高中英语作文 一建议信

• Dear schoolmates, I am liHua, a graduate from our school. Now I am studying in Beijing University. To help you to live more easily through your high school years, I am very glad to give my personal advice on how to live a healthy life in high school. First and foremost, strike a balance between your studies and relaxation. In high school, with too much to learn and too much homework to do, you suffer from more stress. To keep fit, you must spare some time to relax yourself, or your health will get worse.
• 常用的过渡词有： • 递进型： also, (and)besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only…but also等； • 解释型：that is (to say), in other words, or, namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等； • 转折型：however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the contrary,on the other hand 等； • 列举型：firstly…secondly…finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等 • 举例型：for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take… for example等
Besides, keep a balance diet. Only by having nutritious food can your body function well. What’s more, do sports regularly. Doing sports can build up our body and help reduce stress. Last but not least, communicate more with your parents, friends and teachers. High school can be filled with anxiety and worry. Whenever in trouble, turn to your parents, friends or teachers, they can share your happiness and sorrow and help you settle your problems. In a nutshell, only by living a healthy life can we go through high school successfully.
• 因果型：because (of), since, now that, thanks to, due to; thus, therefore, as a result (consequence),so… that, so that等； • 让步型：though, although, in spite of, despite 等； • 顺序型：first…next…and then…finally, first…then…after that…finally 等； • 并列型：and, both…and, or, either…or, as well as, 等 • 时间型：afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, no sooner…than （一….就）等 • 总结型：in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion ，all in all, in a nutshell （简单地说） 等 • 见解型：in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned,I’m sure 等 • 条件型：if, as long as, so long as, on condition that(如 果) , unless 等
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• 三段式作文法
• 重点诠释： • 所谓三段式就是将一篇书面表达按三段的写作模式谋篇 布局。就整体篇章结构而言，如何把握较大的写作空间， 三段式的写作模式为最佳选择。三段式的模式写法通常 为： • 1．第一段开门见山，提出要解决的问题或观点，或者 把时间，地点，人物和主要事件及时点出。 • 2．第二段要摆出事实或提出论据，或者把事情发展的 经过详细写出来。 • 3．最后一段，得出结论或理由。 • 注意：要学会使用过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”和“粘合剂 ”。恰当地使用过渡词可避免结构松散，层次分明，表 意不清等弊端，使文章条理清楚，文字连贯流畅。