08高考英语满分作文

08高考英语满分作文

08高考英语满分作文

全国卷I：满分范文一

满分文(一)

Dear Peter,

I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

Since I m quite interested in English, I would like to make an English pe n friend to improve my writing. Can you introduce one to me? My ideal pen fr iend should be of my age, and a boy will be better. A boy who likes traveling and football will be a good candidate.

In my opinion, the guy of my age will share almost the same experiences as me and it is easier to talk to each other. We can share our feelings of trav eling and football. If possible, I hope that he likes pets. Hope you can find me an ideal pen friend.Thank you.

Best regards,

Li Hua

名师点评：

本文属于比较“平”的文章，即稳中求胜。文章没有华丽的词语，但是使用了一些短语和结构，能够获得老师的欣赏。首句是个原因状语从句。文章也运用了定语从句来修饰boy，比较好。If possible这个省略句则表明作者对这类状语从句的熟悉。

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好词：1. candidate n.候选人2.share with 与…分享

好句：In my opinion, the guy of my age will share almost the same experie nces as me and it is easier to talk to each other.在我看来，像我这样年龄的男生和我会有更多的共同语言。

好处：复杂句的组合很好。

满分文(二)

【满分范文】

满分文(一)

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 2 0, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It als o provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western fo od in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool i s open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

名师点评：

本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。

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好词1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very en joyable.

所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。

好处：bring great convenience，带来便利。

满分文(二)

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

The hotel is located 500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, a very convenient position to go sight seeing in the Baishan Mountain. Ther e are two kinds of rooms for service: single person room, 20 in total and RM B 100 yuan per day and double person room, 15 in total and RMB 150 yuan per day. The hot water bath is provided as well. We serve both Chinses and western food in the restaurant as well as coffee and tea in the cafe. All are pr ovided in a short time. The swimming pool, which is open for the whole day, i s free for you to come.

We accept booking rooms ahead of time. So come and enjoy!

名师点评：

本文叙述比较详细，使用了比较复杂的句式和短语。首句的伴随状语用得很好。在介绍房间类型时，作者使用了简短的对比句式，很精炼。作者还使用了定语从句which，同时在描述酒店的两种价格的时候也很恰当，语句生动而不重复。

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好词1. sight seeing n.观光旅游2. book v.登记；预订

好句1. The hotel is located 500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan M ountain, a very convenient position to go sight seeing in the Baishan Mountai n. 宾馆在距离白山入口处500米的地方，这对于参观白山来说是一个很方便的位置。

好处：伴随状语的使用很到位。

2. The swimming pool, which is open for the whole day, is free for you to come.

游泳池全天免费开放。

好处：which引导了非限制性定语从句。

北京卷：满分范文一