高考英语复习专项练习读后续写10篇

高考英语复习专项练习读后续写10篇
高考英语复习专项练习读后续写10篇

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There was a young woman who took great pride in the flowers in her garden.She had been raised by her grandmother who taught her to love and care for flowers as she herself had done.So, her flower garden was second to none.Her neighbors showed great admiration for her handiness.

One day while looking through a flower catalogue,a picture of a plant immediately caught her eye.She had never seen blooms on a flower like that before.“I have to have it,” she said to herself,and she immediately ordered it.

When it arrived,she already had a place prepared to plant it.She planted it near the base of a stone wall in her yard.It grew vigorously(茁壮地),with beautiful green leaves all over it,but there were no blooms.Part of it even extended to the backyard of her neighbor's through the wall.She thought her neighbor would complain about the vine(藤).Day after day she continued to take care of it,water it,feed it,and she even talked to it attempting to coax (哄) it to bloom.But,it was in vain.

One morning weeks later,as she stood before the vine,she thought how disappointed she was that her plant had not bloomed.She was giving considerable thought to cutting it down and planting something else in its place.

It was at this point that her neighbor called round.“Thank you so much! You can't imagine how much I have enjoyed the blooms of that vine you planted.” The young woman walked through the gate into her neighbor's yard.She was surprised.Led by her neighbor,she saw that on the other side of the wall the vine was covered with blooms.

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There were indeed the most beautiful blooms she had ever seen.The vine had run through the cracks of the wall.It had not flowered on her side of the wall;it had flowered richly on the other side.She was not cheated.The flowers were as beautiful as the picture had shown.Her patient effort on this plant finally paid off.Although the blooms were not in her yard,she was satisfied.She started to understand that the green leaves and the long vine just mean the blooms.

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Not seeing the good result of your labor does not mean your work is effectless. The woman is not alone.Many people have made such a

mistake.They take it for granted that seeing is believing—if they can't see the result of their labor,they will say their labor is not effective as expected and they will feel disappointed.The story tells us that we should be optimistic about our work.

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Mrs_Thompson,an elementary teacher told the children a lie,as she stood in front of her 5th grade class on the very first day of school.Like most teachers,she looked at her students and said that she loved them all the same.But that was impossible,because there was a little boy named Teddy,who didn't play well with the other children,whose clothes were messy and who constantly needed a bath.And Teddy could be unpleasant.

At the school where Mrs Thompson taught,she was required to review each child's past records and she put Teddy's off until last.However,when she reviewed his file,she was in for a surprise.

Teddy's first grade teacher wrote,“Teddy is a bright_child with a ready laugh.He does his homework neatly and has good manners...he is a joy to be around.”

His second grade teacher wrote,“Teddy is an excellent_student,well liked by his classmates,but he is troubled because his mother has a terminal illness and his life at home must be a struggle.”

His third grade teacher wrote,“His mother's death has been hard on him.He tries to do his best but his father doesn't show much interest and his home life will soon affect him if some steps aren't taken.”

Teddy's fourth grade teacher wrote,“Teddy is withdrawn and doesn't show much interest in school.He doesn't have many friends and sometimes

sleeps in class.”

By now,Mrs Thompson realized the problem and she was ashamed of herself.She felt even worse when her students brought her Christmas presents,wrapped in beautiful ribbons and bright paper,except for Teddy's.His present was clumsily wrapped in the heavy,brown paper that he got from a grocery bag.

Mrs Thompson took pains to open it in the middle of the other

presents.Some of the children started to laugh when she found a rhinestone (莱茵石,一种假钻石) bracelet with some of the stones missing and a bottle that was one quarter full of perfume. She stopped the children's laughter when she exclaimed how pretty the bracelet was,putting it on,and spraying some of the perfume on her wrist.

