雅思写作7.0课程讲义

2013年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义

第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览

雅思写作高分：7分或7分以上

1.申请顶级名校的同学

2.申请对语文能力要求比较高的专业的同学：新闻、法律、MBA

3.需要提高学术写作能力的同学

第一节的内容：

1．雅思写作的整体介绍

2．高分写作的要求

3．解决问题的方案

4．课程的总览

一．雅思写作的整体介绍General Introduction

听力、阅读考试之后

60分钟Task 1 and Task 2

A类和G类的区别：

task 2 议论文

task 1 A：图表作文G：书信

评分：以Task 2 为主

二：高分写作的要求

评分标准：

Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)

Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)

Communicative Quality(交流质量)

Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)

1.避免使用过于低级的单词

The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.

The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.

They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument.

The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument. People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.

People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.

The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.

The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.

consequence:

far-reaching（深远的）, profound（深刻的）, adverse（不利的）, catastrophic（灾难的）, damaging （破坏性的）, devastating（破坏性的）, dire（可怕的）, disastrous（灾难的）, fatal（致命的）, tragic （悲惨的）, severe（严重的）,

2.避免过分重复同一样的单词

Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.

Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.

Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.

3.尽可能展示多变的句型

定语从句：

China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.

As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.

倒装句：

Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.

Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.

伴随状语：

It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.

It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.

设问句：

Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.

Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.

Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)

Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think?

有人认为，为了提高教育质量，我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估；别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。请给出你的看法？

学生评价老师的理由：

1.通过评估，老师可以知道学生究竟想些什么、需要什么

If students are not allowed to evaluate or criticize the teachers, it is hard for the teachers to find out what the students think or what they need.

2.评价和批评本身也是一种有效的交流方式

Evaluation and criticism are themselves effective forms of communication

3.听取学生的真实意见和想法，教师自己也能够受益匪浅

Teachers will benefit a lot when their minds are open to the ideas and honest opinions of the youngsters.

高分作文两个注意事项：

1．论据尽可能新颖：论据新颖，文字才更有可能新颖

2．新颖应该让位于准确性：确保文字没有错误

Communicative Quality(交流质量)

1．高分作文，在于文字和论据精彩，不在于结构另类

2．雅思作文类型固定，写作模式也固定，高分作文亦然

三：解决问题的方案

1 Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)

总结大量经典搭配，交替使用