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3. 它的人口近3千万。 It has a population of near 30 million.
4.重庆的天气多变，时常下雨。 Chongqing’s weather is changeable and rains a lot.
5. 重庆的交通便利发达。 Chongqing’s transportation is convenient and advanced.
Mount Tai is situated in central Shandong
Province,stretching over 200 kilometers. North of the city of Taian stands Mount Tai’s highest peak, rising to 1,545 meters above sea
第一关：正确审题
1、审语境
中国加入 WTO 后……假设你是导游……
读懂语境
2、审人称
假设你ຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidu导游……外宾简单介绍我市的情况。
第一人称
3、审时态
Present Simple Tense (一般现在时)
第二关：语言知识
related words/phrases相关词汇/短语 related sentence patterns相关句型
Dear Jim, I’m happy receive your letter and know
you’re coming to China. Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and
Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, he longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots.
hot pot be famous all over the world tourist industry places of interest / scenic spots/ tourist attractions
风光旖旎 四方游客
beautiful scenery tourist from different places
That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice. Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
• 中国加入 WTO 后，有一大批外国人来我直辖市— —重庆市参观。假设你是导游，请根据以下内容，向 外宾简单介绍我市的情况。 ［写作内容］
概况
天气 交通 饮食 旅游
位于中国西南，总面积8.24万平方千米 ， 人口约3千万 天气多变，时常下雨
交通方便、发达 特色小吃很多，火锅名扬天下
景点很多, 风光旖旎，吸引了四方游客。
要求： 1. 80 词左右； 2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Ladies and gentlemen， Welcome to Chongqing, now let me introduce
6. 重庆的特色小吃很多，火锅名扬天下。 Chongqing has many special foods and among them hot pot is very famous all over the world. 7. 重庆的景点很多，风景旖旎，吸引了四方游客。 Chongqing has many scenic spots. It has beautiful scenery. It attracts a large number of tourists from different places.
Any problems with this passage?
1. monotonous sentence patterns (句式单一，多简单句，少复合句） 2.Not coherent.(不连贯）
第四关：合并单句
1. 连接词 2. 定语从句 3. 名词性从句 4. 状语从句
Tips
1. Chongqing is located in the southwest part of China. It covers an area of 82400 square kilometers. （定语从句）
Ladies and gentlemen， Welcome to Chongqing, now let me introduce
our city to you. Chongqing is located in the southwest part of China. It covers an area of 82400 square kilometers. It has a population of near 30
3. “某地有……人口” 某地 has a population of …
4. “在…的东部(南，西，北，中)”的表达 • sth. is +in/to/on the east (south…)of+某处
BA
BA
BA
A is on the east of B
A is in the east of B
our city to you. ____________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________
10-15! million. Chongqing’s weather is changeable and
rains a lot. Chongqing’s transportation is advanced and convenient. Chongqing has many special foods and among them hot pot is very famous all over the world. Chongqing has many scenic spots. It has beautiful scenery. It attracts a large number of tourists from different places.
3. 它的人口近3千万。
has a population of
4.重庆的天气多变，时常下雨。
5. 重庆的交通便利发达。
6. 重庆的特色小吃很多，火锅名扬天下。
7. 重庆的景点很多，风景旖旎，吸引了四方游客。
1.重庆位于中国西南 Chongqing is located in the southwest part of China. 2. 它的总面积是8.24万平方千米 It covers an area of 82400 square kilometers.
相关词汇和短语
位于 面积 多变 交通 便利发达 饮食 特色小吃
lie / be located/be situated area changeable transportation convenient and advanced foods special foods
火锅 名扬天下 旅游业 景点
Expository Writing （说明文写作）
The purpose of expository writing is to explain or give the reader information to help him understand the world.
Mount Tai is crowned as the most famous of Chinas five great mountains, namely, Mount Tai in East China, the Hengshan Mountain in South China he Huashan Mountain in the West China, the Hengshan Mountain in North China and the Songshan Mountain in Central China.
he surrounding valleys and perilous ˈperələs]adj危险的 peaks.
To reach Mount Tais summit,we will feast our eyes on the charming scenery and appreciate the ancient architectual works of various styles.
Chongqing, which covers an area of 82400 square kilometers, is located in the southwest part of China.
2. Chongqing has many special foods and among them hot pot is very famous all over the world.（定语从句） There are many special foods here, among which hot pot is very famous all over the world.
(A与B相邻接)
(A在B的范围之内) A is to the east of B
(A在B的范围之外，且不接壤)
第三关：组词成句
1. 重庆位于中国西南
Sth. be located/ be situated +in/at/on… + 某处
2. 它的总面积是8.24万平方千米
①The area of+某地+is+……square meters ②某地+covers an area of +……square kilometers
• 中国加入 WTO 后，有一大批外国人来我直辖市— —重庆市参观。假设你是导游，请根据以下内容，向 外宾简单介绍我市的情况。 ［写作内容］
概况
天气 交通 饮食 旅游
位于中国西南，总面积8.24万平方千米 ， 人口约3千万 天气多变，时常下雨
交通方便、发达 特色小吃很多，火锅名扬天下
景点很多, 风光旖旎，吸引了四方游客。
相关句型
1. “某物位于……” sth. lie / be located/ be situated +in/at/on… + 某处
2. “面积”的表达 ①The area of+某地+is+……square kilometers ②某地+covers an area of +……square kilometers
evel.This mountain impresses visitors with its majestic [məˈdʒestɪk]adj.壮丽的，宏伟的 and precipitous[prɪˈsɪpɪtəs]adj.险峻的 appeal, its summit Yuhuanding overlooking
4.重庆的天气多变，时常下雨。 Chongqing’s weather is changeable and rains a lot.
