假定你是李华计划和同学去敬老院

假定你是李华计划和同学去敬老院

1. xx 年课标全国卷I

假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风

俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；

3. 开头语已为你写好。

[ 写作提示]

本文为书信体提纲式作文。写作时以一般现在时为基本时态，以第一人称为主体人称；注意要点要齐全，包括栏目介绍、稿件内容、稿件长度和交稿日期：写作时注意恰当地使用衔接词和过渡词，以使文章行文连贯、流畅：这一点是高考英语高分作文所必须具备的要素。

One possible version ：

Dear Peter

I ' d like to ask you to write an article for our school's

English newspaper.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you ．

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息要求给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，内容是美国节日风俗和中学生生活。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：首先，简单介绍校英文报栏目的情况。2、建议Peter 介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活。3、稿件的要求及时间。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。4. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. 运用了过去分词作后置定语，

And we would especially wele articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. 运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be popular among, so long as, look forward to, hear from 等。

考点：考查提纲作文。

【满分作文】

Dear Peter ，

Recently ，in order to broaden our horizons ：our school newspaper，which is very popular amongus students ，will start a column about western life and culture ．We are in great need

of such articles ．That 's why I am writing to you

The “Foreign Cultures ” section carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their countries. And we would especially wele articles about the life of American senior-high and how Americans spend their holidays and

festivals. In addition ，you can introduce a western festival, such as Christmas, the Independence Day and so on.

In a word, you can write anything relevant so long as it '

s interesting and informative ．

before June 28th ，so that it can be published in time.

Looking forward to your reply ．

Yours ，

Li Hua

2. xx 年课标全国卷II

假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院( nursing home )陪老人们过重阳节( the Double Ninth Festival )。请给外教Lucy 写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：

1. 出发及返回时间；

2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。

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注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 结语已为你写好。

[ 写作提示]

1 ．本文为应用文——电子邮件的写作，属于提纲类作文。在写作时应使用第一人称，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

2 ．内容要点：(1)出发及返回时间；(2)在敬老院的活动：包饺子、表演节目等。

One possible version ：

Dear Lucy ．

I ' d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival ．It

is the day for the elderly in our culture ．We'll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there ．We'll also spend somefun time together singing ，dancing and playing games，which we