英语写作指导----对禁烟令的看法

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It is all known that smoking has lots of disadvantages . On the one hand , it may cause some illnesses , such as cough , toothache , cancer and so on . It’s said that millions of people lose their lives because of smoking or second-hand smoke . It’s really amazing ! On the other hand , it does harm to the environment . It brings serious air pollution . Besides , it may lead to fire because of carelessness . Also , plenty of money is wasted every year .
Example 1
So we must do something to keep away from smoking . First of all , we ourselves should say no to smoking . Then , we should try to stop him if a person smokes nearby or in public .
每年的5月31日是世界禁烟日。从今年 的6月1日起，北京将实施“史上最严”的 控烟条例，除了所有公共场所，工作场所 室内区域及公共交通工具禁止吸烟外，部 分室外场所也被列入禁烟范围，违反禁令 的烟民，最高可罚款200元。请你结合青 少年特点，就禁烟话题谈一谈看法。词数 在80至100之间。
写作指导：
If everyone supports for smoking ban , we will have a cleaner and more beautiful environment .
可能用到的词汇和句型：
词汇： smoke \ be bad for health \ lose one’s life \ cause illnesses \ keep away from try to stop \ follow the new law \ say no to smoking \ environment \ be harmful to \ influence \ lead to fire
句型： Smoking is bad for health . We must do something to … We should … We shouldn’t … If … , we will … 关联词： On the one hand , on the other hand , besides , also , first of all , next ,then ,
内容分析：本文要求对禁烟令发表自己的观点。 因此，写作过程中要紧扣这一中心，明确写作 的要点。从写作素材看，本文主要用一般现在 时，行文主要用第一人称。
内容要点： （1）吸烟带来的危害性：损害自身身体健康， 引起咳嗽、牙周炎、肺癌等疾病；影响青少年 的正常发育；影响别人身体健康；破坏环境； 可能引起火灾；给家庭带来一定的经济负担； （2）态度及做法：我们应当旗帜鲜明发对吸烟； 小手拉大手，劝阻身边的人不吸烟；