托福独立写作模板

写作

独立写作模板

一、结构篇

1、开头

Sample one(适用于有一些背景or有一个中心词而且编得出来那个quotation的所有情况（二选一，agree or disagree,除了个别)；

On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era（与科技有关的背景），XX（中心词）serves as a catalyst for our future success/ XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./很简单的一句背景, However, people (universities, government, citizen, society, government,) are/is invariably faced with such a question/ can’t help wondering:改写题目1.Confucian (Y u Qiuyu, Mark Twain, William Shakespeare), (one of) the greatest and most influential Chinese philosophers (scholars, educators, writers, thinkers, statesmen), has insightfully commented, “___编____”I cling to an unshakeable belief that his comment gives the answer to this question: 改写题目2.

Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾,且如果字数够了这一句就不要).

要做的：想一句简单的背景+编一句名言+改写两次题目

Sample two：（如果sample one的名言编不出来或者不适合编如leisure time，就用下面的）

On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era（与科技有关的背景）)/ On account of …，XX（中心词）serves as a catalyst for our future success/ XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./ 很简单的一句背景( 如so…that…/not only…but also). However，when it comes to the choice between AA and BB/When asked about whether改写题目1, people get into a dilemma. According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concerned/From my perspective, I cling to an unshakeable belief that改写题目 2.以下最后决定怎样写：Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾)/AA not only…but also(2)/There are various merits AA brings about, first of all, to…; secondly, to…;and lastly…(3).

要做的：想一句简单的背景+改写两次题目+总起（最后写）

2、分点一：分层论证

Basic to any understanding of the benefits we can get from

_______ is that__________/ First and foremost,

On one hand_________, On the other hand_________

Besides/ What’s more/ In addition.

这一段主要说理，在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节，重点是要用一些精华句子！

3、分点二：举例论证

Further lending credence to my position is that____________

（简单阐述/例子字不够就多讲点废话）I can think of no better illustration than the example of（典型例子）/ A case in point is that （不是很典型）________,…..（例子见后面）

一句话总结例子：As a result,强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样

4、让步段：

Agree or disagree: Admittedly,_____,to some extent, may directly or indirectly ____/has its undeniable detriments. For instance, _______ However, the valuable merits of_______ considerably overshadow the drawbacks/ on no account________./

二选一：Admittedly,BB also has certain merits which deserve some words here. For example, ____(字数不够就多讲点) However，BB 的缺点或AA也可以做到. Compared with AA, （which 可以总结所有优点或针对BB的一方面, ）it pales.