基础写作(学生)

1. 广东08高考基础写作范文：句子表达有何亮点？

①Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19thcentury.

② The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the1904 and 1928

Games.③ It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. ④ However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. ⑤ With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown

steadily from just 3 shooti ng events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.

2. 写作中复合句常见的错误

1. 只有从句，没有主句

The keeper who had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep calm in the storm.

T The keeper, who had lived in the light tower for a long time, could keep calm in the storm.

2. 以逗号代替句号，把两个简单句当成一个句子

①The hall is differe nt from all other buildi ngs, it is made of glass.

T The hall is differe nt from all other buildi ngs , which is made of glass.

②The old man thought of his son, tears came down from his face.

T The old man thought of his son, tears coming dow n from his face.

3. 刻意使用从句，表达不自然

There are over fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sun

day.

4. 过多地使用并列句组合信息

①It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing.

T it is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowing.

②We were driving out into the country, and we saw our English teacher riding in a bus, and the

bus was crowded.

T As we were driving out into the country, we saw our English teacher riding in a crowded bus.

3. 请看范例

My En glish Lear ning

①It is six years since I began to learn English. ② With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made progress in my English. ③ Now I ' ndoing well both in writing and reading in English. ④ But I still find it hard to learn English, such as some difficult idioms.

⑤ Difficult as it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.

从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫规范的英语句子”。其实，规范的英语句子”

就是我们经常讲的三种句子：

A）Simple sentence:

Heari ng the n ews, he was happy.

=Whe n he heard the n ews, he was happy.

B）Compo und sentence A:

He gave me a book but I forgot to bring it back home.

C）Compo und sentence B:

What he is doing has nothing to do with me.

4. Here are 3 ways to make senten ces:

I. 巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：

1）借助名词短语做同位语

女口：李立，男，19岁，1986年生；籍贯：广东。

Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guan gdo ng in 1986.

2）借助介词短语做定语

女口：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身穿白色茄克。

Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brow n hair and a white jacket.

3）借助介词短语做状语

女口：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。

With the help of Tom, we soon found their village.

4）借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语

女口：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。

They are sta nding un der the big tree, wait ing for the preside nt.

II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：

女口：他给我钱，我不要。

He gave me a lot money but I refused.

女口：我刚到拐角处，就见到你啦。

I was just walk ing dow n the street corner whe n I saw you.