.
•It is a hot-debated issue…
•There is much discussion these days about …
•T here has long been a debate about…
Exercise:
Question 2
It is a hot-debated issue whether children should be encouraged to participate in paid work, with many people believing that it has an unfavorable influence on children’s physical
development. However, others take the opposite side and insist that it is necessary for both individuals and our society.
2）通过转折对比引出主题
•The overuse of modern technology in recreational activities makes human beings less creative. Agree or disagree?
•It is well believed/acknowledged that modern technologies in recreational activities have brought us easier and more convenient life. However, to use them
too often might result in the loss of creativity of human beings.
练习：
• A report indicates that nowadays children are becoming more and more lazy, fat and unsociable. Give the reason for this, and a proposal for a solution.
The social and economic development should have resulted in a happier life. However, recently more and more parents are concerning their children have become lazy, fat and unsociable.
Thesis statement:
present opinions:
Cf. 44
Model introduction:
一边倒观点：
A recent survey indicates young people in their teens spend the vast majority of their spare time watching TV rather talking with other family members. （引入话题）Quite a few people insist that this phenomenon might bring quite a few negative effects, among which the unfavorable influence on the family relationship could be one of the most remarkable. To some extent this may be true, but in practice watching TV for a long time does not necessarily mean the aloof family relationship concerning the following aspects.
两边倒观点：
Recently, there is a growing tendency for students to enter boarding schools. On the other hand some people still prefer to go to day schools. In fact, both types of schools are indispensable to the society concerning the advantages and disadvantages of both.
综合练习：
Damage to environment is an inevitable consequence of the improvement in the standard of living. To what degree do you agree or disagree to this position?
The improvement of people’s living standard owes too much to the rapid development of science and technology. However, people nowadays are confronted with so many problems, particularly the deterioration of environment, air pollution and the explosive expansion of population. （引入话题）Some people claim that the damage to environment is an inevitable consequence of economic development. （转折提出自己观点）From my point of view, this is only an excuse for the ignorance of environmental protection.
中间段落的组织论证
•段落的构成特点
•段落的扩展方式
Write a paragraph
◆Topic sentence（主题句）
◆Supporting sentences（支持句）
段落内部论证常见问题：
①一段内有两个或两个以上的ts
②分论点(ts)论证不充分：
a.论点论据没有充足的扩展
b.论据不符合实际情况
c.论据不相关
d.论据不符合逻辑
Supporting sentences
①Explaining and defining
②Giving facts and examples
③Comparison and contrast
◆Explaining and defining
1)How:
Ex: The negative influence of TV
Watching TV too much tends to have an unfavorable influence on the family relationship, by this I mean if one spends the vast majority of his spare time on television, he will lack sufficient time for communication with the family members, which may possibly result in the aloofness in the family.
2) Why---Cause and effect
•Conj. & adv. Cf. p. 110
•N.: result/consequence/effect; reason/cause/factor
The reason why there is too much pressure on people is the fierce competition among the colleagues.
We have to bear the severe consequence that the deforestation is devouring our cities.
•V. :
result in/from, create, lead to, bring about, give rise to, contribute to …, attribute …to…,ascribe … to…
◆Giving facts and examples
Giving facts: （数据）
One research group finds that…
A study/research conducted by… shows that …
According to one recent survey,…
Examples:
国家，地名，名人；普通人/事；
The primarily reason is that old buildings, like native language, form a cultural identity and keep a unique record of a country. So old buildings are culturally valuable to a nation. For instance , Siheyuan, courtyard residence of Beijing, was once seen as the remains of the Old World, and was destroyed shortly after the founding of People’s Republic of China. But their economic values and
aesthetic appeals have just caught the attention of Chinese people. Not until recently have people and policy makers realized that this is an inexcusable crime because old buildings, once gone, are not restorable.
◆Comparison and contrast
•Comparison:
•Like X, Y …
•X is similar t o Y in that …
•One way in which X is similar to Y is that …
Cf. p.108
Like public schools, the private schools also have first-class teachers and advanced facilities.
•Contrast:
A …, -A …
1)On the other hand, conversely
通过选择麦当劳，你可以节省很多时间，而这在传统中餐厅里通常是需要的。

By choosing McDonalds, you can save a lot of time, which, conversely, is often required in a traditional Chinese restaurant.
If…/ lack of…/without… (另一方面) 如果/缺少…
… On the other hand, if a student has little knowledge of computer science, he will lag behind the times.
时间对比cf.讲义p.64
As we are ushered into a new era, the demand for labour has shifted its focus. In the past, companies only required their employees to be loyal and to follow the supervisors’ instructions to the letter. But nowadays, employees with imagination and creativity are most welcome in the job market. Therefore, the employer is always happy to see new faces and fresh ideas.
Should children be taught to compete or cooperate?
◆Furthermore, cooperation is a significant contributing factor to the development of society.
While competition generally ends in a win-lose result, cooperation advocates that one plus one is larger than two, three or even a larger number.解释说明/ For example, the competition of two business firms would ultimately lead to the result that one becomes stronger and the other fails and goes out of business. However, if they cooperate with each other successfully, they may group together to form an enterprise larger than the mere sum of the two. The more successful cooperation there is, the better the society develops.举例子/ Thus, cooperation should be taught to children, because eventually they will be the executives of important corporations.。