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文章题目：提高油价能够有效缓解traffic and pollution

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What other measures do you think might be effective?

正文：

With the rapidly boosting of economy and humanily society, a host of problems occurred at modern time which called public attention to, especially traffic and pollution problems . Some citizens suggest that increasing the price of petrol is better than any other way to solve these two major problems. In my opinion, this function will help to reduce the traffic and pullation problems ,however, would not be the best way to totally solve these problems.

Honestly, increasing the price of petrol would bring out an amount of benefits to the traffic in the urban area and the environment. Firstly, it would encourage people to travel through public transportation format, which would help to reduce the amount of private automobiles, which is quite good for the traffic in the urban area, Secondly , increasing the price means that less people to travel by their owning cars, which would contribute to reduce the emiting of polluate of cars .

On the contrary, to increase the price of raw oil would obverious do harm to the economy of the government, which will lead to the lack of fund to other foundation structions. Moreover, the citizens who are mid-class would feel stressful facing up to the higher and higher price of petrol. Lastly, in many developing countries like China, public transportation format would not meet the demond of public. So, increasing the price of petrol would not be the best way.

My suggesion is government should spare no effect to develop the function of public transportation format firstly, which would help to solve the traffic problem. Furthermore, a environmental-friendly sense should be created in the head of people, which would help to solve the environment problems. Lastly, government should pay more attention to make some rules and regulations to protect the environment from become worse and worse, rather than just pay lip serves.

注：在打字的时候，我注意到了一些问题，比如词写错了和一些动词没有用ing形式的，（比如最后一个阶段）这篇文章是我初稿。