表示建议性的英语作文

【习作欣赏与点评】
• 你叫陈瑞，家住广州。你的舅舅是一位英语老师，家住哈尔滨 (Harbin)。下周星期三你将要去舅舅家过年。你今天打电话想问一下 要做哪些准备，但是没人接电话。 所以你打算给舅舅写一封电子邮件。 请根据以下的内容要点写一封邮件。 内容要点：1. 简单谈一谈你的英语学习情况； 2. 询问去哈尔滨是要带什么，比如衣服等； 3. 到时候有没有人去火车站接你。 要求：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点。 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥； 分析：这是一篇提示性作文。要求写一封信，向舅舅简单介绍自己的 英语学习情况，并询问有关假期外出的相关问题。这是一封晚辈写给 长辈的信，所以语言要礼貌。 首先，表示问候，并说明写信的原由。其次再询问有关情况。写作时， 部分细节内容可适当发挥，以使短文意思连贯，结构完整。写作这篇 作文的重点应该放在询问信息上，要会使用“Could you tell me…?” 这类句式，做到有礼貌。最后，表示感谢期待尽快见面。
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【佳篇欣赏】A
Dear Henry, Thanks for your last e-mail! Thanks for telling me that Jay Chou is coming to our city next month. He is one of my favorite pop stars. I think he is really a great singer. He can play the piano very well. I especially like singers who can write their own songs. I won’t miss his concert near my home. Do you know when his concert is? I have to know the date, because my family is panning a trip to Suzhou next month. And could you please tell me where I can get the ticket in your next e-mail? Many thanks! Yours, Zhou Yu
【重点结构和句型展示】 A．原汁原味（课本重点结构和句型）
• 1. Excuse me. Do you know where I can buy some shampoo? • 2. Excuse me. Can you please tell me where I can buy a dictionary? • 3. Could you tell me how to get to the post office? • 4. Can you please tell me where I can get some magazines? 5. Could you please tell me if there are many good museums? • 6. Can you tell me where there is a good place to eat? • 7. Do you know if there are any public restrooms around here? 8. Excuse me, I wonder if you can help me. • 9. Go past the park, and turn left onto Oak Street. • 10. Take the escalator to the second floor and turn right.
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Philip：Excuse me. Could you please tell me how I can get to the Palace Museum? Li Ming：You can take No. 5 bus. The driver will tell you where to get off. Philip：Yes, but I'm driving my own car. Li Ming：Oh, then you drive along this street, turn right at the third crossroad, and then take the first left. Keep straight until you see a road sign that says "Palace Museum", and then you follow the sign. It will direct you to the Palace Museum. Philip：Drive along this street, turn right, turn left, keep straight, and then I'll see the road sign? Li Ming：That's right. Philip：Are you sure that I won't bump into any one-way streets? Li Ming：Well...I don't think you will. Philip：Thank you. Oh, by the way, how long will it take to get there? Li Ming：About half an hour. Philip：Thanks again. You've been very helpful. Li Ming：With pleasure.
精彩例句拓展
• • • • • • • • • • 1. Excuse me. Which is the way to the bookshop, please? 2. Excuse me, is this the way to the station? 3. Could you please do me a favor? 4. Could you tell me something about yourself？ 5. Would you tell me how much it costs to fly to Canada? 6. Will you tell me when we will have a meeting? 7. The teacher wondered why she was late. 8. Walk along/down this road, and take the first crossing on the right. 9. Go along this street, and turn right. 10. Walk on and turn left, and you will see the tall building on the right. • 11.Go along/down this street to the traffic lights, and turn left.
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December 15th
• Dear Jim, • I came to see you, but you were out. Tomorrow is David’s birthday. There is going to be a birthday party at his home tomorrow afternoon. Please come with us. • David’s home is not far away from yours. Go along the Dongfeng Road, and turn left at the first crossroad. Then go straight along the Guangming Road and go across the first crossing. You will find a library on your left. His home is just beside it. I will wait for you there at 3:30pm. Hope to see you at the party. • Mark
Unit 11 Could you please tell me where the restrooms are?
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• 【单元话题分析】 外出旅游不认识路，我们需要请教当地人。日常生活中，我们常常需 要他人获取一些信息。本单元谈论的主要话题就是礼貌地向他人询问 信息。 《英语课程标准》第五级目标要求学生能“有效地询问信息和请求帮 助”。本单元话题具有很强的实用性，也是历年各省、市地区 考试 的热点话题。它涉及的内容比较广泛，可以是问路和指路、询问天气 或时间、解决问题的办法、寻求帮助等。该话题贴近生活，是有效沟 通途径。要有效的获取信息，就必须注意说话的语气。因此，学会谈 论本单元话题非常重要。 该话题的命题形式有多样，通常采用 “Guided writing”形式，有 中、英文提示的形式，有图画、图表形式等。通常采用书信、留言条、 对话等作文形式，写该话题时要注意文体。 写作时要重点突出，注意突出重点内，记住像“Could you please tell me…?”一类的句式，达到熟悉这些地道的句子结构，对写作很 有好处。
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【解题技巧】
• 1. 本单元话题的看图作文常涉及到问路和指路。首先，要看 清图画，结合文字提示，了解图片所要传达的信息。根据线路 图示编写对话或指路的时候，要明确问路人现处地点及其目的 地和所要经过的路线。然后，利用所学的相关句型，根据题目 要求编写对话或者指路。 • 2. 写作书信时，一般不会只要求询问信息，还要交代其他一 些信息。写作这类提示性作文时，首先要注意书信的格式，不 要忘记开头和结尾的客套话。其次，这类作文的重点会偏向于 询问信息，我们在写作时一般先写其他内容，把重点放在最后。 遣词造句要符合题目要求、自己熟悉的和有把握的句型，尽量 采用多种句型结构和词汇，使作文语言更加丰富。必要时作适 当的发挥会使作文语段连贯自然。 • 3. 留言条也是本单元话题常使用的写作形式。便条是一种简 单的书信。格式和书信基本相近。时间写在右上角，称呼中的 dear可用可不用，结尾一般省略客套语、祝福的话，署名时甚 至省略yours sincerely等词语，语言更接近口语
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习作一
• Dear Uncle, • How are you? I telephoned you just now, but you were out. So I write the e-mail. • School’s out for the winter holiday now. I didn’t do well in English this term. I got only 85. I found it difficult to memorize the new words. And the grammar rules are also not so easy to understand. I feel worried. Could you please tell me how I can do better in English? • I am leaving for Harbin next Wednesday. It’s very cold there. Can you tell me what clothes I should take? • Because this is the first time I go to another city far away from my home, I feel anxious. Will you meet me at the railway station? • Thank you! • I am looking forward to seeing you soon. • Yours, • Chen Rui