托福写作常见的扣分点(下)

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托福写作常见的扣分点（下）

托福写作练习了很多，可是分数还是很低，不知道自己错在哪?今天杭州托福培训为大家整理了托福写作常见的扣分点，供大家参考。

1、固定用法错误

To some extends, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.

To some extends应改为To some extent

2、例证夸张

For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.

虽然善意的谎言是必要的，但是其功效显然没有这么大。

3、成分多余

According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.

该句中的shows that是多余的成分。

4、词性混乱

However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband"

may be very privacy and embarrassingly.

句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassing。

5、时态错误

托福写作中的大作文一般使用现在时态，除了拿过去事件作为例子，用过去时态。

Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental

creation.

claimed应该改为claim。

以上就是杭州托福培训新航道为大家整理的托福写作常见的扣分点，希望大家能够根据

这些扣分点来备考，知道错在哪里才可以去改正，希望同学们在托福写作中取得高分。

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