2016高考英语全国卷1短文改错深度剖析

诚信经营，童叟无欺，利国利民，长久之计！
The key to his success is honesty.
生意规模不为求大，不求短期内暴富。放眼长远， 着眼未来，这才是生活的真谛，社会的良知，经 商的智慧，民众的福音。
Though not very big, the restaurant is popular in our area. 民以食为天。放心食品，绿色食品，安全食品， 新鲜食品对人们来说何其重要，普通民众的这个 要求又何其朴素，真诚和强烈。
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live .Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.
4.honest改为honesty,因为主语the key to his success是个名词，之后谓语是is,因此对应的表 语最好是名词。 5.or改为and,这是并列的同属关系，并非选择， 同时满足的条件。 6. using改为used, 主语是物，明显需要使用被 动语态。
再者，use作为动词多为及物动词，后面无宾语，因此不 能使用主动形式，需要使用被动形式。 7.在dream和becoming之间增添of。dream of becoming
Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables and high quality oil are used for cooking. My uncle says he never dreams of becoming rich in a short of time.
短文改错（10 分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改 你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅 涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写 出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。学科&网 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的 词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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“梦想成为……”属于固定搭配。
8.the改为a, 冠词使用不当。在短期内，第一次提到。
9. our改为his, 人称使用不当，前后应该一致，主语是he。 10.steady改为steadily。grow的用法: ①vt.种植 ②vi.生长，成长 ③link-verb 变得 此处应为实意动词vi.成长，故需要副词steadily作状语 修饰grow。
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live .Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.
1.that 改为 where, 引导宾语从句，做介词to 的宾语，并在宾语从句中做地点状语。 2.删掉but,因为though与but不能连用，前者是从 属连词，引导状语从句；后者是并列连词，连接 并列句子。“道不同，不相与谋”！
3.had改为have, 文章主体时态是一般现在时，此 句描述人们在店外排队等待也是现在的一般状况。