good高中英语基础写作—学会用复合句和非谓语动词

All the students were required to hand in their
compositions after class.
（被动语态）
The teacher required that all the students should hand in
their compositions after class.
• 4.Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.
Thanks to the good weather , our journey was comfortable.
• 5.The old photo made me think of my happy childhood.
第三步：合并句子 ① Not everyone is good at learning English. ② Children from primary school start to
learn English and Chinese at the same time. ③ This will affect their Chinese study.
合 ③ She speaks a dialect.
句 ④ We find it hard to understand her dialect.
和
非
Kate, a new student from a northern
谓
province, speaks a dialect which we
语
find hard to understand.
提高句子档次的小结：
1. 用高级结构和词汇 2. 用分词短语合并句子
用介词短语合并句子 用独立主格结构合并句子 用连接词连接句子 3. 用定语从句、主语从句、强调句、倒装句 4. 用不同结构和词汇 5. 合适的过渡性词汇
学
用一句话表达
会
运 ① Kate is a new student.
用 复
② She comes from a northern province.
English and Chinese at the same time. ③ This will affect their Chinese study.
That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study because not everyone is good at learning English.
合并句子：
The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students’ composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line.
第二句: 1. 每天有很多作业做 2. 没有记住生字。 ① They have much homework to do every day. ② They fail to memorize the new characters. 合并句子： 1. They have so much homework to do every day
that they fail to memorize the new characters
2. With so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.
3. Because they have so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.
动
词
学 不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时
会 学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。
运 用 复
第一步：拆分成几个简单句
①不是人人都能学好英语。
合
②小学生同wenku.baidu.com学汉语和英语。
句
③这会影响汉语学习。
和 非 谓
第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句
① Not everyone is good at learning English.
2. Suddenly I thought of a good idea.
All of a sudden, a good idea occurred to me.
A good idea suddenly struck me.
3.You can find my house easily.
You have no trouble/difficulty in finding my house . You can find my house without any difficulty .
一. advanced vocabulary
较高级的词汇、短语 1. I used to like reading and writing poems at middle school.
I used to be fond of reading and writing poems at middle school.
连接两句话：
The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students’ composition is that they often use web languages when chatting on line. Moreover, they have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters.
Not until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened.
7.The teacher required all the students to hand in their compositions after class. ( 复合宾语)
• 5. We can achieve our goal only in this way. Only in this way can we achieve our goal .
• 6.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.
（宾语从句）
It was required by the teacher that all the students should hand in their compositions after class. （主语从句）
The teacher’s requirement was that all the students should hand in their compositions after class. （表语从句）
学 你来试试
会 使 现象 学生作文中出现很多错别字
用
1.上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。
复 合
原因
2.每天有很多作业做，没有记住生字。
句 要求：1. 用两句话表达表格内容
和 非
2. 两句话要有连贯性
谓 参考词汇：
语 动 词
错别字: wrongly-written characters 网络语言：web language
• 2. I was walking along Park Road towards the east. At that time, an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.
I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.
二.varied grammatical structure 丰富的语法结构
• 1. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.
On hearing the bad news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.
方法2：
If children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time, this will affect their Chinese study because not everyone is good at learning English.
• 4. He is surprised that the little girl knows so many things. To his surprise , the little girl knows so many things. What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.
The old photo reminded me of my happy childhood.
6.His invention will be good for people greatly.
His invention will ( be of great benefit to ) people. His invention will ( be greatly beneficial to )people. His invention will ( bring a lot of benefits to) people. People will ( benefit greatly from)his invention. His invention will( benefit people greatly ). His invention will ( do much good to )people.
第一句（两个信息点）： 1. 学生作文中出现很多错别字 2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。 ① There are many wrongly-written characters
in students’ compositions.
② They often use web languages when chatting on line.
• 3. The flat is in a building on Beijing Road. It is not far from our School.
The flat is in a building on Beijing Road, which is not far from our School.
语 ② Children from primary school learn English
动
and Chinese at the same time.
词 ③ This will affect their Chinese study.
第三步：合并句子 ① Not everyone is good at learning English. ② Children from primary school start to learn
三. proper linking words or sentences使用恰 当的连接词