【高中英语写作训练】靓化词汇——学会运用高级表达

靓化词汇——学会运用高级表达

英语书面表达第五档作文中提到：语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。换句话说，如果考生使用高级词汇或句型，即使犯了少量或轻微的语言错误，也可不扣分，文章还是属于最高档次。因此，为了让文章档次高，首先要学会使用高级词汇。

高级词汇的使用能够给文章增添色彩和画面感。它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助考生获得高分。要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面：一、使用亮点词汇的4种方法

1．标新立异“语”众不同

在写作时，恰当地使用一些别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会体现出自己的高水平。

(1)Great changes have taken place in our school in the last few years.And the news came that a short film will be shown in our school.(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)

→Our school has witnessed great changes in the last few years.And word came that

a short film will be shown in our school.(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)

(2)I’m busy with my lessons now，for the College Entrance Examination，which is very important to me，is near.

→I’m occupied with my lessons now，for the College Entrance Examination，which is of great importance to me，is around the corner.(2017·天津高考书面表达) (3)Our team，besides regular training，will join in a variety of activities.

→Our team，apart/aside from regular training，will join in a variety of activities.(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)

(4)Several days later，when the video was played on the graduation ceremony，it was very popular.

→Several days later，when the video was played on the graduation ceremony，it was

well received.(2017·北京高考书面表达)

2．多样表达避免重复

在写作时，应尽量避免重复使用相同的单词或短语，要尽量用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。

(1)Moreover，we will build a new stadium and with the stadium built，a wide range of sports events are able to be held.

→Moreover，we will build a new stadium and with the stadium set up，a wide range of sports events are able to be held.(2018·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)

(2)The team will hold many activities，some of which will appeal to you，including many matches.

→The team will hold a range of activities，some of which will appeal to you，including many matches.(2017·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)

(3)We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have different ways to deal with such a situation.

→We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have various ways to deal with such a situation.(浙江高考书面表达)

3．单词短语短语优先

当单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。恰当使用短语，一方面能使文章更加生动，另一方面也能展示出学生扎实的语言功底。

(1)Hopefully，these suggestions would be helpful/beneficial to you.

→Hopefully，these suggestions would be of great help/benefit to you.(2018·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)

(2)To learn more about the development of our school，all the students are welcome to watch the short film Gro w ing Together.

→With the aim of learning more about the development of our school，all the students are welcome to watch the short film Gro w ing Together.(2018·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)

(3)There is no doubt that you should know about the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.