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Topic：I Like Traveling.

a. Why do you want to go traveling? Give at least two reasons.

b. Where do you prefer to go?

c. What do you think of traveling?

Original versions （原文）

A. I Like Traveling

I want to go traveling because it’s a food way for us to relax. In addition, we are Grade 9 students. We can have a good time. I prefer to go Century Park, because there are nice and full of green. What’s more, we can enjoy a view on it. I think traveling is good and nice, so I enjoy every minute of it.

(Xu Letian，, 19，8+8+ 3) B. I Like Traveling

I like traveling, because it’s very interesting and enjoyable. We can see some nice buildings And we can learn some interesting language. I prefer to go Hangzhou. It’s a very beautiful place. We can see some nice building and historic building. They’re very good. And we can some nice flowers. I think travel is a good sport, so I like traveling very much.(Dingling，, 15：8+6+1’)

C. I Like Traveling

I like traveling because it can broaden my mind. As we all know. Different countries have different culture and customs. The other reason is I can enjoy beautiful views. I prefer to go Beijing, because of its historical interests. I think traveling is important in our life. We can do everything we wanted. I like it very much. (Zhou Wenxin, 19’：8+8+3) D. I Like Traveling

I want to go traveling, because the shool life is so busy and tired. I want to relax with traveling. Go traveling is much more interesting than shopping. I prefer to go to Hainan island, because it is warm and beautiful. In winter I will go to there. I will wear T-shirt in winter. It is so cool. The weather is fine. I think I will enjoy myself. I prefer to go to Korea too. It is interesting and nice. I think of traveling is great and interesting. It is a good way to relax. (Li Ziwei，17，, 8+7+2’)

Revised V ersions（修改稿）

A. I Like Traveling

I want to go traveling because it’

can have a good time. go to Century Park, because there are it is nice

we on of it. I think traveling is good and enjoy enjoyed every minute of it. (Xu Letian，, 19，8+8+ 3) B. I Like Traveling

’s very interesting and enjoyable. We can see some nice buildings. And

we can learn some interesting language s. I prefer to go to Hangzhou. It’

see some nice building s and historic building s. They’re very good. And we can look at/ watch some nice flowers. I think travel ing is a good sport, so I like traveling very much. (Dingling，, 15：8+6+1’)

C. I Like Traveling

I like traveling because it can broaden my mind. As we all know. Different , different countries have

and customs. The other reason is that I can enjoy beautiful views. I prefer to go to

Beijing, its I think traveling is important in our life. We can do everything we wanted anything we want to. I like it very much. (Zhou Wenxin, 19’：8+8+3)

D.I Like Traveling

because the school life is so busy and tired tiring. I want to relax with by

traveling. Go ing traveling is much more interesting than shopping. go to Hainan I sland, because it is warm and beautiful. In winter I will go to there. I will wear a T-shirt in winter. It is so cool.

think of traveling is great and interesting. It is a good way to relax. (Li Ziwei，17，, 8+7+2’)