香港朗文GOLD小学英语1A写作课件 organising_04

fishing
Problems dolphins are facing
reclamation
What people do: _tu_r_n_s_e_a_i_nt_o_l_a_n_d_ ______________
Result: _fe_w_e_r_p_l_ac_e_s_w__he_r_e _do_l_p_hi_n_s_c_a_n_li_v_e__
Result:
Therefore there are fewer fish for us to eat.
_fe_w_e_r_f_i_sh__f_or____
_do_l_p_hi_n_s_t_o_e_a_t___
Action:
We will have no fish to eat unless you stop
Organising ideas (4):
Using a diagram to write an article
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I am a friendly dolphin and I am writing because we are facing many problems. We need you to help save our lives.
The first problem we are facing is reclamation. You keep turning sea into land. Therefore there are fewer places where we can live. We will have nowhere to live unless you stop turning sea into land.
Please take action before it is too late!
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The third problem we are facing is fishing. You keep fishing in areas where we live. Therefore there are fewer fish for us to eat. We will have no fish to eat unless you stop fishing in areas where we live.
We will become extinct unless you stop
_st_o_p_d_u_m_p_i_ng__to_x_i_c dumping toxic waste into the sea.
_w_as_t_e_i_n_to__th_e__se_a_
Problems dolphins are facing
_st_o_p_t_u_r_ni_n_g_s_e_a__ turning sea into land.
_in_t_o _la_n_d________
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The second problem we are facing is water pollution. You keep dumping toxic waste into the sea. Therefore we become ill and die. We will become extinct unless you stop dumping toxic waste into the sea.
Result:
Therefore there are fewer places where we
_fe_w_e_r_p_l_ac_e_s_w__he_r_e can live.
_do_l_p_hi_n_s_c_a_n_li_v_e__
Action:
We will have nowhere to live unless you stop
fishing
Problems dolphins are facing
reclamation
What people do: _tu_r_n_s_e_a_i_nt_o_l_a_n_d_ ______________
Result: _fe_w_e_r_p_l_ac_e_s_w__he_r_e _do_l_p_hi_n_s_c_a_n_li_v_e__
Action: _st_o_p_d_u_m_p_i_ng__to_x_i_c _w_as_t_e_i_n_to__th_e__se_a_
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Action: _st_o_p_t_u_r_ni_n_g_s_e_a__ _in_t_o _la_n_d________
water pollution
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Problems dolphins are facing
reclamation
The first problem we are facing is reclamation.
பைடு நூலகம்
What people do: You keep turning sea into land. _tu_r_n_s_e_a_i_nt_o_l_a_n_d_ ______________
Action: _st_o_p_d_u_m_p_i_ng__to_x_i_c _w_as_t_e_i_n_to__th_e__se_a_
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_st_o_p_f_is_h_i_ng__in__ar_e_as fishing in areas where we live.
_w_h_er_e_d_o_l_p_h_in_s_li_v_e
Well done! Now you can write the article.
Save the dolphins
Problems dolphins are facing
The second problem we are facing is water
water pollution pollution.
What people do: You keep dumping toxic waste into the sea.
fishing
The third problem we are facing is fishing.
What people do: You keep fishing in areas where we live.
_fi_s_h_in__a_re_a_s_w_h_e_r_e _do_l_p_hi_n_s_li_v_e_____
fishing
What people do: _fi_s_h_in__a_re_a_s_w_h_e_r_e _do_l_p_hi_n_s_li_v_e_____
Result: _fe_w_e_r_f_i_sh__f_or____ _do_l_p_hi_n_s_t_o_e_a_t___
Action: _st_o_p_f_is_h_i_ng__in__ar_e_as _w_h_er_e_d_o_l_p_h_in_s_li_v_e
Action: _st_o_p_t_u_r_ni_n_g_s_e_a__ _in_t_o _la_n_d________
water pollution
What people do: _du_m__p _t_ox_i_c_w_a_s_t_e_ _in_t_o _t_h_e _s_e_a _____
Result: _do_l_p_hi_n_s_b_e_c_o_m_e_i_ll _an_d__di_e_________
_du_m__p _t_ox_i_c_w_a_s_t_e_ _in_t_o _t_h_e _s_e_a _____
Result:
Therefore we become ill and die.
_do_l_p_hi_n_s_b_e_c_o_m_e_i_ll
_an_d__di_e_________
Action:
Problems dolphins are facing
reclamation
What people do: _tu_r_n_s_e_a_i_nt_o_l_a_n_d_ ______________
Result: _fe_w_e_r_p_l_ac_e_s_w__he_r_e _do_l_p_hi_n_s_c_a_n_li_v_e__
Action: _st_o_p_t_u_r_ni_n_g_s_e_a__ _in_t_o _la_n_d________
water pollution
What people do: _du_m__p _t_ox_i_c_w_a_s_t_e_ _in_t_o _t_h_e _s_e_a _____
Result: _do_l_p_hi_n_s_b_e_c_o_m_e_i_ll _an_d__di_e_________
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