高考英语冲刺模拟作文精选六篇
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假如你是李华,最近你从报纸上看到一家涉外酒店招聘暑期兼职工的广告,请你根据下列要点提示写一封应聘信。
1.李华,女,18岁,身体健康。
2.擅长英语,口语流利。
3.性格外向,交际能力强。
注意:
1.词数120左右。
2.书信格式已经给出,不计入总词数。
3.可以适当拓展。
Dear Sir or Madame,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Sir or Madame,
I am writing in response to your advertisement in the newspaper. My name is Li Hua and I am 18 years old. I think I will be fit f or the job as a waitress in your hotel this summer vacation. Myadva ntages are as follows:
Firstly, I am healthy and strong. I can work for long hours in sum mer. Secondly, my English is excellent. I can speak English fluently and have no difficulty communicating with foreigners. Finally , I a m outgoing and good at communicating with others. As a result, I am popular among my classmates and teachers.
I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your hotel. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
【解析】
试题分析:要求考生给一家招聘暑期兼职工的涉外酒店写应聘信。要符合提示所给要求,保证字数在120左右。
亮点分析:文中运用了较好的从句和复合句,如开头用复合句介绍自己
“My name is Li Hua and I am 18 years old…”简单却能使内容清晰,条件状语从句
“I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your hotel.”等;文中多处运用到好的固定短语,如“in response to…”
“be fit for…”“have no difficulty in doing sth”
“be good at doing sth”等;第二部分根据提示介绍优点,较好的运用了连接词“Firstly…Secondly…Finally…”,使文章逻辑层次分明,条理清晰;最后有适当的扩展,并且结尾有礼有节,是一篇较好的考场作文。
考点:考查应用文写作
假如你是新华中学的学生李华。某学生英文报正在招聘兼职的学生记者,你向应聘。请根据以下要点给该报社写一封自荐信。信的开头已经给出。
1.写信目的: 对兼职记者感兴趣,决定应聘。
2.自身优势: 知识面广, 英语水平高,写作能力强;
3.有过类似的经历(学校广播站记者);
4.性格外向,善于交际,乐意与他人合作。
5.个人要求: 希望能收到回复,并被聘用。
[写作要求]
1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;
2.信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总数。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
Dear Sir,
I am a student from Xinhua Middle School and I am glad to learn that you need a few more part-time English reporters. …
假设你是李华,前儿天你参加了Cloud Travel Agency组织的长白山三日游。下面是该旅行社的广告,请根据下面广告中箭头所指内容对其不实之处向消费者协会写一封投诉信。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to express my complaint about the service of Cloud Travel Agency. ________________________________________________________________________ ______
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to express my complaint about the service of Cloud Travel Agency.
A few days ago, I joined a three-day trip to Changbai Mountain with this travel agency. I found a few differences between their ads and action.
As they say, they provide a large air-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shabby bus without any air-conditioner. Yes, they served us lunch, but the food tasted terrible, some even with sand. We didn’t enjoy any kind of shower; we only bathed in cold water. As for sightseeing, the guides led us to several expensive souvenir shops, which wasted us much time. As a result, two scenery spots were left unseen in the end.
We do hope something can be done to prevent such things happening again.