高考考前30天三轮专题提分必练绝密之四十

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

(一)Lately in the afternoon，the boys put up their tent in the middle of a field. As soon as this was done it，they had cooked a meal over an open fire. They were all hungry and the food smelt well. After a wonderful meal，they said stories and sang songs by the camp fire. But some times later it began to rain. The boys felt tired so they put out the fire and crept into his tent. Their sleep-bags warm and comfortable，so they all slept soundly. At the middle of the night，one of the boys woke up or began shouting. The tent had been flooded!(二)My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He did not want share things with other people. For example，when he bought a chocolate cake，he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find. Then he ate it a ll by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is，a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something he did made people angrily. For instance，on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the mornin g. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework，helps mum with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.(三)It was very fine when I got up on last Sunday morning. So I decided to go for a walk and took some photos in the beautiful country. After the breakfast，I carried my camera with me and set off. Everything went smooth. I enjoyed my trip so much that I didn’t realize the weather has turned bad.I began to run and it was too late. I was caught by the rain and was wet through. I kept on running until I got to a bus stop. I stood there waited a long time for the bus shivering(颤抖) in cold. Shortly after I got home，I had high fever，which made me stay in bed for a whole week!(一) Lately Latein the afternoon ，the boys put up their tent in the middle of a field. As soon as this was done it ，they had cooked a meal over an open fire. They were all hungry and the food smelt well good . After a wonderful meal ，they said told stories and sang songs by the camp fire. But some times time later it began to rain. The boys felt tired so they put out the fire and crept into his theirtent. Their sleep-bags ∧were warm and comfortable ，so they all slept soundly. At Inthe middle of the night ，one of the boys woke up or and began shouting. The tent had been flooded!1. Lately →Late 。

lately 意思是“最近”，而late 意思是“晚的”。

2. 去掉it 。

3. 去掉had 。

当某时段的一系列动作相继发生时，动词时态应保持一致(即均为一般过去时)。

4. well → good 。

sound, look, seem, feel ，smell 等连系动词后接形容词作表语。

5. said → told 。

tell stories, “讲故事”。

6. times → time 。

some time, “一段时间”。

7. his → their 。

their 与句子的主语相呼应。

8. warm 前加were 。

原句缺少谓语动词。

9. At → In 。

in the middle of 为固定搭配。

10. or → and 。

由语境可知，这里表示顺承关系。

(二)My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He did not want ∧toshare things with other people. For example ，when he bought a chocolate cake ，he put them itin a secret place where which/that 或去掉where I couldn’t find. Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other others . He said he is wasbusy. That is ，a game of tennis making made him very busy. He did not care if something he didmade people angrily angry . For instance ，onone night he played strong and loudly loudmusic till four o’clock in the morning. But he is difference different now. He often helps grandma with housework ，helps mum with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.1. want 后加to 。

want to do sth ，固定搭配，“想做某事”。

2. them → it 。

依据前后文，前句说的是a chocolate cake ，可数名词单数，后边的代词显然应用it 而不是them 。

3. where → which/that 或去掉where 。

此为定语从句，修饰先行词place ，place 在定语从句中作find 的宾语。

故用关系代词which/that 或省略where 。

4. other → others 。

不定代词other 指另一个，而others 指另一些，此处应指别人。

又如：Some of the students are sweeping the floor and others are cleaning the desks.一些学生在扫地，其他一些学生在擦桌子。

5. busy 前的is → was 。

此题考查动词的时态。

Hs said he was busy.一句中，主句是一般过去时，从句中的谓语部分，应用一般过去时。

6. making → made 。

本句缺少谓语，需要把现在分词making 改为make 的一般过去式形式made 。

7. angrily →angry 。

此处形容词作宾补。

8. 去掉on 。

one night 一天夜里(时间状语)，其前介词on 不需要。

9. loudly → loud 。

loudly 是副词修饰动词，如：Speak loudly. 大声说。

此处修饰名词music, 应用形容词。

10. difference → different 。

把此处的名词形式改为形容词形式different ，形容词与系动词一起构成系表结构。

(三)It was very fine when I got up on last Sunday morning. So I decided to go for a walk and took take some photos in the beautiful country. After the breakfast ，I carried my camera with me and set off.Everything went smoothsmoothly . I enjoyed my trip so much that I didn’t realize the weather hashadturnedbad. I began to run andbut it was too late. I was caught byinthe rain and was wet through. I kept onrunning until I got to a bus stop. I stood there waitedwaiting a long time for the bus shivering(颤抖) inwithcold. Shortly after I got home，I had ∧ahigh fever，which made me stay in bed for a whole week!1. 去掉up后的on。