高中英语建议信课件
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Persuasive writing
----A letter of suggestion
What is a good writing passage (group 1)
1.beautiful sentences 2.correct grammar structures 3.logical writing 4. nice handwriting …
Practice ( group 4) 假如你是第一中学二年级的学生李华，你 校就要不要在学校内开办艺术画廊征求全校 师生建议，请你给校委员会写一封信，给出 自己的建议及理由，内容包括： 1. 建议开办一个校园艺术画廊，展示在校 学生自己的作品； 2. 画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平 台，开阔学生视野、丰富校园文化。 有用词汇： 平台 Platform 开阔眼界 broaden one’s horizons 丰富 enrich
来自百度文库
Para1.你是第一中学二年级的学生李华,建议 开办一个校园艺术画廊，展示在校学生自己 的作品；
Para 2. 画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的 平台，开阔学生视野、丰富校园文化。 有用词汇： 平台 Platform 开阔眼界 broaden one’s horizons 丰富 enrich
Usually- used expressions (group 3 )
首段：表明写作意图，陈述事由。 I am writing to express my ideas concerning ... I am writing to suggest that ….(虚拟) 主体：提出建议并阐述理由。 If I were you, I would ... It seems to me that you could also ... On the one hand… On the other hand… 结尾：希望收信人接受建议。 I hope you will find these suggestions useful / helpful. I hope that you take my suggestions into consideration.
A good piece of writing
Accuracy （准确性）
—准确无误地表达作者意图 —覆盖要求的所有要点 —单词、句子没有拼写、语法错误 －应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复 杂）语言地道
Excellence （优良性）
Coherence (连贯性）
－有效地使用了语句间的连 接成分，使全文结构紧凑， 行文连贯，条理清楚。
A letter of suggestion ( group 2)
1. practical writing (应用文). 2. four elements: Salutation(称呼), main body(正文), ending(结束语)and signature(签名). 3. tense :present / future 4. three paragraphs First Para. Intention Second Para. suggestions / reasons Third Para. ending
Para
3 希望建议被采纳、
落款
Dear Committee members, I’m Li Hua, one of grade two students in NO.1 middle school. I’m writing to suggest that we should open an art gallery to display students’ own works. The reasons are as follows. First, the art gallery can provide a platform for us students to show ourselves, which helps to improve students ’ self-confidence as well as communication skills. Second, It can also help to broaden students’ horizons .Third, it is a good way to enrich school culture as well. Thanks for reading my letter. I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration. Yours faithfully, Li Hua
----A letter of suggestion
What is a good writing passage (group 1)
1.beautiful sentences 2.correct grammar structures 3.logical writing 4. nice handwriting …
Practice ( group 4) 假如你是第一中学二年级的学生李华，你 校就要不要在学校内开办艺术画廊征求全校 师生建议，请你给校委员会写一封信，给出 自己的建议及理由，内容包括： 1. 建议开办一个校园艺术画廊，展示在校 学生自己的作品； 2. 画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平 台，开阔学生视野、丰富校园文化。 有用词汇： 平台 Platform 开阔眼界 broaden one’s horizons 丰富 enrich
来自百度文库
Para1.你是第一中学二年级的学生李华,建议 开办一个校园艺术画廊，展示在校学生自己 的作品；
Para 2. 画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的 平台，开阔学生视野、丰富校园文化。 有用词汇： 平台 Platform 开阔眼界 broaden one’s horizons 丰富 enrich
Usually- used expressions (group 3 )
首段：表明写作意图，陈述事由。 I am writing to express my ideas concerning ... I am writing to suggest that ….(虚拟) 主体：提出建议并阐述理由。 If I were you, I would ... It seems to me that you could also ... On the one hand… On the other hand… 结尾：希望收信人接受建议。 I hope you will find these suggestions useful / helpful. I hope that you take my suggestions into consideration.
A good piece of writing
Accuracy （准确性）
—准确无误地表达作者意图 —覆盖要求的所有要点 —单词、句子没有拼写、语法错误 －应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复 杂）语言地道
Excellence （优良性）
Coherence (连贯性）
－有效地使用了语句间的连 接成分，使全文结构紧凑， 行文连贯，条理清楚。
A letter of suggestion ( group 2)
1. practical writing (应用文). 2. four elements: Salutation(称呼), main body(正文), ending(结束语)and signature(签名). 3. tense :present / future 4. three paragraphs First Para. Intention Second Para. suggestions / reasons Third Para. ending
Para
3 希望建议被采纳、
落款
Dear Committee members, I’m Li Hua, one of grade two students in NO.1 middle school. I’m writing to suggest that we should open an art gallery to display students’ own works. The reasons are as follows. First, the art gallery can provide a platform for us students to show ourselves, which helps to improve students ’ self-confidence as well as communication skills. Second, It can also help to broaden students’ horizons .Third, it is a good way to enrich school culture as well. Thanks for reading my letter. I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration. Yours faithfully, Li Hua