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2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

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That day after school,Mrs Thompson went back to her office and found a note under the door,from Teddy,in which Teddy showed his apology for not giving her a decent present because he had no money with him.In addition,he

really appreciated it that she helped him out when other students laughed at him.In his note,he especially mentioned the present.The bracelet and the perfume were what his mother once used. He always kept them for they had his mother's smell.And he was very glad that she smelled just like his mother used to.When Mrs Thompson finished reading the note,she couldn't help crying.

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Mrs Thompson paid particular attention to Teddy.She knew this child needed a mother's care.From that day on,she acted like a mother,no matter when Teddy had a problem.Her care and love inspired the child's determination to learn and the kindness to make friends.Teddy once again turned back to be a sunny boy and by the end of the term,he became one of the most

excellent_students in his class.

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Carl was a quiet man.He didn't talk much.He would always greet you with a big smile and a firm handshake.Even after living in our neighborhood for over

50 years,no one could really say they knew him very well.

After retirement,he volunteered to take care of the church garden.One day,he was just finishing his watering for the day when three gang members approached him. Ignoring their attempt to attack him,he simply asked,“Would

you like a drink from the hose(水管)?”

The tallest and toughest-looking of the three said,“Yeah,sure,” with a malevolent(恶意的) little smile.As Carl offered the hose to him,the other two grabbed Carl's arm,throwing him down.They robbed him of his retirement watch and his wallet,and then fled.

Although the minister of the church had witnessed the attack from his window,he couldn't get there fast enough to stop it.“Carl,are you okay? Are you hurt?” the minister kept asking as he helped Carl to his feet.

“Just some naughty kids.I hope they'll wise up someday,” Carl said.He bent to pick up the hose.He adjusted the nozzle again and started to water.

A few weeks later the three returned.Carl again offered them a drink from his hose.This time they didn't rob him.They wrenched the hose from his hand and wetted him from head to foot with the icy water.When they had finished their bullying him,they went down the street,laughing at what they had just done.

Carl just watched them.Then he picked up his hose,and went on with his watering.

A few days later,as Carl was working in the garden,he saw the tall leader of the attackers reaching down for him.He prepared himself for the expected attack.“Don't worry,old man,I'm not gonna hurt you this time.” The young man spoke softly and pulled a bag from his pocket and handed it to Carl.“It's your stuff back.Even the money in your wallet.”

The man shifted his feet,seeming embarrassed.“I learned something from you,” he said.“I r an with that gang and hurt people like you.Every time we came

and did something to you,instead of yelling and fighting back,you tried to give us a drink.You didn't hate us for hating you.You kept showing love against our hate.”

注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Carl died one cold day after Christmas that winter.Many people attended his funeral in spite of the weather.In particular the minister noticed a tall young man who he didn't know sitting quietly in a distant corner of the church.The following spring a notice was put up.It read,“Person needed to care for Carl's garden.” One day a knock was heard at the minister's office door.

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Opening the door, the minister saw a familiar young man holding the notice.“I believe this is my job,if you'll have me,” the young man said.The minister recognized him as the same young man who had returned the watch and wallet to Carl.He knew that Carl's kindness had turned this man's life

around.As the minister handed him the keys to the garden shed,he said,“Yes,go and take care of Carl's garden and honor him.”

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I remember my first Christmas adventure with Grandma.I was just a kid.

I went to town on my bike to visit her on the day when my big sister told me,“There is no Santa Claus,and even dummies know that!”

My grandma always told the truth,always.I fled to her that day because I knew she would stand on my side.

Hearing my story,Grandma was ready for me.“No Santa Claus?” she snorted.“Ridiculous! Don't believe it.Such rumors have been going around for years,and it makes me mad,plain mad!Now,put on your coat,and let's go.”

“Go? Go where,Grandma?” I asked.We drove to Kerby's General Store.As we walked through its doors,Grandma handed me ten dollars.That was a bundle in those days.“Take the money”,she said,“and buy something for someone who needs it.” Then she went away and waited in the car.

I was only eight years old.I'd often gone shopping with my mother,but never had I shopped for anything all by myself.The store seemed big and crowded,full of people scrambling(抢夺) to finish their Christmas shopping.

