广二模松山湖学校英语优秀作文

2012 年广州二模东莞中学松山湖学校优秀作文

基础写作优秀作文

高三7班邹得骏13分

As mayor, I will focus great attention on the sustainable development of our city. To begin with, I will make every effort to accelerate the progress of economy development, creating more chances of employment. When it comes to the public transportation, it’s necessary for me to improve it so as to make it more comfortable and convenient for citizens to go out. In terms of education, not only will I invest more money in improving the conditions of schools but also set up a great number of schools of good quality. More to the point, as a green life is advocated, more parks will be built and more trees planted in our city, adding more beauty to our daily life.

高三6班麦敏仪13分

As a responsible mayor, I will pay much attention to the sustainable development of our city. First of all, with all practical measures, I am going to take the lead to boost the economy, which will surely create more employment opportunities. As for public transportation, I promise to improve it to ensure citizens’going around conveniently and comfortably. Besides, more money will be spent in making schools’conditions better and setting up more advanced schools as well.

Eventually, in order to beautify our environment, I also plan to plant more trees, build more parks and advocate a green lifestyle in our city.

读写任务优秀作文

高三6班胡迪4+18分：

Hoping to help their kids learn more, many parents choose micro-foreign study tours. But they’re expensive and not as helpful as expected, which leads to parents’ reconsideration about their value.

I have to admit that I’m the supporter of the author’s point of view. Though micro-foreign study tours do have their benefits, I find that their value fails to equal their costs. Moreover, it may bring some harmful effects, too.

I’ve never been on such a tour abroad, but I’ve received some ads about it. From the schedule of the tours, I found only a limited amount of time was to be spent on studying, while much more was devoted to sightseeing or shopping. Therefore, these trips are more a waste of time than a learning experience. In addition to the information I gain from ads, I’ve witnessed many friends of mine taking with them a large sum of money on their study tours. Just as what I had expected, they returned with bags of souvenirs rather than their deeper understanding of the foreign culture. If the micro-foreign study tours are really like that, I’d

rather go on a trip myself which is much cheaper.

My dreaming micro-foreign study tour must be meaningful and truly help with my self-improvement. I shall enjoy my learning experience in a historical foreign school. If possible, I prefer a life with a friendly host family.

高三11班黄佩诗4+18分

Nowadays, micro-foreign study tours are of great popularity for its possible benefits. However, these tours cost too much and have little impact on children’s study in reality, which leads to parents’second thoughts about the value of them.

From my perspective, I consider it a waste of time participating in micro-foreign study tours. Undeniably, the tours may broaden our horizons to some extent, but what we can’t neglect is that most of the time will be spent in sightseeing, playing and shopping rather than studying, so these tours make little difference to the students indeed.

I still well remember that one of my friends once took part in such a trip to the UK. She left China with the hope of improving her oral English and having a better understanding of the British culture. Nevertheless, she returned, exhausted and frustrated, complaining that the real study merely lasted for 4 days during the 14-day trip, and she was occupied in transforming buses going here and there, which nearly drove her mad. What an unpleasant experience!