完整版初中英语写作课件.ppt

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The summer holiday is coming. I'm going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo. I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
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初中英语作文要求要求学生在20 分钟内写出60-80词左右的短文， 并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。
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主要问题
要点不全 线索不清
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【我的经验】
• 审题 • 确定文体 记叙文 书信 。。。 • 把人称和时态定下来 • 列出要点 • 句句之间，段段之间最好能用连接词、句
子，如first of all，above all，at last ，高 级一点的可以用meanwhile
• However noise and pollution • more information
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• 再加点写信的客套话，就ok了
• 全文如下
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.
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开头
1、开门见山，揭示主题 文章一开头就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如 "How I Spent My Vacation"(我怎样度假)的开头是： I spent my last vacation happily.
下面是题为"Honesty"(谈诚实)一文中的开头：
Honesty is one of the best virtues. An honest man is always trusted and respected. On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar", and is looked upon by honest people.
暑假计划 1、好好休息，学会放松 2、读书，因为读书既有趣又能学到很多知识 3、陪父母聊天，帮他们做家务 4、参加社会活动，了解社会 5、……
注意： 1、词数80～100； 2、文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名； 3、方框内容不必逐字翻译，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：知识 knowledge, 社会活动 social activities
Would you please offer us more information about it?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
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紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了，你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据 下面方框内的提示写一篇短文，谈谈你的假期计划。
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2、交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头
在文章的开头，先把人物、事件和环境交 待清楚。例如"A Trip to Jinshan" (去金山旅游) 的开头：
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
Dear Sir or Madam, _____________________________________________ _____________________________
Yours faithfully, Zhang Hua
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针对3要点
• good for the development of my hometown more jobs 好处 同意该项目
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书面表达六步法
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假定你叫张华，最近从报纸上得知美国某公司将在你的家乡
建一座工厂，请给该公司写封电子邮件。要点如下：
●表示欢迎：有利于家乡发展等；
●感到担忧：造成环境污染等；
●希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。
注意：1．词数80-100； 2．请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥以使行文连贯； 3．邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。