几种最常见的英语作文高分大法

几种最常见的英语作文高分大法

英语高分作文指的是在考试中能达到第5档的文章。高考中对第5档作文的评分说明规定“准确表达了所有要点，应用了较多的语法结构和高级词汇，具备较强的语言应用能力；并有效使用语句间的连接成分，文章结构统一、紧凑”。根据这一要求，要使文章能够得高分，最常见的方法有：

一、适当运用高级词汇

在写作中“较高级词汇”主要包括两个方面的词汇：一是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。二是指与一

些较为通俗的词语同义、同用法的词语相比结构较为复杂、使用率相对较少的词汇。如

very用来表示程度，一般考生都会用，但若能用extremely甚至quite，相对very就好得多。因此相对very而言extremely/ quite就是高级词汇。在写作时，“较高级词汇”如能运用得贴

切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一两个来替换掉那些过于通俗普通的词汇，也会使你的作文

显得与众不同。如：

1. 我对英语非常感兴趣。

I’m very interested in English.

I’m quite / extremely interested in English.

2. 我们的校园位于市中心。

Our school is in the center of the city.

Our school is located in the center of the city.

Our campus situates in the center of the city.

3. 这几天我有很多事要做。

I have a lot of things to do these days.

I have endless things to do these days.

二、恰当运用复杂句式

好的书面表达句子既要简明扼要但更主要是要生动，句子要有层次，结构值得让人分析。如果一篇作文通篇都只是一些通俗简单的短句或简单句，势必会让文章大大减色而失

去应有的得分亮点，因此应使用一些较为复杂句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等来增强

语句的表现力。使用一些复杂句式，特别是打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子将会使

你的文章顿生生机和活力。

1. My brother is a PLA man, and he is ready to help others.

→ My brother who is a PLA man is ready to help others. （使用定语从句）→ My brother, who is a PLA man, is ready to help others.

→ My brother, a PLA man, is ready to help others. （使用同位语）

2. 我们应当尽力帮助他。

→ We should try our best to help him.

→ We s hould spare no effort to help him.

→ We should help him as far as we can.

→ We should do whatever we can to help him.

三、准确运用过渡词、过渡句

有的同学的作文乍看每个句子语法和句子结构都很准确，但就是读起来总显得前后脱节，内容不统一。这个问题其实出在他的文中少了一些应有的过渡词或过渡句，这样就使

得文中句子都只是一些单个零碎的句子，缺乏整体感。因此在写作时，我们应按时间、空

间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点的运用，过渡词或过渡句的准确运用加强了句子之间、段

落之间的联系，使文章表达连贯，浑然一体。书面表达中常用的可起衔接连贯作用的过渡词、句有：

1. 表递进：and; then ; besides; what’s more; in addiction ; besides furthermore; moreover ;

2. 表转折：but; however; though; or else; otherwise ; on the contrary; while; after all etc.

3. 表总结：finally; at last; in brief; in a word; in all; generally speaking etc.

4. 表描述：for example; for instance; actually; in fact; as a matter of fact; in other words etc.

5. 表推理：as a result; therefore; thus; on account of etc.

6. 表强调：indeed; certainly; surely; above all etc.

7. 表对比：in the same way; similarly; just as; on the one hand , instead etc.

8. 表目的：for this reason; for the purpose of; so as to; so that etc.

9. 时间顺序first, second, then, finally/at last , soon，immediately, suddenly

10. 空间顺序：h ere, there, on one side…on the other side, in front of, at the back of, next to

11. 对称：for one thing, for another thing; on one hand, on the other hand

12. 因果：because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of)

13. 条件：as long as, so long as, on condition that, if, unless

14. 让步：though, as, even if/though, whether, who (what, when, where)ever

15. 递进：what’s more, besides, to make matters worse, what’s worse

16. 过渡性插入语：I think, I’m afraid, you know, As we all know

实战训练：用适当的过渡词填空，使短文通顺连贯：

As a senior student, I have many things in mind to speak out most.

__________(首先对校长说), I’d like to suggest creating a better environment for us to live and study in. We devote all the time to our lessons,

__________(因此) we’d like more time to relax. Relaxation is of equal importance.__________(此外), we hope to have more communication with you so that you can learn about our opinions.

__________(其次对老师说), we hope you can give us more free time to think by ourselves and smile more in class , because smile is sunshine!

__________(最后对我们的父母说), we expect you to have a better understanding of us.

__________(同时), to be independent, we need more space of our own.

Only by communicating with each other can we get along well together.

参考答案：First, To the headmaster; so; besides; second, To the teachers; Finally, to our parents; Meanwhile

四、灵活扩展句子

句子太短，会使文章显得零碎，读起来也索然寡味，平时写作练习时可试着使用一些从句或特定结构将句子扩长。如：

1. 我们应该珍惜时间。

We should value time. → We should take action to value time.

→ We should take action to value time to do more work.

→ We should take action to value time instead of wasting it.

→Valuing time is valuing our lives and wasting others’ time equals killing others.

→ As middle school students, what we should do is to value time and spare no efforts to work on our study.

1. 吸烟有害健康。

Smoking does harm to the health.

→ Smoking results in/ contributes to/ leads to the damage of the health.