For a few moments I just stood there,confused,holding that ten-dollar bill,

wondering what to buy and who on earth to buy it for.Then I suddenly thought of Bobby Decker.He was a kid with bad breath and messy hair.Bobby Decker didn't have a coat.I knew that because he never went out to play during the winter.His mother always wrote a note,telling the teacher that he had a cough,but all we kids knew that Bobby Decker didn't have a cough; he didn't have a good coat.Yes,I would buy Bobby Decker a coat!

My eyes were fixed on a red coat which looked real warm and he would like that.

“Is this a Christmas present for someone?” the lady behind the counter asked kindly,as I laid my ten dollars down.“Yes,Ma'am,” I replied shyly.“It's for Bobby.”

注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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That evening,Grandma helped me wrap the coat in Christmas paper and ribbons.Grandma drove me through the crowded street and finally we arrived at Bobby Decker's home.Grandma told me to knock at the door.I laid down the present,knocked at the door three times and quickly ran away to hide behind

the tree nearby.Soon Bobby Decker came out,looking around. He found the present and happily took it home.

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Fifty years hasn't reduced the excitement of those moments.I still remember holding my breath when seeing Bobby Decker came out to pick up his present.We waited until he went back.It was not until then that I realized that Santa Claus was among us.He did exist.It was ridiculous to think there was no Santa Claus in the world.I often tell this story to my children,telling them Santa visits us during Christmas time,when people should show kindness to others.

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Funny how you can always tell when somebody's laughing behind your back. Jodie hadn't really heard anything,maybe a whisper,but when she turned around,the girls in the back row of the class were looking at her,trying to hide smiles and laughs. She looked back at her teacher.Mr_Swales was talking about what people do all day. He also wanted to find out what his students wanted to be when they grew up.He called on Billy Mitzer first.

“My daddy works in a bank, ” Billy Mitzer said.“I guess I want to work in a bank too.There's lots of money in the bank.”

“My parents have a grocery store, ” Emmy DiSalvo said.“Papa's behind the counter and Mama keeps the cash register.But I want to be an airline pilot.”

Jodie liked it when Mr Swales asked them questions like this.He was about to call on Jodie when the girls in the back row burst out laughing.

Shirley Danes yelled,“Jodie's daddy is a_garbage_man!”

Everybody in the class laughed out loud.Everybody except Jodie,that is.She felt her face turn bright red.She looked around the whole

classroom.Everyone was laughing. Some kids were even holding their noses.

Jodie looked at Mr Swales.He was angry.He almost never raised his voice,but now he did.

“Silence! I want everybody to quiet down this instant.”

The laughter stopped immediately.The sound of cars and people going by out on the street came through the windows.“You should be ashamed of yourselves,” Mr Swales said.“Being a garbage man...I mean,is a difficult and enormously useful job.We should all be grateful to Mr Harris.Where would we be without him? Up to our ears in garbage,that's where.How would you like that?”

“It's not funny,” Mr Swales went on.“Garbage is a serious matter.I think you all owe Jodie an_apology.And after that,you're all going to write Jodie's father,Mr_Harris,a nice letter to tell him how much you appreciate what he does for all of us,in other words,keeping our city clean.”

注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Everyone said“Sorry,Jodie” but Jodie could tell they didn't really mean it.Jodie also knew nobody wanted to write her father a letter.Her face was burning red and she felt like crying.Mr_Swales came to her desk and patted her shoulder.“Let's go out in the hall while everyone's writing those letters so we can have a private talk.”Jodie started crying out in the hall.“I'm sorry this happened,” Mr Swales said.“But remember,hard work done well is something to be proud of.”

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Jodie's father came to walk her home from school as usual. She didn't run up to him the way she always did.When they were up in their home,Jodie went to her little room and cried for a good long time before she did her homework.Mr_Harris came into her room.“What happened,Jodie? Why are you so sad?” Jodie told her father what had happened and looked at him.He didn't seem angry or hurt.He laughed and said,“Although my work seems to be a humble one,my devotion to the job will be everlasting.”

