初一年级英语作文

7上写作复习

写作策略：

1.优秀作文结构：使用三段式，要有开头，正文和结尾。

2. 优秀作文要求：1.审题严密，结构完整。

2.条理清晰(段落分明、有层次。如：能够使用顺序词或连接词）。

3.语句无误，逻辑性强。

4.句式多样，富于变化。用词精确，意义表达不牵强。

5.恰当使用谚语或优美句子。

3. 优秀作文写作步骤：1）审题构思，初步确定三段内容。

2）熟记并套用固定句式，不漏掉重要信息。

3）设计一至两句优美句式点睛。

4）重读检查，确保无错误。

往年调考试卷真题解析：

（07-08）假如你是新来的学生李刚，请向大家介绍一下你的个人情况，包括姓名，年龄，联系方式，个人爱好及理由等。

要求：句子通顺，语法正确，50词左右。

开头：Hello, everyone! My name is Li Gang.

结尾：This is me. How about you?

Can you write and tell me about yourself?

Would you like to be my friend?

Do you want to make friends with me?

或者用上一句复杂句式：

If you want to make friends with me, you can call me at 1234567./

Please send an e-mail to me. My e-mail address is .

正文：My name is …. I’m …years old.

I like …best. My favorite color is … because I think….

My favorite food is …and …. For dinner, I like …and….

In the subjects I have at school, I like …best. Because the … teacher is….

My telephone number is 1234567.

锦上添花句式：As for sports, I like… best.

In my free time, I like playing basketball. I think that’s good for my health.

The …teacher is so wise that he always makes his class interesting and lively. 2008—2009

你了解自己的父母吗？你知道他们的生日，兴趣，爱好吗？请以我的父母为题写一篇50词左右的短文。

开头：My father/mother is a worker. He is a _____ man.

锦句：I think my fathe is the greatest father in the world.

结尾：I love my father . We are a happy family. How about your father?

锦句：I love my parents. They give me so much love.

正文: My father is a ______. His birthday is ________ .

Although he is very busy, he often plays _______ on weekend.

Because his favourite sport is_______. He also likes ________.

My mother is a _____. She was born on _________.

She likes doing _____ in her free time.

She cooks well. She often cooks lots of healty food for me.

2010—2011

亲爱的同学，你的日常生活怎么样？请以“My day”为题写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍一下你一天的生活吧。

要求：1 短文中不得出现真实的人名，校名。

2 词数：60词左右

开头：Do you want to know about my day? My name is ____. I’m a middle school student. I go to school on weekdays.

结尾：It’s my day. How about your day?

锦句：What a busy day I have!

正文：My day

Today is _____. It’s my favorite day. Because I have _______ on ________ .

I usually get up at around six-thirty.

I brush my teeth and have a shower.

Then I ___________ . What a funny time to __________!

After breakfast, I take the number ______bus to school with my classmate.

I have classes all day. But I eat lunch at twelve o’clock in the school .

At __________ ,I do my homework. At nine o’clock, I finish my classes.

习作评析：

优秀作文的标准你掌握了吗？我们一起来做评卷老师，看看这些习作能得多少分吧！你能让它们更符合优秀作文的标准吗？

Myself

Hello ,everyone. My name is Li Gang. I am happy to be here. I am 13 years old. I like playing basketball and volleyball. Because it’s good for my health. I often play basketball and volleyball with my friends. And I have lots of healthy food. I like fruit. Strawberries and oranges are my favorite. My favorite color is blue. If you want to make friends with me, you can call me at 123.

My parents

My father is a worker. He often goes to work at seven o’clock. His birthday is August eighth. He likes to play basketball. He often watchs TV at home in his free. He works very hard. I love him. My mother is a worker too. Her birthday is july first. She likes shopping and watching TV. She likes Beijing Opera. She cooks well. She goes shopping with me. I love her too.

My day

Well, I usually get up at around six-thirty. I brush my teeth and have a shower. Then I eat my breakfast. What a funny time to est breakfast! After breakfast, I take the number 10 bus to school with my classmate. I have classes all day. But I eat lunch at twelve o’clock in the school . At seven o’clock,I do my homework. At nine o’clock, I finish my classes. My mother take me home.