高考作文评讲

高考作文评讲
Step 1:如何审题
Step 2: Why to write(写信的目的：介绍、申请、建议、邀请等)写信目的的句型
1)I am writing to do sth.
2) I am writing this letter with the intention/purpose of doing sth
3) I am writing this letter hoping/expecting to do sth
Step 3. What to write(含括要点，并适当地有所具体化，实例化)
Step 4:How to write
1)Structure(利用好过渡句去衔接要点)
2)Related expressions
问候语
1)How are you doing (these days)?
2)How is everything going?
3)How is everything getting along with you recently?
写作背景
1)举办/开展活动
A.Sth( the activity etc.) be held/conducted/carried out/launched /organized in our school
in +地点...on+时间....;
B.Sth (the activity) takes/took place in +地点...on+时间....
Eg.The Hanfu Festival was held in our school last week.
2)感兴趣
Sb be interested in sth; sb take/express/have an interest in sth; sth attract sb; sth appeal to sb
写信目的
1)I am writing to briefly introduce this activity/it to you.
2)I am writing this letter making a brief introduction concerning/regarding this activity
内容要点
1)活动的目的
A....to do...; ...in order to...; ...so as to...;...with the purpose/intention of...
B.aim to do sth; intend to do sth
C....in order that/so that...
D....activity will be held, which enable sb to do sth{活动目的}
E...activity will be held, v-ing (作结果状语)
2)了解：know/learn more about sth; expose oneself to sth; acquaint oneself with sth; have a good command/understanding/knowledge of sth;enrich one’s knowledge of sth
3)传承中国传统文化:promote/develop classic Chinese culture;continue/preserve the traditional culture; keep the traditional culture alive
4)活动内容
Various/diverse activities are conducted, including/containing/involving/like a theme lecture and some dancing programs
5)引发的反响
A.The festival has won /achieved widespread popularity among the students.
B.The majority of students consider it impressive/remarkable/beneficial
C.Numerous students are deeply impressed/struck by this festival.
D.This festival has/exert an significant effect/impact/influence on students.
衔接展示
Dear peter
How are you doing these days? The Hanful Festival was held in our school. Hearing that you take an interest in it, i am writing to make a brief introduction concerning it to you.
In order to…., various activities were conducted, including…and .... . Under the influence of these activities, the majority students learned in depth about Hanfu and the culture it carries and they accordingly favor this festival. I’m sure you will also struck by it.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
范文展示
Dear Peter,
How are you these days? Last week , our school held the Hanfu Festival successfully. Aware that you are interested in it, I' d like to give you a brief introduction.
To enrich our students’knowledge of the traditional Han style costumes and promote classic Chinese culture, several activities were conducted. We attended a theme lecture, which introduced us to the different styles and features of Hanfu. Besides, some dancing programs played by students wearing Hanfu also gained our applause. (或Moreover, an exhibition of fantastic Hanfu from different dynasties amazed us. as a feast for the eyes. )
The festival has won good comments. Moved by the beauty of Hanfu , we take pride in our ancestors' intelligence and the charm õ[ traditional culture. ( 或Under the influence of the activities , many students begin to learn in depth about Hanfu and the culture it carries. ) I' m sure you will also be struck by it.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
句子改错
1.I am very glad that you was interest in my school.
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2. Last week, our school was held the Hanful Festival.
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3.The activity in order to make more and more people knowing the hanful history.
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4.Our school held the Hanful Festival in last week.
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5.I am delight when I hear that...
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6.Our school took place the hanfu festival.
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7.I am delighted to hear from your letter.
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8.In order to let students know the history of...
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好句展示
1）Our school arranged the Hanfu Festival last week.That is a pity for your absence.so let me introduce the activities--黄韬臻
2）The Hanfu Festival was launched in my school so as to expose ourselves to the hanful culture -陈郑昕
3）Delighted to know you express great interest in the Hanful Festival,I am writing to inform you of some relevant details --朱湛桦
4）Knowing that you are interested in the Hanful Festival,I am very delighted to tell you something concerning it.-陈健。