5. 重庆的交通便利发达。 Chongqing’s transportation is convenient and advanced.
Mount Tai is situated in central Shandong
Province,stretching over 200 kilometers. North of the city of Taian stands Mount Tai’s highest peak, rising to 1,545 meters above sea
第一关：正确审题
1、审语境
中国加入 WTO 后……假设你是导游……
读懂语境
2、审人称
假设你ຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidu导游……外宾简单介绍我市的情况。
第一人称
3、审时态
Present Simple Tense (一般现在时)
第二关：语言知识
related words/phrases相关词汇/短语 related sentence patterns相关句型
Dear Jim, I’m happy receive your letter and know
you’re coming to China. Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and
Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, he longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots.
hot pot be famous all over the world tourist industry places of interest / scenic spots/ tourist attractions
风光旖旎 四方游客
beautiful scenery tourist from different places
That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice. Hope you’ll have a good time in China.
• 中国加入 WTO 后，有一大批外国人来我直辖市— —重庆市参观。假设你是导游，请根据以下内容，向 外宾简单介绍我市的情况。 ［写作内容］
概况
天气 交通 饮食 旅游
位于中国西南，总面积8.24万平方千米 ， 人口约3千万 天气多变，时常下雨
交通方便、发达 特色小吃很多，火锅名扬天下
景点很多, 风光旖旎，吸引了四方游客。
要求： 1. 80 词左右； 2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Ladies and gentlemen， Welcome to Chongqing, now let me introduce
6. 重庆的特色小吃很多，火锅名扬天下。 Chongqing has many special foods and among them hot pot is very famous all over the world. 7. 重庆的景点很多，风景旖旎，吸引了四方游客。 Chongqing has many scenic spots. It has beautiful scenery. It attracts a large number of tourists from different places.
Any problems with this passage?
1. monotonous sentence patterns (句式单一，多简单句，少复合句） 2.Not coherent.(不连贯）
第四关：合并单句
1. 连接词 2. 定语从句 3. 名词性从句 4. 状语从句
Tips
1. Chongqing is located in the southwest part of China. It covers an area of 82400 square kilometers. （定语从句）
Ladies and gentlemen， Welcome to Chongqing, now let me introduce
our city to you. Chongqing is located in the southwest part of China. It covers an area of 82400 square kilometers. It has a population of near 30
3. “某地有……人口” 某地 has a population of …
4. “在…的东部(南，西，北，中)”的表达 • sth. is +in/to/on the east (south…)of+某处
BA
BA
BA
A is on the east of B
A is in the east of B
our city to you. ____________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________
10-15! million. Chongqing’s weather is changeable and
rains a lot. Chongqing’s transportation is advanced and convenient. Chongqing has many special foods and among them hot pot is very famous all over the world. Chongqing has many scenic spots. It has beautiful scenery. It attracts a large number of tourists from different places.
3. 它的人口近3千万。
has a population of
4.重庆的天气多变，时常下雨。
5. 重庆的交通便利发达。
6. 重庆的特色小吃很多，火锅名扬天下。
7. 重庆的景点很多，风景旖旎，吸引了四方游客。
1.重庆位于中国西南 Chongqing is located in the southwest part of China. 2. 它的总面积是8.24万平方千米 It covers an area of 82400 square kilometers.
相关词汇和短语
位于 面积 多变 交通 便利发达 饮食 特色小吃
lie / be located/be situated area changeable transportation convenient and advanced foods special foods
火锅 名扬天下 旅游业 景点
Expository Writing （说明文写作）
The purpose of expository writing is to explain or give the reader information to help him understand the world.
Mount Tai is crowned as the most famous of Chinas five great mountains, namely, Mount Tai in East China, the Hengshan Mountain in South China he Huashan Mountain in the West China, the Hengshan Mountain in North China and the Songshan Mountain in Central China.
he surrounding valleys and perilous ˈperələs]adj危险的 peaks.
To reach Mount Tais summit,we will feast our eyes on the charming scenery and appreciate the ancient architectual works of various styles.
Chongqing, which covers an area of 82400 square kilometers, is located in the southwest part of China.
2. Chongqing has many special foods and among them hot pot is very famous all over the world.（定语从句） There are many special foods here, among which hot pot is very famous all over the world.
(A与B相邻接)
(A在B的范围之内) A is to the east of B
(A在B的范围之外，且不接壤)
第三关：组词成句
1. 重庆位于中国西南
Sth. be located/ be situated +in/at/on… + 某处
2. 它的总面积是8.24万平方千米
①The area of+某地+is+……square meters ②某地+covers an area of +……square kilometers
• 中国加入 WTO 后，有一大批外国人来我直辖市— —重庆市参观。假设你是导游，请根据以下内容，向 外宾简单介绍我市的情况。 ［写作内容］
概况
天气 交通 饮食 旅游
位于中国西南，总面积8.24万平方千米 ， 人口约3千万 天气多变，时常下雨
交通方便、发达 特色小吃很多，火锅名扬天下
景点很多, 风光旖旎，吸引了四方游客。
相关句型
1. “某物位于……” sth. lie / be located/ be situated +in/at/on… + 某处
2. “面积”的表达 ①The area of+某地+is+……square kilometers ②某地+covers an area of +……square kilometers
evel.This mountain impresses visitors with its majestic [məˈdʒestɪk]adj.壮丽的，宏伟的 and precipitous[prɪˈsɪpɪtəs]adj.险峻的 appeal, its summit Yuhuanding overlooking