高考英语写作技巧点拨系列

Actions are important in other fields, too. Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams. Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference.
(10)Only in this way can we. . . (11)First, . . . Second, . . . . . Third, . . . (12)The social problem has aroused great concern among people. (13)We should raise people’s awareness of. . .
【连句成篇】过渡巧而自然 Actions Speak Louder than Words
People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple planting trees happily.
The message conveyed here is clear: “Actions speak louder than words. ” Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate action should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees, to better the environment.
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3. 为了改善环境，我们应该立即采取措施，如停止砍伐树木。 (一般表达)To improve the environment, we should take immediate action. We should stop cutting down trees. (过去分词作状语)_F_a_c_e_d_w__it_h__p_h_e_n_o_m_e_n_o_n__/t_h_e_p_r_o_b_l_e_m_, we should take immediate measures, such as stopping cutting down trees, to better the environment.
(5)There are at least two good reasons accounting for. . . (6)There may be three factors which contribute to/account for/are responsible for this phenomenon. (7)The second reason is that. . . (8)Faced with phenomenon/these problems, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with. . . (9)It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon/these problems.
写作技巧点拨系列(八) 揣摩图画内涵, 从容掌控图画作文
【典例导练】 (2013·江苏高考)请根据你对右面两幅画的理解, 以“Actions
Speak Louder than Words”为题, 用英语写一篇作文。 你的作文应包括以下内容: 1. 简要描述两幅图的内容; 2. 概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解; 3. 举例说明两幅图对你的启示。
2. 我们的地球正受到严重的破坏。我们该怎么做，是说空话 还是采取切实可行的措施呢？ (一般表达)Our earth is suffering severe damage. What should we do, just have empty talk or take practical measures? (不定式作状语+高级词汇+定语从句)Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just _p_a_y_l_i_p_s_e_r_v_ic_e_or take practical measures _to_ _p_r_o_t_e_ct_ the earth _w_h_i_c_h__is_s_u_f_f_er_i_n_g_s_e_v_e_r_e_d_a_m__a_g_e_?
4. 适度联想发挥。图画作文一般要求做适度的联想发挥, 以使 上下文更好地衔接。但一定要根据图画做到合情合理。 5. 描写虚实结合。对图画中的内容分清主次, 详略得当。 6. 做好衔接过渡。在适度发挥的前提下, 注意连词的使用, 达 到浑然一体的效果。
【审题谋篇】信息全而不漏
【佳句锤炼】词句精而高级 1. 图画中的信息是“百说不如一干”。 (一般表达)The message in the pictures is “Actions speak louder than words. ” (主语从句和同位语从句)_W__h_a_t _th__e_p_i_c_tu_r_e_s_d_e_s_c_r_ib__e _v_iv_i_d_l_y_/c_o_n_v_e_y_is the message _th_a_t__“_A_c_t_io_n_s__sp_e_a_k__lo_u__d_e_r _th_a_n__w_o_r_d_s_._”_
4. 我们应该把书和体育用品捐给需要的儿童，而不是空喊 口号。 (一般表达)We should donate books and sports goods to children in need. We shouldn’t shout empty slogans. (it作形式主语+定语从句)Instead of shouting empty slogans, _it__is_m__o_r_e_m__e_a_n_in__g_fu_l_t_o_donate books and sports goods to children _w_h_o__n_e_ed__t_h_e_m_/_n_e_e_d_in__g_t_h_e_m_.
5. 我们应该严格自觉遵守交通规则，红灯停，而不是抱怨交 通拥堵。 (一般表达)We should strictly and voluntarily obey traffic rules. We should stop at the red light. We shouldn’t complain about traffic jams. (虚拟语气 +倒装)_It__is_h__ig_h__ti_m__e_t_h_a_t_w_e__s_h_o_u_ld_strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules and _u_n_d_e_r_n__o_c_i_rc_u_m__s_t_a_n_c_es_ _s_h_o_u_ld__w_e_just complain about traffic jams.
【写作指导】 Ⅰ. 常用句式
(1)What is illustrated/reflected in the picture is that. . . (2)What the picture describes vividly is a kind of common phenomenon that. . . (3)The picture vividly reflects a phenomenon where our society is in bad need of. . . (4)Seeing the picture, I can’t help thinking how ridiculous. . . is. However, what is reflected in the picture is not a rare phenomenon in modern society.
Ⅱ. 黄金模板 第一段: 描述图画 As is vividly shown in the picture, _图__画__的__内__容__. The picture tells us that_图__片__大__致__反__映__的__意__思__.
第二段: 解释、说明和分析图片 The implied meaning of the picture should be taken into account seriously. First/To begin with, _揭__示__涵__义__/原__因__/_结__果__1_, Second/What’s more, _揭__示__涵__义__/_原__因__/结__果__2_. Last but not least/Finally, _揭__示__涵__义__/原__因__/_结__果__3_(_如__果__有__的__话__) . And the social problem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon)has aroused the great concern/care of our whole society/world/ all the people.
第三段: 给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法
In my view/point of view(or As for me), we should take
some measures as follows to deal with the problems shown in the picture. First, we should_具__体__的__措__施__1_. And then we have to / must_具__体__的__措__施__2_. Only in these ways can we solve the problem of_具__体__的__问__题__.
【命题专家如是说】 图画类作文解题关键
图画类作文以图画和文字相结合的方式呈现内容要点, 其 难点在于如何将图画语言转化为逻辑语言。只有读懂图画所 蕴含的深刻道理, 才能有的放矢。需注意以下几点:
1. 仔细观察图画。图画中的每一个要素对表达图画的寓意都 有提示作用, 注意图画中每一个要素提供的信息。 2. 品味图画文字。图画配有的语言文字言简意赅, 认真思考这 些文字所隐含的观点, 使之成为弄清图画寓意的钥匙。 3. 挖掘深刻内涵。图画背后隐藏的深刻寓意才是图画要揭示 的真正主题。挖掘出图画的寓意是写作的关键。