高考写作之道歉信(课堂PPT)

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2.我妹妹生病了，她才四岁，不能照顾自己，而爸 爸妈妈又在上班，于是我不得不在家照顾妹妹。
①My younger sister had a bad fever. She is too young to look after herself, and my parents were at work. Therefore / In that case, I had to stay at home to take care of her. That caused me unable to meet you as appointed.
be able to understand. 5. I hope that this does not cause you too much
inconvenience.
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书面表达 假如你是李华，你和Smith先生约定昨天下午三点 去他办公室，听他给你关于学习英语的建议。但 由于一些原因没有赴约，特写信表示歉意，并希 望另约时间。内容如下： （1）表达未能赴约的歉意 （2）未能赴约的原因 （3）希望另约时间 要求：100字左右
4.在去见Smith的路上，我碰到一起交通事故，一 位老人受伤倒地，没人帮忙，自己需要送老人到 医院
5.本人生病，医生建议我呆在家里，好好休息。13
未能赴约原因： 1. 我叔叔从美国回来,下午3点时分下飞机。然而，
我爸爸妈妈没时间去接，因此我不得不去机场接 他。
Yesterday afternoon, my uncle came from America and got off at 3pm, but my parents had no time to pick him up, in which case I had to meet him at the airport. After that it was too late to meet you. Thus I missed our appointment.
I have caught a serious cold with a continuous fever last week and the doctor asked me to stay in bed for a week since I was very weak and the weather was so cold. I thought I would recover after these days, but things go contrary to my wishes. Therefore, I couldn't make it. I feel really sorry for not going with you and the inconvenience it would bring to you. I hope we can arrange another time afterwards. If so, don't hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date. I do long for a pleasant time with you.
结尾： ①I hope you can give me another chance to
make an appointment with you again. ②I will appreciate it if you can give me another
chance to meet me. ③Hope you can forgive me and give me another
道歉。
Please accept my apology. I do hope you will understand me and excuse me for my carelessness.
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其他常用句式
1. Would you mind if I change the appointment time?
② My younger sister had a bad fever. She is too young to look after herself, and my parents were at work, in which case I had to stay at home to take care of her. That caused me unable to meet you as appointed.
以使行文连贯。
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Dear Mr. Smith,
Thank you for your invitation to enjoy the Chinese Contemporary Oil Painting Exhibition this Saturday morning. Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I can't go along with you, due to a sudden illness falling upon me a few days ago.
• Much to my regret I was unable to keep my engagement to meet you at the park gate.很抱歉 我没有遵守约定在公园门口等您。
• I feel terribly sorry for the sudden change of plan and feel it a pity to miss the opportunity.
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• 精彩结尾 • I will try my best to avoid the accident
happening again in the future. • 我将尽全力避免将来发生同样的事故。 • I sincerely hope you can understand my
situation and accept my apology. • 真诚的希望你能理解我的处境，并接受我的
Hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.
Yours faithfull2y,
道歉信 A Letter of apology
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Structures
• Para 1：简明说明写信目的，为自己的过 失表示歉意，希望得到对方的谅解。
• 假定你是李华。你校外教史密斯先生给你发来 一封电子邮件，邀请你本周六上午陪他去市博 物馆看中国当代油画展（ Chinese Contemporary Oil Painting Exhibition ）。但 是你有事不能同往。请你用英语给他回一封电 子邮件，内容包括：
• 1.表示歉意；2. 解释原因；3. 你的打算 • 注意：1.字数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，
sincerely yours, Li Hua
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开头
① I’m writing to make an apology to you for missing our appointment at 3 o’clock yesterday afternoon, when you planned /intended to give me advice on how to learn English well.
② I’m writing to be sorry for being unable to keep the appointment we made at 3 o’clock yesterday afternoon, when you planned /intended to give me advice on how to learn English well.
2. Would it be convenient for you…? 3. It is very kind of you to ask us to … But, to our
regret, we cannot accept it. 4. I am sorry I cannot … and I trust that you will
开头已给出，不计总数
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Dear smith, I’m writing to apologize to you for my failing
to keep the appointment that we should meet at 3pm yesterday when you will give me some advice on how to learn English well.______________ ___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ ___________________________________________ ___________________________________________
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3.在去见Smith的路上，自己的车坏了，不能按时 去约见他。
4.在去见Smith的路上，我碰到一起交通事故，一 位老人受伤倒地，没人帮忙，自己需要送老人到 医院
源自文库5.本人生病，医生建议我呆在家里，好好休息。
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Dear Mr Smith,
I’m writing to beg you to excuse me for missing our appointment _o_n_ 3 yesterday afternoon, w__h_i_c_h_ you intended to give me advatice on English learning. Iw’mhesnorry for the inconvenience it caused to you.
• Para 2：详细说明当时情况，解释原因， 语气要诚恳。 以上两段有时会合二为一
• Para 3：提出补救方法，具体提出自己的 想法，希望能弥补过失，消除误会。
• Para 4：再次表示歉意，愿意为此负责， 希望以后不再出现类似不愉快事件。
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• 经典套用句型 精彩句首：
I am writing this letter to apologize to you for not being able to …我写这信是因……向你道歉 • I express my regret at being unable to do… 对未 能做…，我表示歉意
• 对突然的改变，我感到十分的抱歉，对错过这个 机会感到很可惜。
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• 精彩段中 • Please forgive me for a stupid choice of
words. 请原谅我说话欠妥。 • I feel awfully sorry about it and want you
know what happened. 为此，我感到非常内 疚，所以想告诉你实情。 • I sincerely hope you can understand that I offended you unintentionally. 我真心希望你能理解，我并非有意冒犯您。
③ I’m writing to express my sorry for not being able to meet you at 3:00 yesterday afternoon as we appointed, when you planned / intended to give me some advice on how to learn English well. 11
chance to meet me.
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内容
未能赴约的具体原因：可任选其一
1.我叔叔从美国回来, 3:00时下飞机。然而，我爸 爸妈妈没时间去接，因此我不得不去机场接他。
2.我妹妹生病了，她才四岁，不能照顾自己，而爸 爸妈妈又在上班，于是我不得不在家照顾妹妹。
3.在去见Smith的路上，自己的车坏了，不能按时 去约见他。