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? The book was interesting, and I read it rapidly.
? 2. The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, the boys mopped the floor.
? The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, and the boys mopped the floor.
大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流
可以互相讨论下，但要小声点
9
? 避免重复 ? 9.In my opinion, I think we should ask them for
advice.
? In my opinion, we should ask them for advice.
? I think we should ask them for advice.
newspaper every day.
? 6. Coming out of the classroom, my heart was beating very fast.
? Coming out of the classroom, I felt my heart beating very fast.
避免指代不清 ? 7. She asked her sister why she wasn't
invited to the party.
? She asked why her sister wasn't invited to the party.
? She asked her sister, “Why wasn't I invited to the party?”
? 注意时态一致
? 15. I went shopping yesterday. There were many people in the supermarket. People are carrying baskets or taking carts. I struggled in the crowds picking up the things I need. When I finished my shopping I am so tired.
? 避免人称代词混淆 ? 8.We had been on the plane for eighteen hours,
and you got pretty tired of sitting that long.
? We had been on the plane for eighteen hours, and we got pretty tired of sitting that long.
? A young man wants to see you downstairs.
? There is a man who wants to see you downstairs.
? 13. I will not forget my dear friends forever. ? I will never forget my dear friends.
? I got good marks in almost every subject.
? 注意逻辑主语 ? 5. To be well-informed, reading newspaper
is a good habit. ? To be well-informed, we should read
? 避免误置修饰语 ? 3. At the age of six my father began to teach
me English. ? My father began to teach me English when I
was six.
? 4. I almost got good marks in every subject.
? 注意时态一致
? I went shopping yesterday. There were many people in the supermarket. People were carrying baskets or taking carts. I struggled in the crowds picking up the things I needed. When I finished my shopping, I was so tired.
? 11. During staying in Beijing, I visited a lot of places of interest.
? During my stay in Beijing, I …
? While staying in Beijing, I …
? 12. There is a man wants to see you downstairs.
语言：表达正确，语言流畅 , 用词恰当，10' 句式多样化.
组织结构：结构正确，上下文连贯一致 5'
写作步骤：
1。写前准备：看清题意，理清思路（写什么） 2。写作过程：提纲（outline ）
动笔（writing ） 检查（check ）
正确连接分句 ? 1. The book was interesting, I read it rapidly.
写作对策
考核 目标 1.能运用所学的语言知识写出通顺正确的句子 2。能根据题意连贯、贴切地进行书面表达
篇章写作要求： 统一性(unity) ：围绕主题
(coherence) ：逻辑性,过渡词 一致性(consisteBaidu Nhomakorabeacy) ：时态，人称
英语作文要求：
内容：观点明确，内容充实， 理由充分. 10'
? 尽量避免汉语干扰 ? 10. The books in our library are getting more
and more.
? There are more and more books in our library.
? The number of books in our library is getting bigger and bigger.
? 2. The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, the boys mopped the floor.
? The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, and the boys mopped the floor.
大家有疑问的，可以询问和交流
可以互相讨论下，但要小声点
9
? 避免重复 ? 9.In my opinion, I think we should ask them for
advice.
? In my opinion, we should ask them for advice.
? I think we should ask them for advice.
newspaper every day.
? 6. Coming out of the classroom, my heart was beating very fast.
? Coming out of the classroom, I felt my heart beating very fast.
避免指代不清 ? 7. She asked her sister why she wasn't
invited to the party.
? She asked why her sister wasn't invited to the party.
? She asked her sister, “Why wasn't I invited to the party?”
? 注意时态一致
? 15. I went shopping yesterday. There were many people in the supermarket. People are carrying baskets or taking carts. I struggled in the crowds picking up the things I need. When I finished my shopping I am so tired.
? 避免人称代词混淆 ? 8.We had been on the plane for eighteen hours,
and you got pretty tired of sitting that long.
? We had been on the plane for eighteen hours, and we got pretty tired of sitting that long.
? A young man wants to see you downstairs.
? There is a man who wants to see you downstairs.
? 13. I will not forget my dear friends forever. ? I will never forget my dear friends.
? I got good marks in almost every subject.
? 注意逻辑主语 ? 5. To be well-informed, reading newspaper
is a good habit. ? To be well-informed, we should read
? 避免误置修饰语 ? 3. At the age of six my father began to teach
me English. ? My father began to teach me English when I
was six.
? 4. I almost got good marks in every subject.
? 注意时态一致
? I went shopping yesterday. There were many people in the supermarket. People were carrying baskets or taking carts. I struggled in the crowds picking up the things I needed. When I finished my shopping, I was so tired.
? 11. During staying in Beijing, I visited a lot of places of interest.
? During my stay in Beijing, I …
? While staying in Beijing, I …
? 12. There is a man wants to see you downstairs.
语言：表达正确，语言流畅 , 用词恰当，10' 句式多样化.
组织结构：结构正确，上下文连贯一致 5'
写作步骤：
1。写前准备：看清题意，理清思路（写什么） 2。写作过程：提纲（outline ）
动笔（writing ） 检查（check ）
正确连接分句 ? 1. The book was interesting, I read it rapidly.
写作对策
考核 目标 1.能运用所学的语言知识写出通顺正确的句子 2。能根据题意连贯、贴切地进行书面表达
篇章写作要求： 统一性(unity) ：围绕主题
(coherence) ：逻辑性,过渡词 一致性(consisteBaidu Nhomakorabeacy) ：时态，人称
英语作文要求：
内容：观点明确，内容充实， 理由充分. 10'
? 尽量避免汉语干扰 ? 10. The books in our library are getting more
and more.
? There are more and more books in our library.
? The number of books in our library is getting bigger and bigger.