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I was in sunny California.The past two months I had been sick,sleepless,forgetful,a little mad and a little sad.I had been busy reading and learning all I could about stopping smoking.I changed routines that led me to smoke again.I was trying my hardest to practice positive thinking until it would come naturally.Basically,I was making quitting smoking my job!

I thought it took the first two months for what was in my head to get to my heart.I walked and walked and breathed in the beautiful air.I began to notice I could smell and taste again.My hair and skin looked better...everything was improving.The best change I noticed was that I was beginning to feel “free” and I was loving it.

My friend May came to Nashville to visit her daughters.When she arrived,she was sick with what we thought was a chest cold.In a matter of days,she had seen the doctors,had a diagnosis and was getting ready for the fight of her life...she had lung cancer.

I sat with May and her daughters after their first-day treatment at the Sarah Cannon Cancer Center.They told me the worst part of the whole day was neither having to hurry up and wait to see doctor after doctor nor putting up with the chemo and radiation(放化疗),but having to answer the question,“Did you smoke and for how long” over and over again at each stop.

Christmas fell and it was my first smoke-free holiday in 37 years.I was

engaged in shopping,planning,cooking,wrapping.However,the stress,the tiredness of overdoing,and the physical and mental exhaustion(疲劳) of dealing with my quit exploded(爆发) on Christmas Day! I was going to my mother's house,which was about an hour's ride away.I wanted to drive myself in my own car.Once in the car and driving down I-24,I had this thought:I could smoke and nobody would know.I pulled off the exit and went through my purse looking for money.

注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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All of a sudden,the non-smoking slogans ran through my brain;the information in red ran through my brain; my own promise of quitting_smoking ran through my head.I began to cry.I am crying now thinking about what I believe was a decisive moment in my quit.I am proud to have been strong in self-control.It was determination that helped rid myself of the smoking habit.

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Thanks to the quit,I am able to extend the confidence to other areas of my life.This past year has been an experience of contrast,up and down,happy and sad,scared and brave,but in the end,I survived the most life-changing year.It was frightening to change something that had been a part of my life for most of my life,but it was worth every uncomfortable moment!

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Fisherman Salvador was just trying to make a living on the sea with fellow fisherman Cordoba.Two days into the journey,disaster struck,and the two men would begin the greatest challenge of their lives.

The boat was loaded with tons of provisions,including 70 gallons of gasoline,16 gallons of water,50 lbs of sardines for bait(鱼饵).They also had a mobile phone,kept safe in a plastic bag,a GPS,and a two-way radio.The two had never spoken before or worked together,but they liked fishing and both of them seemed to know what they were doing.

Two days later,the weather was getting worse and worse.Salvador was trying to remain calm,but Cordoba was not prepared.He held on to the rail(围栏) for dear life as the waves crashed around them,vomiting and crying.When the storm finally passed,Salvador could finally see in front of him; he noticed that they had drifted far away from land.To make matters worse,the motor had stopped working.Salvador called his boss on the radio,but there was no response.Even worse was the fact that the GPS they had brought with them

had stopped working.

The two men had been at sea for two months.While Salvador had become accustomed to catching and eating the animals available to them,Cordoba's mental health and physical health had begun to decline.Once he got sick from eating raw seabirds,he refused to eat at all.His own depression,fear and malnutrition finally killed him,leaving Salvador alone on the boat.

One day,after a terrible storm,Salvador found the sky was suddenly filled with shorebirds.He knew that he was heading for land at last.He must have been close.There,in the distance was a green Pacific atoll(环礁).It looked small and wild,but it was dry land and would likely have food and shelter.

注意:

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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The skinny fisherman struggled until he reached what appeared to be a beach house.This was a fisherman's home.Seeing a weak man walking unsteadily from the sea,the fisherman and his wife rushed out to him and welcomed him into their home.They had never saw anyone so weak and hungry.They were surprised that Salvador remained awake and managed to

ask for a doctor before losing consciousness.

