雅思8分万能作文

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《雅思8分万能作文》,大连理工大学出版社2005年出版,©Alannah Fitzgerald,张成思编著 原书第四部分:writing task 2 范文临摹及讲解

范文部分:1-30

The world can be changed by man's endeavor, and that this endeavor can lead to something new and better .No man can sever the bonds that unite him to his society simply by averting his eyes. He must ever be receptive and sensitive to the new; and have sufficient courage and skill to novel facts and to deal with them .

---Franklin Roosevelt , American President

美国总统罗斯是这样说的。确实,人经过努力可以改变世界,这种努力可以使人类达到新的、更美好的境界。没有人仅凭闭上眼睛、不看社会现实就能割断自己与社会的联系。必须敏感,随时准备接受新鲜事物;他必须有勇气与能力去面对新的事实,解决新问题。对于我们,在模仿范文的过程中,要学会举一反三,以不变应万变,活学活用万能句子和星际词汇,真正的你的写作再上一个台阶!

说明:本部分的星级词汇以粗体字给出,而万能句子加划了横线。每篇范文都先给出【题目分析】,然后是星级【词汇解析】,最好给出雅思作文7分必备的经典句子,也就是我们所称的【万能句子】。首先,【题目分析】一项主要是帮助大家读懂题目,并简要地概括一下范文的布局谋篇。这一项可以有效地帮助大家背诵范文,并增强大家对范文“结构模式”的清晰认识。同时这一项就是帮助大家灵活记忆范文模板的功能!其次,这里给出的星级词汇都是在雅思考试里用来提高分数的“高档次”词汇。最后,万能句子更是大家快速提高雅思作文分数的一个途径。这里的文章是Alannah精心写就的。分析部分由张成思完成。中外教师的完美合作。每篇文章都是经典中的经典,大家一定要用心体会,认真背诵。在考试里,定会下笔有神!

另外一点,如果你发现给出的星级词汇对你来说象是在读雅思阅读理解文章的难词,我们建议大家花时间背诵一下本书的姊妹篇《雅思同义词及解析词典》。这样,词汇和写作功力共同提升。才能最终达到阅读和写作共同提高的目标!

【1】Environmental hazards are often too great for particular countries or individuals to tackle. We have arrived at a point in time where the only way to lessen environmental problems is at an international level.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environmental problems have reached such proportions that people feel international organizations must be set to up to intervene in world affairs to resolve these problems. Whether this will resolve the problem is very unlikely as international organizations are just an extension of human behavior. That is, if human conflicts cannot be resolved at home, then they are unlikely to be resolved at the international level. Nevertheless, international organizations do attract attention to the growing problem of pollution and the destruction of the environment. However, although I respect the aims of the international community to resolve the issue of environmental pollution and support their cause, I do not believe it is the best or only way to protect the environment; in fact, it is only a small part of what is needed in a global initiative.

All world problems, whether it is environmental pollution, war, energy insufficiency, or famine, arise from the abusive behavior of all individuals. Therefore, the solution to all these problems is the need for a collective consciousness. What is meant by this is that each individual must be aware of the impact he or she has on the world and their unique part to play in this world. After all, if one is happy with his life, he will surely not endeavor to harm the environment or anyone else. His behavior will be that of a responsible individual.

What is needed, therefore, is education. Education is the key to all problems and it starts from pregnancy all the way to adulthood and beyond. Furthermore, education means that children all over the world should be allowed to go to schools with good teachers and where teaching materials and methods can be adapted to each individual. Education means

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