1月月考小作文讲评(请朋友代卖中国结)
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1月月考小作文讲评 （请朋友代卖中国结）
• 假设你是李华，自制了一些中国结（Chinese knot）。 给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括： • 1.外观（尺寸、颜色、材料） • 2.象征意义 • 3.价格 • 注意：1.词数不少于50； • 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； • 3.开头语已为你写好。 • Dear Tom, • How are you? ________________________________________________ • Yours, • Li Hua
开头：（写作目的） 反例1： I am writing to recommend you a kind of beautiful arts. The Chinese knot made by myself. I hope you can help me sell these Chinese knots.
5: I’m writing to ask for your help. Recently I have made some Chinese knots, and I was wondering if you could sell them for me on the Internet.
6: The Spring Festival is coming and I have made some Chinese knots. So if is convenient, could you please help me sell them in your online shop?
标准范文： Dear Tom, How are you? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In china, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. Let me know if you need further information. Thank you very much! Yours, Li Hua
语料库1：写作目的 1:I have made some Chinese knots during last few weeks. I was wondering if you could help me to sell them in your online shop.
2: I’ve heard that you are running a shop on the Internet, so I was wondering if you couldLeabharlann Baidudo me a favor…
5: These knots symbolize peace and good luck, bringing the owner a prosperous life. 6: They are considered as symbols of happiness and luck in the Chinese culture. 7: In China, the Chinese knots have the special meaning of peace and happiness.
反例2： I am writing to tell you something about Chinese knots which are made by myself.
反例3： Recently, I have made a lot of Chinese knots. They are…..(外观，象征意义等等）. I am writing to ask for your help. Could you sell them for me?
结尾：表达期待和感谢 反例1：没有任何交际用语. 反例2：If you agree with my plan, please reply to me to let me know your decision.
反例3： If you agree to help me to sell it, please respond to me. I do hope you can help me to sell them. I am planning to visit you, so let me know if you are free.
语料库4：要点2---象征意义 1：In China, people believe that Chinese knots stand for happiness and good luck. 2: In China, it represents the sincere wish of a happy and sweet family. 3: Those small Chinese knots are symbols of happiness and good luck. 4: People can hang it on the door because it means happiness and joy for a family.
语料库3：要点1---外观 1: They are six inches long, and four inches wide. 2: They are about 10 centimeters in length. 3. The Chinese knots measure 5 centimeters in width. 4: The knots are as big as an adult’s hand. 5: They are all in red. 6: They are made of cloth. 7: The Chinese knots are made of fancy silk ribbons.
语料库5：要点3---价格 1：As for the price, I think one dollar for each will be good. 2: What’s more, the Chinese knot is very cheap in China. So I think 2 dollars for each is a good price. 3: I’d like to sell them at a low price, one dollar for each knot.
语料库2: (结尾表达致谢/期待) 1: It will be greatly appreciated if you could generously help me with my business. And if you have any questions, please feel free to contact me. Thank you again. 2: I will greatly appreciate it if you could do me this favor. Thank you. 3: I’ll appreciate it if you could help me to sell these Chinese knots.
4: I think 3 dollars for each knot should be a reasonable price. 5: I’m sure the Americans would like to have one with them if it only costs one dollar. 6: Could three dollars for each be a fair price? 7: Your customers can get one for 3 dollars or two for 5 dollars. 8: Five dollars for each knot. Buy two, and get one free.
3: Last time you told me that you opened an online shop, so I was wondering if you could help me to sell some Chinese knots made by myself?
4:I am writing to ask if you could help me to sell some hand-made Chinese knots in your online shop.
• 假设你是李华，自制了一些中国结（Chinese knot）。 给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括： • 1.外观（尺寸、颜色、材料） • 2.象征意义 • 3.价格 • 注意：1.词数不少于50； • 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； • 3.开头语已为你写好。 • Dear Tom, • How are you? ________________________________________________ • Yours, • Li Hua
开头：（写作目的） 反例1： I am writing to recommend you a kind of beautiful arts. The Chinese knot made by myself. I hope you can help me sell these Chinese knots.
5: I’m writing to ask for your help. Recently I have made some Chinese knots, and I was wondering if you could sell them for me on the Internet.
6: The Spring Festival is coming and I have made some Chinese knots. So if is convenient, could you please help me sell them in your online shop?
标准范文： Dear Tom, How are you? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In china, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. Let me know if you need further information. Thank you very much! Yours, Li Hua
语料库1：写作目的 1:I have made some Chinese knots during last few weeks. I was wondering if you could help me to sell them in your online shop.
2: I’ve heard that you are running a shop on the Internet, so I was wondering if you couldLeabharlann Baidudo me a favor…
5: These knots symbolize peace and good luck, bringing the owner a prosperous life. 6: They are considered as symbols of happiness and luck in the Chinese culture. 7: In China, the Chinese knots have the special meaning of peace and happiness.
反例2： I am writing to tell you something about Chinese knots which are made by myself.
反例3： Recently, I have made a lot of Chinese knots. They are…..(外观，象征意义等等）. I am writing to ask for your help. Could you sell them for me?
结尾：表达期待和感谢 反例1：没有任何交际用语. 反例2：If you agree with my plan, please reply to me to let me know your decision.
反例3： If you agree to help me to sell it, please respond to me. I do hope you can help me to sell them. I am planning to visit you, so let me know if you are free.
语料库4：要点2---象征意义 1：In China, people believe that Chinese knots stand for happiness and good luck. 2: In China, it represents the sincere wish of a happy and sweet family. 3: Those small Chinese knots are symbols of happiness and good luck. 4: People can hang it on the door because it means happiness and joy for a family.
语料库3：要点1---外观 1: They are six inches long, and four inches wide. 2: They are about 10 centimeters in length. 3. The Chinese knots measure 5 centimeters in width. 4: The knots are as big as an adult’s hand. 5: They are all in red. 6: They are made of cloth. 7: The Chinese knots are made of fancy silk ribbons.
语料库5：要点3---价格 1：As for the price, I think one dollar for each will be good. 2: What’s more, the Chinese knot is very cheap in China. So I think 2 dollars for each is a good price. 3: I’d like to sell them at a low price, one dollar for each knot.
语料库2: (结尾表达致谢/期待) 1: It will be greatly appreciated if you could generously help me with my business. And if you have any questions, please feel free to contact me. Thank you again. 2: I will greatly appreciate it if you could do me this favor. Thank you. 3: I’ll appreciate it if you could help me to sell these Chinese knots.
4: I think 3 dollars for each knot should be a reasonable price. 5: I’m sure the Americans would like to have one with them if it only costs one dollar. 6: Could three dollars for each be a fair price? 7: Your customers can get one for 3 dollars or two for 5 dollars. 8: Five dollars for each knot. Buy two, and get one free.
3: Last time you told me that you opened an online shop, so I was wondering if you could help me to sell some Chinese knots made by myself?
4:I am writing to ask if you could help me to sell some hand-made Chinese knots in your online shop.