短文改错 专题一 第1课时 练习

题组一体验真题

Passage 1

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big，but the Restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some People even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady.

答案

My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to

that

where I live.Though not very

big，the Restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers

at meal times.Some people even had

have to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key

to his success is honest

honesty.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables

or

and high

quality oil are using

used for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams

becoming rich in the

a short period of time.Instead，he hopes that

our

his business will

grow

steady steadily.

1.that→where[考查宾语从句的连词用法。由句子结构可知，介词to之后为宾

语从句。从句谓语是不及物动词live。故用where引导。]

2.去掉but[考查从属连词与并列连词。从属连词though不可与并列连词but连

用。]

3.had→have[考查语境中的时态运用。根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般现

在时。]

4.honest→honesty[考查名词作表语。由句意“他成功的关键是诚信”可知应

当用名词形式。]

5.or→and[考查并列连词的用法。根据句意可知二者之间为并列关系而非选择

关系。]

ing→used[考查固定短语的用法。be used for“用来做”，为固定短语。]

7.在dreams之后加上of或about[考查短语动词。固定短语dream of/about

(doing) sth.的意思是“梦想做某事”。]

8.the→a[考查代词的用法。in a short period of time为固定词组，意思是“短时

间内”。]

9.our→his[考查冠词的用法。短文介绍了my uncle诚信经营餐馆的事情，故将

our改为his。]

10.steady→steadily[考查副词的用法。修饰谓语动词用副词。]

Passage 2

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

(2015·全国卷Ⅰ)When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There

the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，we’ll live to regret it.

答案

When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I

think

thought

I would be happy

there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the

air is clean

or

and

the mountains are green.Unfortunately，

on

with

the development of

industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have

shown that global warming has already become a very seriously

serious

problem.The

airs

air

we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much

Many

rare animals are dying out.We must

found find ways to protect

your

our/the

environment.If we fail to do so，we’ll live to

regret it.

题组二尝试模拟

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。