2019版高考英语(江浙版)一轮讲义：专题十七概要写作Word版含答案 (1)

专题十七概要写作

【考纲解读】

分析解读

概要写作也是一种全新的题型。根据高考综合改革试验区英语科考试说明,写作的第二节是读后续写或概要写作。两种形式在不同考次不定期交替使用。近三次的考试中均没有采用概要写作,因此,今后出现概要写作的机会将大大增加。

概要写作是综合性的写作考查。要求考生首先对原文章有准确的理解,对原文的结构和要点有准确的把握,然后再用准确、丰富的语言以及高级的语法结构,用合适的连词写出包含所有要点的短文。

所以,考生要想做好本题,就必须注意以下几点:

(1)准确理解文章。

(2)把握文章的各个要点。

(3)使用准确的语法结构、丰富的词汇和合适的连词。

(4)使用自己的语言表述,不要抄原文中的句子。

【命题探究】

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Gettingridofdirt,intheopinionofmostpeople,is agoodthing.However,thereisnothingfixedaboutatti tudestodirt.

Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirto ntheskinwasameanstobl

ockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingo ffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsi n.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths .By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhi skingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.Thusbegana longtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithd ir

tinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamousl ydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,t hekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,the noblemanshouldnotgoout.

Thoughthebeliefinthemerit(好处)ofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregar dedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scien tifically

speaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwa tersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreve ntingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlin esshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWarII.Advert isementsrepeatedlyselltheidea:clothesneedtobewh iterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.

【三年模拟】

模拟题组

Writing1(2018宁波十校一模)

阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Atypicalliontamer(驯兽师)inpeople smindisanentertainerholdingawhip(鞭子)andachair.Thewhipgetsalloftheattention,butit smostlyforshow.Inreality,it s thechairthatdoestheimportantwork.Whenaliontamerholdsachairinfrontofthelion sfa ce,theliontriestofocusonallfourlegsofthechairatthesametime.Withitsfocusdivided, thelionbecomesconfusedandisunsureaboutwhattodonext.Whenfacedwithsomanyoptions,t helionchoosestofreezeandwaitinsteadofattackingthemanholdingthechair.

Howoftendoyoufindyourselfinthesamepositionasthelion?Howoftendoyouhavesometh ingyouwanttoachieve(e.g.loseweight,startabusiness,travelmore)—onlytoendupconfu sedbyalloftheoptionsinfrontofyouandnevermakeprogress?

Thisupsetsmetonoendbecausewhilealltheexpertsarebusydebatingaboutwhichoption isbest,thepeoplewhowanttoimprovetheirlivesareleftconfusedbyalloftheconflictingi nformation.Theendresultisthatwefeellikewecan tfocusorthatwe refocusedonthewro ngthings,andsowetakelessaction,makelessprogress,andstaythesamewhenwecouldbeimpr oving.

Itdoesn thavetobethatway.Anytimeyoufindtheworldwavingachairinyourface,reme mberthis:Allyouneedtodoisfocusononething.Youjustneedtogetstarted.Startingbefore youfeelreadyisoneofthehabitsofsuccessfulpeople.Ifyouhavesomewhereyouwanttogo,so methingyouwanttoaccomplish,someoneyouwanttobecome...takeimmediateaction.Ifyou reclearaboutwhereyouwanttogo,therestoftheworldwilleitherhelpyougetthereorgetout oftheway.

答案

【写作提示】

1.本文是一篇议论文,如果有太多的目标,我们就会迷茫,反而不知所措。因此,正确的做法是集中注意力于我们真正的目标。

2.文章四段,每段一个要点。这是概要写作的一般原则。

3.文章第一段比较难懂。一定要认真阅读。

【参考范文】

Whatreallymattersinaliontamingisthechair,whichconfusesthelionbythefourlegs.