(完整word版)英语作文(图画)
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1总体描述:1句
1.As is vividly/symbolically depicted in the picture/cartoon ,we can notice that____
As is vividly(subtly/symbolically)depicted (shown/described/revealed/portrayed /demonstrted/illustrated)in the photo(caricature/carton/drawing/picture/ photograph)above______________________________________
Having captured our attention,the picture vividly betrays the fact (表现出事实)that___
This set of drawing vividly reflects the fact that____(一组图)
2细节描述1-2句
3文字说明/象征寓意:
(1)文字说明:
会写的话:The picture is captioned “________ ”,which indicates that_______
文字不会写的话:The caption reads that___________
(2)象征寓意:It is apparent that
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论证部分:
At first thought ,people may consider _____.But deeper thinking leads us to its core meaning___
1主题句1句:(中心)
(1)The purpose of the picture is to tell us that_____保护环境保护传统文化_____is of great significance to us human.
(2)This picture dose reflect a thought-provoking social phenomenon which is not uncommon in China now that___社会现象____
(3)However,the man in the picture ,who_____,is not an isolated example._社会风气_is a problem pervasive throughout our society。
(4)A life philosophy is clearly reflected above that__人生哲理____.
(5)The purpose of the picture is to tell us that it is impretive to_____
(6)Among the topic concerning __象征寓意____,as the depiction shows,the most cardinal top is related to the issue of ___象征寓意具体化____。
(在_____画题中,正如漫画所给,最核心的点是_______。
)
(7)Undoubtedly , through the thought-provoking illustration,the drawer aims at reminding us the significance of_____(强调重要性)
(8)Through the incentive illustration ,the drawer aims to point out the advantanges and disadantages of______(有好有坏的)、
(9)The recent a few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主题(不好的现象)which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity. 对我们的生存和社会的繁荣造成影响
论证部分:
举例:(引出原因)Several factors(原因:inducement诱因/incentive) could weight
heavily for the happening of _______,yet,suspended at the top of the list are the following two aspects .To begin
With ,_______.Additionally,_______.
(引出影响)It is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary influences the___give rise to(contribute to/result/tigger/ induce/spell).To begin with ,_____
(只举例)A good case blowing my mind now is__人/物___,who/which__修饰___,(也可
以加分词作定语)。
(1)坚持,追求:A good case blowing my mind now isJiXianLin,a famous scholar
in China,who dedicated his whole life to the study of liberal arts and even in his later years, he was still open-minded about new findings and contributed many sagacious(睿智) ideals.(季羡林,以为中国著名学他倾尽一
生致力于人文科学研究,甚至在晚年仍然对新发现保持开放的心态,并提出许多睿
智的看法)
(2)优缺点:A good case blowing my mind now is the famous “wooden barrel theory”proposed by Peter ,an American management expert ,which argues that how well a thing can perform is decided by its weaknesses.(PETER的木桶
效应认为人的表现取决于他的弱点)
(3)团结:A good case blowing my mind now is drawing genetic map 。
It is
obvious that a single person could not accomplish this map even though
exhausting all his life and efforts.Nevertheles ,if thousands
of scientists around the world together devote their expertise and enthusiasm to his landmark mission,the victory will be just around the corner.
(一个人即使尽自己一生的努力也无法绘制出基因图谱,然而如果几千个世界各地
的科学家一起将知识和热情全部贡献给这个有里程碑意义的任务时,胜利指日可待)
(3)成功失败:A good case blowing my mind now is Thomas Edison ,who had not
been stifled by repeated failtures , eventually invented the electric lamp.
