雅思教育类范文

Some people think children should obey the rules their parents and teachers set and listen to them, but others think less control will help children to deal with their future adult life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

词汇：

Reckon：认为

Profess：声称

for the sake of：为了…的利益

discipline：训导

conservative：保守的

afford sb sth: 给某人提供某物

substantially：充分地

go astray：误入歧途

distinguish between right and wrong：明辨是非

juveniles；青少年

dynamic：有活力的

get accustomed to sth/ doing sth:习惯于

comply with sth：遵守

stringent：严厉的

scarcity：缺乏

innovative：创新的

in accordance with：与…一致

deprive sb of sth: 剥夺某人的某物

submissive：顺从的

coincide with：符合…

There are times when people reckon that more rules may contribute to effectively disciplining children for the sake of their promising future. But nowadays, this conservative viewpoint is being challenged by others who profess that it is critical to afford children fewer restrictions which would substantially profit them.

Admittedly, the advice from either parents or teachers would successfully lead children to avoid going astray as they are still so young that they are unable to distinguish between right and wrong in most cases. However, convincing evidence has indicated that an increasing proportion of juveniles have gradually become less dynamic, which is merely attributed to too many articles restraining them mentally as well as physically.

To start with, no one can deny that the teenagers are likely to become less creative once they get accustomed to complying with diverse rules both at

home and at school. In particular, living and studying under stringent rules, they would incessantly lose capability of independent thinking, which may result in the scarcity of innovative spirits. Furthermore, constrained by a variety of rules, children dare not to perform in accordance with their own determination in that those fixed rules invariably may deprive them of the rights in making judgment. In other words, so submissive are they that they can hardly voice their peculiar standpoints on some essential issues which are closely associated with their prospective life. Last but not least, with less constraint, seemingly childish dreams may probably be fulfilled due to inherent unlimited courage on those na?ve kids. They endeavor to seek their own route and never feel regretted for any devastating strikes they may suffer from.

To conclude, even though rules are necessary to establish a strong sense of order amongst children, as far as I am concerned, they are supposed to be offered more liberty in terms of thinking and behavior which would light up their extraordinary dreams thereby conduct them to a sophisticated life genuinely belonging to them. Personally, my perspective precisely coincides with the latter.