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Salvador was rescued.Despite suffering unimaginable hardships,Salvador had survived his journey.He had spent 438 days lost at sea.Soon enough,he was on his way back home to El Salvador,where he was finally reunited with his family.Of course,he made time to visit Cordoba's mother to tell her the news of her son's death.They shed tears for the loss of her son.

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Once upon a time there lived a stone cutter who was dissatisfied with his life.One day,on his way to work,he passed by a beautiful house.It belonged to a rich merchant.

From where he stood,he saw fine possessions,honorable guests,and plenty of workers and servants all set to work.He became envious and deeply wished to have everything the wealthy and powerful merchant did.

Suddenly,the stone cutter changed into the merchant taking over his mind and body.He was aware of the merchant's innermost feelings,thoughts and memories.He felt the joy of owning all the luxuries in the world.He knew the pleasure of holding such a respectable position in the society.Many honored

him.

After a few days of enjoying the merchant's life,he saw a king being carried in a luxurious chair accompanied by attendants,soldiers and

servants.Everyone,despite of their power and wealth,was forced to bow before this figure that was worshiped as God.

After seeing this,he realized he had been mistaken about the merchant's power and status.In a split second,he moved into the body of the king,mighty and fearless. Then he knew what it felt like to be praised and glorified by the entire kingdom,to hold the power to pardon or take a man's life and what it was like to be respected by kings from other lands.

One day,on a hot summer noon,he was extremely uneasy.His overweight body made the heat even more intolerable.He looked up at the sun and thought about how it was absolutely unaffected by his presence.He then swiftly became the sun,shining with glory,the source of life and strength of every living creature on the planet.

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1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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He continued to radiate until a massive storm cloud gathered below him blocking his rays.The storm cloud then burst into pouring rain.Seeing this,he became the cloud.He felt the incredible power of its existence as it could flood everything that it wished to.Not too late did he realize that the entire root of his power was yet another force—wind.The strength of the rain was not worth mentioning without the wind.And so he became it,blowing off the roofs of houses,and uprooting trees and everything else that came in its way.

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There was yet another force that faded the wind's ego—a huge towering rock.The wind would low against it with a speed and force of the ultimate strength.The rock would stand still and unmoved.He then became it,a solid,dense,immortal and powerful substance on earth.After a while,he heard a familiar sound,which was heard when a rock was stricken by a set of tools.He then felt himself being cut, and reformed. He looked down at the artist,the figure of a stone cutter! He then became a stone cutter again.

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The sea's surprise

Jim and Andy walked along the beach,looking for an adventure.They joked

that some day they would find a talking fish or a mermaid or a bottle with a treasure map inside.So far they had only found shells and rocks and seaweed.Today though was different.The boys felt excited.

Sea crabs scampered on the rocks.Up one side and down the other.They were quick and lively.The tide didn't seem to ever wash them away.Then Jim saw a fish.It was stranded on the beach,just flopping around.

“Can it talk?” Andy asked.

“It looks like any othe r fish,” Jim said.He picked it up gently and carried it to the water.

“Do you think it will grant us any wishes?” Andy laughed.

The boys watched as the silver fish sped off through the

water.“Nope.Maybe next time.” Jim grinned.

As the two friends walked farther down the beach they came upon a bottle.It was green with a cork in the mouth.

“Our luck will change.Does it have a map inside or a genie?” joked Andy.

Andy reached down and picked up the bottle.He rubbed it.Nothing happened.He pulled on the cork.Nothing happened.He shook it.Nothing happened.

“Try the cork again.I bet the genie is waiting for us to release him.Or we'll find a treasure map and have a real adventure,” Jim exclaimed.

Andy tugged again on the cork.He wiggled it back and forth.He twisted it around and around.Finally it popped out without breaking.Andy shook the bottle.Nothing came out.Looking inside he couldn't see anything.Jim also

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