(爱迪生没有被不断的困难所打倒最终成功发明了灯泡)
(4)艰苦奋斗:A good case blowing my mind now is Ma Yun ,who borned in a common
family and raised by semiliterate parents , finally became the CEO of the Alibaba Group.(马云出生在普通的家庭里他的父母都是文盲最终成为了阿里巴巴的CEO)
(5)骄傲自满:Pursuing knowledge and abilities bears close resemblance to
climbing a mountain .After a long trip to the foot of the mountain,some people are content with the thought”I hve reached the mountain ”and thus stop to rest there;some people,when scending half way up the hill,cease to go on climbing,scince they have had a taste of the delightful mountain scenery ;only
those people dissatisfied with where they reach will climb to the high summit to appreciate the real glorious landscape.(对于知识和能力的追求和登山有相似之处,的那个经过一顿长途跋涉到了山脚时,一些满足于我终于到山顶了的想法就会停在那里休息;另一些人会在爬到半山腰时停下来,因为他们已经欣赏都了令人愉悦的山间美景;但只有那些不满足于他们所到之处的人会朝着山顶进军,去欣赏真正壮丽的景色)
(6)各有所长:A good case blowing my mind now is Bolt,the world record breaker
for the 100-meter race,if he buried his running talent and instead aimed at becoming
a weightlifting winner ,the Olympic Games would miss a sprint genius and get one more mediocre weightlifter.(如果世界100M世界纪录保持者博尔特埋葬他奔跑的潜能,
励志成为一名举重运动员,那么奥林匹克运动将会失去一名短跑天才)
随着经济(文化)全球化The expansion of culture globalization has seen the popularization of___among___.(这个句子很强大尽量用!)随着文化的全球化____在___中越来越流行
The expansion of economy globalization has seen the increasingly fierce competition among the young people.
随着经济和社会的发展,竞争日益激烈:With the development of economy
and society,competition is increasingly fierce.
教育类的废话:
A good education is an asset you can fall back on for the rest of your life。
Some children are just not equipped by nature to pursue technical education(一些孩
子生下来就不具备受教育的条件)So we should cherish the life with education.
正反观点:There is a general debate nowadays about the problem of_____.Those who object to the____argue that_____lead to harm social stability(破坏社会稳定)They believe that strict limits should be placed on _____.But people who favor the
______on the other hand,maintain that________are needed to support the massive urban infrastructure construction.
第三段
双刃剑:However, _____,is a double-edged sword which can exert profound
influence on the growth of young people .If we simply_______unresonablly,the obsession will certainly waste us a great time and money, endangering the efficiency of our work .On the countrary , we will lead a positive and fruitful life if we endeavor to __________.Accordingly the latter attitude should be adopted to direct
our way of life.
倡议结尾:Therefore ,it is high time for us to impose proper restriction
upon_____(take proper actions to______)Just as fish need water to live and kites need strings to fly ,people need rules and regulations to restrict their beheaviors to a reasonable extent.Only by _______,can we find a better derection to head in and even accomplish miracles in that kingdom (protecting the environment /restricting___抵制)
道德话题结尾:Everyone of us should live up to the virtues passed down to us
by our ancestors .Only in this way can we be worthy of the name of a Chinese.
环境话题结尾:
To surve as responsible stewards of the planet ,we must press forward on environment projection plan .But plan alone is inadequate .Hence, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to reverse this disturbing trend (illustrated in the above picture).For one thing____.For another_____.Only in this way can we ____.Also I believe that we humans can surmount this difficulty ,and we will have a brilliant future.
1.(制定法律)Lay down the effective(reliable/available/pratical) regultions to ___(呼应主题)___。
2.(教育)Deliver the moderate _主题词(success/life/material/world/knowledge/energy)__ outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.(传达正确的_____观念来指导我们的身体行为和思想行为) 3.(规范行为)Exert/implement/practice the rational__主题(energy-consuming/ success-attaining)__ manners to live in a much more harmonious/compatible atmosphere/circumstance.(实施合理的行为让我们生活在和谐的生活环境中)
4.(培养意识)Cultivte the awreness of people that ____is of great significance to us.
名人名言:(适合提完建议之后)(人生哲理结尾都可以用这个)
As a classic saying gose,a journey of thousand miles begins with a single step.(千里之行始于足下)
Yet,it is very probable to say (without any exaggeration毫不夸张) that depending on the lack of_____,many citizens/youths would have immersed in such an extreme condition for a long time.
Dose it have opportunities for us to make a change?/Is it possible to make a change? Actully,as a classic saying gose,”a journey of thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely handle/optimize/refrain from …(克制) as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.。